I looked all over for a song to represent my character Riel from my story Vhenen'ara, but I couldn't find one. So I wrote one instead. It is a rock ballad. I have no music for it, but I think it is pretty and fits her personality. I hope you like it! Please read and review it!

Dragon Age is owned by BioWare. The canon story belongs to them as well. The character template Mahariel is theirs. However, I took small aspects of the Mahariel origin story and formed them into my own origin story for my character, giving her a unique history, personality, and outlook. The OC known as Riel belongs to me.


Broken

She's been battered and broken

Tired and used up, abused up

Pushed, pulled and twisted up

Just another man's token

When her eyes don't cry

Her skin no longer bruises

When her voice doesn't break

Her life no longer one she chooses

Those gilded wings once so pure

Dragged through blood and bone

The light that used to shine

Her back straight, steps so sure

Now all that is left is a shadow

A heart that doesn't beat

Eyes that no longer see

She is nothing but a shadow

Of what she used to be

Can you fix the broken?

Can you strengthen the weak?

Can you hold up a body?

One that no longer breathes?

Long ago and once upon a time

She was fierce and full of life

Now she lays and used broken

Crying silent screams in her sleep

Can you fix the broken?

Can you take away the pain?

Her wings no longer hold her up

Can you do the same?

Memories of fears not forgotten

Dreams filled with familiar monsters

Dragging her down, back to that place

The realm of demon's misbegotten

No longer the pretty face a mother kissed

No longer the strength that held on

No longer the one with soft silks on her skin

She has become demons next victim

You can't fix the broken

You can't strengthen the weak

You can't hold her up anymore

When she refuses to even speak

Her wings are gone

Her bones have been set

Her heart is shattered

She stands on unsteady feet

Yet she rises to a new beat

She will fight not for you

She will fight not for herself

She will fight not for life

She fight to simply move on

Can you fix the broken?

Can you strengthen the weak?

Can you hold her up when her wings are gone?

Can you stand back and let her find her own feet?

She may be broken

She may be weak

She may have lost the fight

Yet still she will rise

Rise and move on

Do not hold her up when she falls

Do not hold her down when pulls herself up

Do not hold her back when she takes a step

Just stand by her side

And hold her hand

Telling her that today she can finally

Finally

Move on