Heeey! It's Youko-chaaan! I've rewritten this story basically, because….it was just baad! Well anyway here's the re-do!!!!...REDO!


Harry closed his eyes and fell into a deep sleep. He was in a cell, an Azkaban cell. He had been put there when Dumbledore found him studying the dark arts. Ron and Hermione had been spying on him and feeding information and soon Dumbledore saw fit to tell every one he was going dark and should be put behind bars.

Dumbledore had snapped his wand in half and didn't notice that the wand was old; Harry had gotten a new wand from the black market that had no tracking spells or any other spell other than the one he cast himself, a polishing charm.

He didn't have any happy thoughts for the Dementors to feed on so he was able to keep his sanity even though he had been in there for a little more than three years.

His hair had grown down past his thighs and now would have pooled around him in silky locks, but it was dirty, caked in blood and grime. He could only use his magic slowly throughout the years, and when he used it, it caused his appearance to began changing. Little by little his hair turn silver though it was still black at the roots, his eyes' pupils shifted so that they were slits and slanted diagonally, his top and bottom K's longer and sharper, and his skin was turning pale from not seeing the sun, but Harry had his magic run heat waves every now ant then so that it was just pale but not so much that you could sort of see the veins; sickly, but his skin looked more like porcelain. That is, if anyone could see past the blood and dirt.

Harry woke up a little while after he had fallen asleep by the gates of his cell creaking open. "Potter, you got visitors." Said a gruff voice and three people came in. Harry had to squint since his glasses had broken long ago.

He saw a flash of red hair and a silver beard and bushy hair. They were Dumbledore, Ron, and Hermione. He just put his head in-between his knees again praying they would go away.

By the light they couldn't see his changes so they weren't alarmed. "Mr. Potter, we've decided that you won't want to experience this any longer and become dark so we're going to set you free." Dumbledore said.

"No thanks." Harry said in an impassive voice. Dumbledore looked taken aback. "I'll stay here, it's rather homey, and I believe there is no one here to betray me like there are outside of this cell." He raised his head and looked strait into Dumbledore's eyes despite his bad eyesight, he made a mental note that that was the next thing to fix.

He felt something probing into his mind and pushed it out with ease. "Uh uh ah, bad move Albus." He said creepily. "And besides, it's not like I ever wanted to become dark in the first place." He said with a shrug.

"Are you…serious?" Harry heard Ron mutter. He turned his head to look at Ron and Hermione. He stood and walked over to them, but couldn't get near them for the chains that were clasped around his ankles, wrists and neck prevented him. But now he was in the dim light and it seems to act more like a spot light.

Hermione gasped as she looked deeply into Harry's transformed eyes; she saw the sadness in them as he looked down at his wrists and touched his metal collar. He looked back up to her with his eyes pleading.

"Don't give in to that…monster." Ron said putting his hand on Hermione's shoulder. She looked back at Harry to see the deep hurt in his eyes. She slapped Ron's hand away and took a step toward Harry before running into his open arms.

She sobbed at she felt Harry wrap his arms around her and they were heavy with the irons, her hands wandered to feel slight bumps on his back. She slipped her hands under his stiff shirt drawing a sharp intake of breath from Harry and she felt around.

There were large long scars that stretched across his back. She wept even harder when she felt the dry cracked blood and grime. She then went up to his shoulder blades and felt his body was malnourished, almost skin and bones. Hermione shook with grief as she took her hands from his shirt.

Harry shushed her when she tried to apologize for he didn't need words he had already forgiven her knowing it wasn't her fault. He held her close and nuzzled her cheek. He lifted his head to meet eyes with Ron and he winked, only to make Ron mad, he didn't mean it, he regretted it. But Ron roared with fury and punched him in the jaw. Harry flew back and hit his head hard on the wall. Hermione cried out and ran to him; lifting his thin limp body and saw his temple was bleeding, his chin already bruising.

