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I awoke with a massive head ache as if someone smashed my head ageist a wall, well that's not too far off. I live in a cage, used as their lab rat. They are horrible people white coats. I've been trapped here in little hell on earth ever since I can remember. You have probably heard of maximum ride if you are reading this. Well it's been 15 teen years since then. Itex is gone for good, but that does that doesn't mean other companies will try. The company testing on us is B.P.! Just kidding, no really it's i really don't know the name. I mean us as in me and my four and only friend, were sillybandz you can't get only just one. Lame simile i know.

My name is Joseph; my friends are Luna, Brent, Jeremiah, and Alejandro. We all named our selves. We all have been here for all our lives there is no way we can escape without an outside force. We will probably be here till we die, or until they "retire" us.

I know I'm a downer we all are a little. Don't judge us for that. You would be too if you knew you would be beaten, shocked, get blood extracted, and chemicals in you had no idea what they are. Over the years of being here you hear things you probably weren't sop to hear. Like whom your parents are. When I first I thought it was a joke or a cruel trick, then I got to thinking so ya Maximum Ride and Fang are my parents. I haven't heard much since I live in a cage, but apparently they are pretty famous. They saved the world, so cliché. The part that got me was that they think I'm dead, guess better dead then to have them worry to death about me right? That's not what makes me angry apparently they stopped looking for me after two months. Tow mouths! I WAS THEIR FIRST SON! They had a new kid after me! THREE MONTHS AFTER I WAS BORN 'MOM' GOT PREGNANT AGAIN! She and 'DAD' now have a daughter one year younger than me and a five year old son. I'm 15 or that's what I at least figure since my 'sister' is fourteen.

I look around the room in my, oh so cozy cage, I rubbed my many, many now sore wounds, that seemed to be finale healing. I look around everyone was asleep when we get out, please let be soon.

My friends are getting out of here though. Its not to night it will be to soon though very soon then i can show my parents I'm very alive. Hope they can run faster than light, cause if they don't Brent going to catch them. we all have are own unique power. Brent as i said can run at the speed of light to 5mph. Luna can out do here opponent in all most any competition except v.s. us an are powers. Alejandro can trans form in to any living thing as if you he was you all he has to do is touch you and he know everything about your likes, dislikes, and your past. Jeremiah is the super smarter than any one in the universe. Now me i have super strength. The classic power ,but i don't always use them for good.

I'm a little dark thats what my friends say. I'm not the average experiment you see when i was little some eraser DNA got in my DNA when they were transfusing the super strength. now i can grow claws and fangs. my life has lasted longer than a regular eraser they try an clone me before but DNA shuts them out to extract it or copy it.

My life is not that great but it will all change soon.

It's my first story so be nice please. Review if you think I should continue how I can become better. :) tell me if i have grammar problems. next chapter will be much larger i just need one review.