Heya! This is my first AkuRoku poem that I'm putting on fan fiction. Hope you like! (I personally like the title)
I Watched Him Die Through Opaque Eyes
The white swirls form around me,
Or rather my own other,
A red haired someone saves me,
I didn't know he was my lover.
The fight seems blurred and indistinct,
But autopilot's on,
The man named Axel's weakened,
I don't know how he keeps going along.
I think the fight is over,
No whiteness to be seen,
But then the air is twisted,
And him and me feel as we're going to scream.
But Axel gives a knowing smirk,
Says that I should see,
He starts to gather flames,
But it's all red blurs to me.
There's the sound of them dying,
Something black's on the ground,
It's Axel fading, from the world,
Yet from his lips there is no sound.
I fling my other towards him,
As black wisps fill the air,
For some reason, Sora cries,
I know he feels that his heart's going to tear.
He raises his hand to Sora's cheek,
And whispers something I know,
It's our song I know it,
This is how it goes.
Though our hearts are gone,
We still carry on,
We've got each other that is true,
No emptiness can stop me loving you.
Sora smiles and puts his hand to Axel's,
I wish that I could too,
As the tears fall down my other's face,
I remember our love so true.
So there we were,
All lost inside,
I watched him die,
Through opaque eyes.
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I thought that was quite good myself! Though the flow got cut off in some places, I thought the end was cool. But It's not what I think is it? It's up to you. Please review what you think!!! Later xxx