Dragonball GT: The Black-Star Crisis Ch.1** -
I do not own Dragon ball, Dragon ball Z, or Dragonball GT Authors note: So, this is my first story. Go easy on me. I think GT is the poster boy for wasted potential, so I decided to write a remake without Goku. I'll get to that in the next chapter. Or maybe the next, I dunno. I changed a few things about the story, such as Bra's age and Uub still trains with Goku, but they live at the Son , Vegeta and Gotens(at the end of z) hair remains the same. Constructive criticism is welcome.
A young man, appearing to be in his early 20s, rushed threw the sky, his orange gi and black belt flapping in the breeze. He landed just outside a large, pale yellow, dome shaped building with 'Capsule Co.' written near the reddish-pink top in black, bold lettering. He ran a hand threw is messy, black hair. "Oh man, Trunks is gonna kill me! This is the third time in a row I've been late to training!"
It had been exactly two years since his father, the legendary Goku, had brought a young, mohawked boy from the tropics who had been the reincartion of the evil Buu, to his home to train. His father had gone for the week to put the finishing touches on Uub's training. He told his lavender-harried friend he would come over to train, they both had the fighting spirits of their respective fathers, although Trunks was much more polite and mild mannered then his father, while Goten was a reflection of Goku, he was much more of a Casanova then his father.
The two young half- sayians they would spar and refresh their abilities of the fusion dance, for it had been several years since the last time Gotenks had been brought out. When he was just about to open the door to the gravity room, he had heard a familiar voice behind him. "Hey, Goten!" he turned around to see Trunks sister, Bra, behind him. "Hey Bra!" he said with a nervous chuckle while rubbing the back of his head.
Bra looked at him with shining eyes " Do you want to come see a movie with me?" Goten politely refused, and quickly stepped into the gravity chamber. Bra was two years younger then him, making her 22, and didn't train until the Buu incident, in which she clung to mother almost the entire time. After that she swore she would train so she could help if their ever was a threat to the earth again. She had reaches ssj2 at 14, and was now now nearing ssj3. She had devolped a crush on Goten during the Incident with Hirudegarn, when he saved her from a flaming ki blast from the giant insect's mouth. She has been relentlessly trying to make him her boyfriend since then, even beating a girl to near death when she had found out she was cheating on Gotten with another guy. "She's not unattractive," thought Goten, " but Vegeta would rip me in half if I tried to hold her hand! Not to mention that it would ruin my friendship with Trunks."
Bra could feel tears welling in her eyes. She knew Goten didn't think she was ugly, it was probably because of her father or brother."He probaly thinks this is just a school girl crush." Bra thought, " but I know I love him" the sayian princess looked up with confidence. "I'll guess I just have to try harder".
