This is my first story so bear with me.
DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of the Maximum character, James Patterson does.
Max P.O.V
We were heading towards my moms house. I was thinking of some one. Nudge, Angel, and Gazzy were too young to remember her. The truth is that there is a seventh flock member. We named her Frizzy because ….. um her hair well it was Frizzy. She is younger than Fang but older than Iggy. Last time I saw her, we were still at the School, and she was being dragged out of her cage by a stupid Eraser. Her face had been of pure terror her brown eyes were wide, tears were streaming down her face, her curly brown hair sticking to her cheeks. I quickly shook that picture from my mind.
"Max that girl can see us", Angel said. "Angel we are too high up for some one to know that we're flying kids" I said simply. "Max she's that girl you were just thinking of. You called her Frizzy."
"WHERE!" Fang, Iggy, and I said in unison. Angel pointed to a girl that was standing on a side walk staring at us she had brown eyes and curly brown hair. When she realized we were looking at her she looked down and shook her head. When she looked up again she had a confused expression. "She can't see us any more. Her vision went back to normal." Angel said
Gwenne P.O.V
I woke up from a strange dream that I've been having for weeks. In the dream I was in a cage and I had wings. I was talking to three other kids with wings. One girl and two boys. The names Max, Iggy, and Fang came into my head. All I remember clearly was being called Frizzy. I shook that thought out of my mind. I got ready for high school. I'm 14 and you guest it a fresh man. oh well. I started walking to school. I always went to school early so it was no surprise that I was the only one in sight. I was dizzy so I stopped walking and leaned against a fence.
When I thought I was fine I heard a noises that sounded like wings flapping. I looked around and saw birds flying but they were a few yards away. "I'm going crazy," I muttered and chuckled to myself. I looked around there was no one on the street. For some reason my gaze was drawn upwards. All I saw was six birds, but why do they look so deformed. The Flock .
What does that mean? All of a sudden my eyesight zoomed in and I saw six flying kids! I didn't know what I should be worried about more my eyesight or the six flying kids. I focused on the kids. Three kids looked about my age, one girl two boys. The girl had dirty blond hair and beautiful wings. One of the boys had black hair wings and attire. The second boy had strawberry blond hair and pale skin and eyes. Next oldest was a girl with mocha colored skin and wild hair. The youngest boy had blond hair and blue eyes. The youngest girl had white wings, blond hair, and blue eyes that were staring straight at me. All of a sudden the whole group turned around. When I realized they were looking at me I looked down. I shook my head and told myself," your hallucinating." When I looked up the kids were gone. I looked around and even though the birds where still there I no longer heard their wings.
This is my first fanfic so give advice on what I need to improve. Give me your opinion on what you think should happen. And sorry on it being so short if people like it i'll make the next chapters bigger.