She spun her head around to glare at Ron and Dumbledore. "Get him out of here." She ordered her voice was low and shook with anger. She touched Harry's cheek and he moaned opening his eyes. "Come on, I'm going to get you out of here." She whispered and helped him to his feet, swinging his arm around her shoulders and another man began to take the cuffs off when Harry backed away and then let his magic lash out and slice the chains on his wrists and ankles. The neck chain was much thicker and laced with spells. Harry's magic crackled in his hand as he held the chain and it melted, landing on the floor in a mass of melted metal.

"Reminders…" He murmured trailing off, and Hermione nodded knowing that this was no longer the Harry she knew, he would do what he wanted with or without her consent. She helped him out and down the corridors, and outside. Harry sighed as the cold spray and wind of the sea struck his body, and breathed in the fresh air. They got into the two person boat, while leaving Dumbledore and Ron to get in the other.

They went back to the main land and Hermione helped him to his house, the one he had gotten not much before he was put into jail. It was one of the Potter estates that only the order and he knew about it but he put strong wards and spells, enchantments, barriers and other kinds of protection.' Dumbledore and Ron followed but the large double doors slammed in their faces.

"We must hurry." She said as she activated the protective shields and spells. She helped him to his room and put him on his bed. "I was flipping through one of your books and found a spell that will help us to get out of here." She said. "It summons a portal to a new world." She explained. Harry nodded weakly before falling into a deep sleep. Hermione watched down at him from her chair fondly. She would have made him take a bath for he terribly needed it but she knew it would be futile, he needed rest. She applied a cream to the bruise before sitting on the sofa. She watched him for a few minutes before dozing off into a deep sleep.

The next day Harry woke to see Hermione sleeping peacefully next to him in a sofa. He got up silently walked over to the bathroom and slipped his jail clothes off and turned the water on. Once it was hot he got in and his tense muscles relaxed as the water flowed over him and he poured some scents and it washed over him.

He slowly dipped his head into the water and hissed as the cut in his head from the day before was cleaned out. Then he got some island scented shampoo and began to scrub his scalp and then the tips, he rinsed and used island conditioner and let that sit before rinsing that as well.

He soaked for a little while longer before getting out and drying himself off. He poked his head out to see Hermione was still fast asleep. He darted across the room with a towel around his waist and grabbed his favorite clothes before dashing back into the bathroom.

Summoning a bundle of medical supplies, Harry began to apply healing ointment to his back and arms, then wrapped himself in neat bandages before tying them tight.

He magically dried his hair and let it flow around his shoulders. He wore long pants that were a deep blue, his shirt was black with a blue Egyptian eye on the chest, and he put on a blue vest with a high neck and left it open, black fingerless gloves, black shoes, and a pair of blue flying goggles and put them on his head like a headband. Looking in the mirror he saw that his new metal collar was clean. It saddened him as he continued to stare at his reminders, they were heavy, but they were serving their purpose. Harry blinked and jutted his chin out, there was no bruise…he smiled gently Hermione.

He got out and gently woke Hermione up. She swatted his hand away but he continued to shake her shoulders lightly. Finally she opened her eyes and saw Harry and practically leaped up and tackled him in a hug.

"Oh Harry, I thought it was all a dream but you're really here!" she cried. Harry chuckled but then there was a large crash causing the room to shudder.

"Someone's trying to get in." Harry murmured. He went to the book case and took out a book and the shelves switched around and a large computer screen with different keys surrounding it replaced it.

He had gotten into computers and muggle technology when he was younger; taking every chance he could to understand the uses of the computer. It became his hobby of working on computers and soon moved to practically any mechanical thing out there. He even tried experimenting, one idea he wasn't sure if it would even let him survive.

In his fifth year he created this computer that was portable as well as huge. In making it, he had used his new wand to transfer some of his magic as it was made. It allowed Harry to do things that muggle computers couldn't. He loved using it to hack and crack codes on other virus makers and hackers and crashes their computers and any computer they get later on, or even whatever computer they use.

