I'm soo sorry for not updating! Soo sorry! Well anyways since I haven't updated for a long time, I need to reread chapter 1. I think I'm gonne write chapter one again. Well hope you like chapter 1!

Chapter 1

It was early morning, the sun was bright and the skies were blue. Meroko walked down the isle of maids, holding food. She wanted everything to be right for Takuto. It was Takuto's 18 birthday and Meroko wanted everything to be perfect for him. Meroko might look beautiful and kind, but when you mess with her, your dead! She had strong feelings for Takuto but whenever she tried to tell him, he would just walk away like she was a bunny eating her carrot. The birthday party had lights, food, gifts, and everybody was invited.
"Wake up TAkuto! Wake up!" yelled Meroko. " Okay, okay, okay, you don't need to yell in my ear. I'm right beside you." Takuto woke up and got out of his large size bed. He walked his window. "My 18 birthday..." Takuto sighed. he walked downstairs with Meroko beside him. "Sir your parents sent you a letter." The maid handed Takuto the letter. It was in a lavender envelope and it had a baby blue string around it. Takuto opened it and pulled out a tag with numbers on it. This is what the letter says:

Dear Takuto,
How have you been? We can't seem to make it to your 18th birthday, so we thoguht we should send you your gift. It should be a tag. Bring that to the slave store. They will give you your slave. We chose her out because we want you to get married before January 1st. Good luck!

Love, Mother and Father

With no clue, TAkuto rushed out the door so quick that barley anybody notice her was gone. At the slave store Takuto gave the owner the tag. He took it and went to search for the slave. When he came back he was holding a chain. Then Takuto Saw the girl. She had brown hair and golden colored eyes. TAkuto blushed, it was his first time in love. The owner gave Takuto the chain and they started out the door. Takuto was still blushing. "what's your name?" he asked. There was no reply, nothing. The takuto saw some words and the chain, but the girl's neck was covering it. Takuto moved her neck, that made the girl blush a crimson color. Takuto saw thatthe words were mute and her name was Mitsuki. Takuto smiled at her. He lead her to his home and went up the stairs to his room, closed the door, and took the chain off of her neck. He saw that the chain was soo tight that her whole neck was red. He picked her up, which made her blush even more. He layed her on his bed and 10 mins later they fell asleep. The whole time they were asleep Takuto never let go of Mituski. He woked up all of a sudden, having a dream about Mitsuki. "My princess from above, I will never let you go. Not now, not ever." he whisper and hugged her...The end!

I know it was shorter then the original one, but at least it was better...I hope. Well, please review. Stay tune for the next chapter.