Okay so all I did so far was re-do the first chapter, I think this is 100X better then it was before and well I was re-doing it I really noticed the different in my own abilities and if you read the first version I hope you enjoy this one. Please Read and Review, and I really hope you enjoy.


Fanfic - Spider Rider's - Hunter Steele / Corona - No, I'll never leave, I refuse too.

3 years have passed in the inner world since Hunter Steele and the rest of the spider riders defeated Lord Mantid, Hunter lives' in the palace with the rest of the riders now; everything was peaceful for a long time but now he is fighting to protect the inner world from a new evil that has invaded from the outside world. About a year ago a permanent portal opened that could freely transport people from the outer world to the inner world and back again. Shortly after the arrival of the humans from the outside world they started a war with the inner world, and the inner world didn't know what to do they were being over whelmed in the first week of the battle almost half of the Arachna Kingdom had been destroyed so all the outer town's fled in to the palace surrounding's. All of the invectids were helping the Arachna kingdom fight, but they were still having a hard time since they weren't use to the outer world's weapons. All of the creature's of the inner world thought they were doomed, that was until Hunter Steele and the spider rider's all started to fight back against the outer world's people.

They were on the battle field in the middle of the war, Hunter and Lumen were looking for Sparkle who had wandered off after saying she could fight to, when they found Sparkle they were all instantly surrounded by the outer world's people with guns pointed at them, the human's shot at Sparkle and Lumen jumped in front of her to protect his sister. Hunter jumped from his spider to Lumens spider Ebony which was where Sparkle and Lumen were now located he leaned over Lumen and looked at the wound, "How bad is it, do you think you can stand?

Lumen winched from the pain, "Yeah, it hurts but I don't think it's as bad as it looks."

Hunter help Lumen and sparkle down from Ebony and they hid from the army around the behind the 2 spiders then Hunter turned to look at the army he was about to face and he jumped back on to shadow, " Arachna Power, Oracles light."

Hunter transformed using the Oracle keys, he then used his powers to destroy all of the outer world human's weapons, he stood in front of Lumen and Sparkle on shadow and yelled to the crowd of people standing before him, "Stop fighting them, they're not a threat."

A soldier in the front line looked up at him, "Why should we stop fighting?"

Hunter was frustrated as he looked at the people in front of him, "Because the people of the inner world mean you know harm, they only fight back because you killed their people."

The Soldier just laughed at what he said, "Why are you talking like you're not one of them you monster."

Hunter was seriously getting frustrated with the person standing before him, he jumped down from Shadows back out of the anger he had for all of the useless deaths and fighting, "Because I'm from the outer world too stupid, It's just I was sent here years before all of you, I have lived with these people they accepted me more than any of you did, I have felt their pain, and None of us are monsters."

The Soldier just continue to be stubborn "You're a liar you could never be one of us look at yourself, you're a monster."

Suddenly from farther back in to the group a Soldier ran forward and looked at Hunter who was now standing in front of Shadow with his sword resting pointing backwards over his shoulder, he was just looking at the Soldier he was arguing with like he was stupid. The soldier from the back got in between him and the original soldier and just stared in to Hunter's eyes. Hunter looked at the Soldier in front of him with a very confused face, "What are you doing?"

The soldier stared at him, "Hunter is that you?"

Hunter looked at this strange Soldier standing in front of him, "Yeah, Why?"

The Soldier instantly hugged Hunter causing his confusion to grow even more, "Let go."

The Soldier removed her helmet and smiled at him with tears beginning to form in her eyes, "We thought we had lost you, but you're alive."

Hunter couldn't believe his eyes when he saw his mother look at him, he was shock after seeing her again and with what she was a part of, "Mom, why are you here, and why are you fighting with them."

His mother looked at him with a gentle smile as tears dripped from her eyes slowly, "What are you saying after being apart for so long, and why are you dressed like that?"

Hunter frowned at his mother, he was almost in tears as he began to think that his own family was trying to kill the people he loved the most and he knew exactly what he had to do instantly, he knew he had to pick a side that second after seeing the way his mother was acting and he knew he would always pick his friends, he knew he had to ignore his mother so he jumped over to his spider and he looked at Prince Lumen who was now sitting on ebony he told the spider to go and it began to head back to the palace, and then Hunter jumped down and grabbed Sparkle helping her up on Shadow as she put Hotarla back in to her manacle. As soon as Sparkle was ready Hunter told Shadow to go and they started to ride away as tears dripped down from his eyes because of the thought of leavening his family again. His mother tried to chase after him and right before Shadow could get away she grabbed on to his back leg.

His mother yelled at him as he looked backwards, "Hunter where are you going?"

Hunter gave her a cruel look as he turned forward "Shadow go as fast as you can if she fall's she falls."

Shadow didn't understand very well about Hunters reaction but he still knew this was someone Hunter cared about as he questioned his partner, " But she's you're…"

Hunter yelled "Just go, (Tears fell from his eyes.) Princess Sparkle and Lumen are more important right now."

