Hey Guys! I'm a brazilian girl and I'm writing this story because I want to improve my English skills, so If there is some grammar mistake, please tell me

Beep, Beep, Beep What was that sound that invaded my mind? And this pain in my head, what was it?
I should open my eyes, that's what I should do. Why I couldn't?
"Nessie, Nessie" Someone called, but who was Nina?

I felt my eyelids open, I wanted open my eyes, but is it safe? I didn't know where I was.
Strong light invaded my vision. I certainly didn't know that place. I was lying on a bed with railings, had a tube coming out of one of my veins and something was stuck in my nose.
"Thank God my girl woke up." An blond woman with a tired face was crying beside me.
"Nessie, say something, please." The woman begged.
Nessie? Who was Nessie? My name was ...
Wait! I don't remember! I didn't know my name. Why I didn't know my name?
The despair gripped me, and the annoying beep started playing desperately.

What happened to me? Why I didn't remember my name? I had no memory, my mind seemed an empty box, everything was blank.

"Nessie, pay attention to me. I need you calm down. "A man in white spoke.
I nodded my head in affirmation.
"Nessie, are you feeling well?" The man asked.
"Yes, but who is Nessie?" I asked confused.
" Don't you know who is Nessie?" He asked carefully..
No. "Can you tell us what's your name?" He asked.
"My name is ..."
Damn, I didn't know!
"I don't know." I answered.
"Can you tell us what is your earliest Memory?" He asked skeptically.

I forced my mind to find some gap between the emptiness which I found myself, but the only thing I could remember was the water, a salt water coming in through my mouth and taking my breath away. The water brought a huge and cold darkness.
"Water." I whispered.

The man walked to the medical devices that were right next to the bed and picked up what looked like an X-ray.
"What we have here is a case of memory loss, amnesia caused by physical trauma, she hit her head on a rock when she fell into the sea." He began to speak.

"I fell into the sea? I asked.
"Yes Nessie. Since then you are here, nearly a month, you were in a coma. "The blonde said. Her voice was so sweet that looked like an angel.

"Wait, so my name is Nessie and I fell in the sea and now I lost my memory." I tried to organize it in my head. "I'll stay like this forever?" Ok now I was desperate.
"I think not, your injury really was not very serious, with time and a doctor monitoring, your memories will return." Doctor said.

"Can I go home? I have a house, isn't it? "Asked confused.
"Of course you have, my girl. You're safe. don't be afraid. "The blonde woman said.
I should remember her, she seems to be someone important.

It was not long until I could get high. The blonde woman, Bella drove me home, she seems a lot better than before.
She was very good to me as always, took my hand down the stairs of the hospital and even opened the car door for me.

"Thanks, Mom," I thanked her.
"What did you call me?" The woman asked with a smile.

I said thank you, didn't I? But I said something else, I said mom! That was it!

"You remembered, you said, Mom." She said through her tears.
"Sorry, I did not want you to cry." I excused myself feeling sad, for making her cry.
"I'm glad you recognized me." She wiped the corner of her eye.

That was it, I knew there was a strong connection between us, I had no recollection of it, but I recognized her as a mother.

"Your friends are all worried about you, they came to visit you every day, now that school started they are in school." My mother spoke.

"Do I have friends?" I asked.
"Of course dear, you have many friends. Everybody loves you so much. "

I had friends and I didn't even remember their faces. What bizarre.!