Alright guys, I decided to re-write this story so that I could 1. Perfect it, and 2. Possibly make a sequal. I hope you enjoy and I will try to work on "Fading in The Distance" but I do need some advice for it, so suggestions would greatly be appreciated!

Its a regular school morning as Keely Teslow walks into H.G. Wells and meets her best friend, Phil Diffy.

"Hey Phil!" Keely said as she ran up to give him a hug

"Hey, donut?" He asked returning the hug and extending one to her

"Thanks. Ya know Phil, I was thinking that maybe we could go see 'One Missed Call' this weekend, it looks so awesome. What do you think?" as she patiently waited for an answer she did not recieve, she decided to call out, "Phil?"...She finally turned around to catch a glimpse of what he was so distracted by and when she did, she saw nothing more than a drop-dead gorgeous brunette with the prettiest blue eyes imaginable.

She turned back around and said "Phil shut your mouth!" and with that she slapped his chin up

"OW!" He cried as Keely walked away and headed to class

As Phil shut his locker, the new girl walked up and asked, "Hi, do you know where Mr.Messerschmitt's class is?"

"Yeah, I'm on my way there, I'll walk you there." He offered

"Thanks. I'm Samantha." She said as she held out her hand for him to shake

"Phil." He said as he gladly excepted and with that they headed to class before they were both late

When lunch hit, Phil and Samantha had sat together. Turns out they had alot more in common then they thought they would. They both don't care for rap, they rather be outside than in a mall, and they love horror movies. As Keely sat with Via and Owen, she stared from a far at Samantha and Phil, as she continued to stare she thought in her head, "That bitch better stay away from him. I love him, all she'll do is hurt him.". Even at the end of the day Phil walked home with Samantha instead of Keely and it was killing her.

Since Phil continued this behavior for numerous weeks, Keely decided to hang out with some old friends in the popular crowd. One day, Samantha, Phil, Keely, and her group of friends happen to be at the mall at the same time.

As Keely sat with her friends Mike spoke up and said, "God Keely! You eat alot."

"I do?!" She asked as she started to freak out in her mind

"A little. Lay off toots. You need that hot bod babe, or no one will want you."

And thats right when she decided to purge up the fat and stop eating. She started to think in her mind, "No wonder he's ignoring me. I'm a fat pig.". "Um guys, I got to go." She said as she got up fast and walked away in a hurry. But as she broke into a run, she ran right into Phil.

"Hey Keels." He greeted with his usual goofy grin

"Um hey, I gotta go." She said as she tried to squirm away

"Wait, hang with Sam and I."

Keely gave him a look and just quickly walked away. "I'll be right back Sam." He said as she nodded and sat down at a bench

"Keels what's wrong?" He asked as he grabbed her arm

"You and that hoe!' She yelled causing a scene

"What are you talking about?" He asked, clueless, but thats a typical guy

"Phil if you'd payed attention to me for one minute instead of whispering back and forth with that hoe in class, you'd know." She yelled

"Know what?"

"THAT I LOVE YOU. I THOUGHT YOU FELT THE SAME BUT I WAS OBVIOUSLY WRONG" She yelled even louder as she ran away

"KEEL WAIT!" He yelled after her, but she was gone.

Well I seriously hope you guys like it. I think its more detailed, spell checked, and better than the first version. Give me ideas that you think would fit so I can make it more of what you guys want!