A New World

I wanted to post something that I have done a while ago and I thought this was the place! If you like it please review and if you don't...review anyway! I want feedback to see if I should continue.

Enough talking now, here's the poem! I hope you enjoy ^-^

Sometimes the world is so cold

War, murder, greed

Sometimes the Earth is a bad seed

And only one person wants to fix it

Yet there's something in the way he glares

His presence, digging into your skin

His eyes, with hatred

But his heart, with justice

Is this to much to ask?

He sits there

In front of his TV

He takes hold of his pen

Grabs his raven, sinister notebook

One by one

The name of every scoundrel written in it

"For a new and ideal world" he says

Gone…gone…gone

"I am justice" he rants

One by one

What's going on?

The masses don't interpret the disappearances

Just one man knows

Oh, he knows alright

Purely won't stop until the world is pure

His reign of terror has gone on far enough

One individual, just one, dare take on the one called Kira

His presence, filled with knowledge

His eyes, just black holes

Yet his hearts wants the same

But not in his interpretation

That one person takes him down with one fell swoop

"Start looking around you and all you see are people the world would be

Better off without." He yells

But while the half- sighted Kira goes down

So does the half- sighted man who tried to show him the right way…

If there was a right way to begin with…