Well so heres my first fanfiction so I started witha simple on so if I get at least five reviews ill make a longer one.
I do not own -man
I don't know how or when it happened but my heart was right. It surprised me at first to learn that my once cold frozen heart started to melt. I haven't told anyone not even bookman but I knew he noticed it. My feelings toward human beings started to change. I'm happy though and I don't know why. All I did know was that I owe all of this to the one who started it all also to the one I fell in love with and that is Allen Walker.
I remember the first time I saw him but I didn't react but as time went by I knew what my mind and heart thought something different. When I saw him he looked like another kid fighting a war for God. But then once my heart's ice was melting it finally told me what I should have thought. It told me to think that was a warrior of a god but not for war but for showing people the true meaning of happiness. He looked like and angel even now. His snow white hair that was as pure as snow, pale skin that shined in the sunlight, his gray eyes that showed kindness even if a red scar was over the left eye. But the one thing that I loved the most was his smile. It would seem every time he smiled, angel wings grew on his back. I knew I loved him the one named Allen Walker.
He wasn't selfish because he cared for humans, Noah, and akuma. He showed kindness because he saw how sad the souls were with the curse Allen's father; Mana Walker. Also on how he new that a Noah did have a heart but it needed the human to live not the Noah that the person was. It even surprised me so much on how he cared even for someone like me. A person who thought as every person as ink on paper, nothing but a piece of history waiting to be recorded.
I loved him I'm sure of it and all I can do now is watch and hope that one day I can tell him on how much he changed me and on how much I loved him. So all I can do is say 'I love him' in my mind every time I see a smile with angel wings coming out of his back. So I say once again 'I love Allen Walker".
Well this was it and I think I did bad but not horrible just bad well, please review