Shadow knew Hunter was only trying to do what was best for the Arachna kingdom and his friends but Shadow didn't want Hunter to regret leaving his family. So when Shadow jumped and his mother fell off Shadow used his spider web to catch her and pull her on to him. Sparkle grabbed her hand and smiled at Hunter's mom. Hunter looked at Sparkle and gently smiled but then a fighter jet attacked them so Hunter used another oracle key and started to fight the fighter jet well Sparkle made sure her and his mother didn't fall off. Hunter made sure that he just knocked the fighter jet out of the air and didn't kill them humans and then he made sure that they caught up with prince Lumen. Hunter jumped across on to Ebony's back and checked Lumen's pulse. Lumen wasn't hit in any organ's but he was bleeding pretty bad so Hunter put pressure on it and kneeled down to hold him in place, after making sure he was in a good position then he told Ebony that he could go faster and that he would make sure that neither of them would fall off. When they arrived back at the palace Hunter picked Lumen up bridal style and then went straight to the nurse well Corona put his mother in the palace prison. Hunter left Lumen in the infirmary with Sparkle and the doctor and ran to see Corona. When Hunter got to the where the palace prison cells was he sat beside Corona in front of the jail cell.

Corona looked at Hunter with a frown as he smiled at her, "Are you really okay Sparkle told me she's your mother, do you really think we should be putting her in there then."

Hunter leaned back and sighed, " I get why you're worried but you don't have to be I chose to stay with you guys here because you became my family, I mean I love my mother but my family has always rejected me for choosing my grandfather so them deciding to act like my family now isn't right. Not to mention she killed people from the inner world people we treasured."

Corona smiled at him and then leaned over and gave Hunter a hug, " I get that your mad and that you don't' get along with her, I've heard the stories before but you should talk to her see what her reason's are."

Hunter looked at Corona "But..."

Corona smiled at him and took his hand in hers, "Just give it a try talk to your mom she seems to be really nice, if you at least try and still can't handle it then you can leave her alone but at least try okay."

With a little pushing from Corona Hunter opened the jail cell and sat on the bench opposite of his mother. His mother stood up to hug him but he just pushed her away from himself clearly not wanting to be with her. He laughed under his breath and then glared at her, "Don't act like a parent now of all time's you never tried before, and you guys just almost killed Lumen the prince of Arachna."

His Mother looked up in tears, "I'm sorry about before I didn't know you felt that way, and I didn't shot him I've never shot any one I was just looking for your sister Elise she ran off in to the portal when it first appeared."

Hunter looked at her surprised for a second then smiled slightly, "But I don't understand why you would come any ways no one from our world except me and Grandpa should have ever come to this world. This place is amazing and you guys are destroying it, you have to leave. So find Elise and leave once you get let go."

His mother looked at him, "I have been looking but I found out she was out here so I joined the army, isn't this the place your grandpa told you all of those crazy stories about, we thought you were looking for this world like usual when you disappeared so we tried to find any evidence of where you had disappeared, we looked for months but the police never found where you could of even gone, but now we found you so you can leave this world and go back to your real family, come back to us Hunter."

Hunter gave her one of those your crazy looks, "I don't want to leave from here, I love it here, I feel like I belong, and my friends are all here."

His mother looked at him in disbelief, "What are you saying you're just going to abandon you family."

Hunter laughed in anger as he left the cell, and then he turned back to look at her with hurt in his eyes after remembering things that he never wanted to, "Don't make me out to be a bad guy, you guys abandoned me a long time ago, the only person who I ever felt cared about by was Grandpa."

Hunter left down the hallway with Corona following right behind him, she was holding his hand as they walked upstairs and they went in to hunter's room. He went in and punched the wall with his fist which startled Corona. She put her hand on his shoulder to calm him but noticed he was shaking, she looked around his shoulder to see tears in his eyes, and asked "Hunter are you okay?"

He looked at her as he sat on his bed, he was trying his best to keep his smile on but it looked horrible as he cried, "I'm okay just a little frustrated, I mean she tried to make it seem like what I went through was nothing, I mean I felt like they abandoned me, all of them."

Corona just sat down beside Hunter and put her had on his head as he leaned in to her shoulder and cried Corona couldn't believe it, that Hunter was crying was one thing but in front of her usually didn't happen because he is always so happy around others, but these problems with his family made him break down. Hunter cried for a little bit longer and then he sat up and wiped his eyes, he smiled at Corona, "Sorry about that, all the stress that's been building up lately just became too much."

Corona looked down at him, "There's nothing wrong with crying, I was more surprised than anything I mean you should have told us about all this stress that's been building up."

Hunter looked at her, "I was handling it all pretty well until prince Lumen got shot, as soon as that happened everything when downhill fast."

Corona looked at him, "Well rely on us a little more were all here for you."

Hunter smiled brightly and then stood up putting his hand out to help Corona up; and then he headed for the door he turned looking at her with his normal smile, "Yeah, well anyways I think we should go check on prince Lumen."

Corona laughed, "Yeah that's probably a pretty good idea."

Hunter and Corona headed down the palace hallway together as they ready themselves to see their prince and princess.


I hope you enjoyed this chapter and if I can Chapter 2 will probably be uploaded tomorrow since I am suddenly interested in this story again. So please Review.