Harry sat down in his swivel chair and began to type. A picture of Dumbledore and many aurors at the outside of the wards and barriers breaking through them appeared on the largest screen. He snarled before leaping up and pressing a small red button. The computer shrank into a small laptop. He stored it and dashed around the room packing everything he owned. Hermione watched him and summoned her already packed stuff.

"I'll start getting the portal ready." She said. Harry stopped to nod before running again to grab his wand. Hermione stood and took out her wand.

"Kadoguchi nanatsu kokudos, ooyake ken houmen!" She said in a language she wasn't sure of, but it did give a translation. A bright slit appeared in mid air before opening into large circle. Harry appeared behind her ready to go with Hedwig and Kígyó his eastern indigo serpent on his shoulders.

They took hands and walked through the portal. It felt like they were in a tornado, but then fell forwards almost as soon as it had started. Looking up they saw large trees and they looked up to see that the sky was no where to be seen, just branches. Then they heard yelling.

Heading toward the sound they peaked from behind a tree to see three people. One was the only girl and she had short pink hair and wore a red odd dress, the others were guys, one was dressed in black and his hair was almost blinding blond and stuck out in every direction, the last was a guy with black hair that went towards the back, and he wore a black shirt with white shorts. But something about all three of them was different.

The boy in black's ear that was slightly pointed twitched and he turned around quicker than Harry could see and narrowed his eyes as the blond held a weird looking blade. But Hermione gasped.

"Who's there?" the blond narrowed his bright blue eyes right at their direction.

"Shushi setsunai tame engi rei Naruto-baka!" The girl said with an annoyed voice in a weird language. The blond flicked his eyes towards her before returning them to see Harry and Hermione walk out from behind the tree with their hands up.

"Sorry about hiding," Hermione said, "We just heard yelling and wanted to see what it was coming from." She said calmly even though the other two had also drawn out two of their own weird weapons.

"Dare iri mare ken nani mare ketsubou" the pink haired girl asked. Hermione sweat dropped.

She began to reach into her pocket to get her wand when they narrowed their eyes and raised their weapons. Putting up her hands Hermione put her hands together. "It-is alright-I am-only-going-to-put a-translator-on." She said slowly, and pronouncing her words.

The pink haired girl seemed to recognize the words 'alright' and 'translator' and she smiled and put down her weapon.

"Keishuu zenki sukoshi ooyoso ato yakusha, teiku goshujin kengeki umou date ki-pu karera dekiagari" They shifted but lowered their weapons. She nodded to Hermione and she reached into her robes and pulled out her wand.

"Reddo." She said and then tapped her throat before tapping Harry's as well. (Ok now they all speak the same language so no italics) "Any way sorry for us hiding earlier, we heard yelling and wanted to see what it was all about." She said in the same language,

"Whoa how did you do that?" the girl asked. Hermione shrugged.

"Magic." She said. The girl cocked her head to the side.

"No really, how did you do it?" she asked, her voice had an irritated edge to it.

"She literally means magic idiot." Harry said getting bored with the stupid conversation. But that was the first time the other three had heard him talk and his voice ran smoothly over them, as if it were calm water.

Hermione seemed unfazed by it. "Why don't we start by telling our names, my name is Hermione Granger and this is-"

"Persian, Persian Kyles."


Youko-chan- WEEELLL there you go!!! Here are the translations, I'm not quite positive with the accuracy and the order in which they are supposed to be said, but hey, flame me all you want, I'm doing my best to work with my writings and make them better. Thank you so much to all the people who helped me out with this story though!

Back to the SUBJECT of translations:

Japanese-

"Kadoguchi nanatsu kokudos, ooyake ken houmen!"-Gateway of Seven Realms, Open and Release!

"Shuushi setsunai tame engi rei Naruto!"-Stop trying to play cool Naruto!

"Dare iri mare ken nani mare ketsubou?" - Who are you and what do you want?

"Keishuu zenki sukoshi ooyoso ato yakusha, teiku goshujin kengeki umou date ki-pu karera dekiagari." -She said something about a translator, take your weapons down but keep them ready.

Hungarian-

Kígyó-snake, serpent