Ella Main
Ella sat shivering in the freezing cold (it was the middle of winter), wishing that Mutant X would get there soon. She was a feral whose powers had just started developing, again. This was the third and (what she hoped) final time it would happen. Ella loved being a "Child Of Genomex", as Adam had called her when they talked over the Internet, but she hated the developing part. She lost control for most of the time, and that meant a whole three weeks with no control over her actions. She thought it was scary, that she would lose control, like she had twice before. The especially scary part was that she had accidentally killed her brother last time. She needed to be with a person who would help to keep Ella's mind in charge of the body and its actions, and that person was Adam.
The Helix flew silently and invisibly over the streets of New York, the team was on their way to pick up a young feral, who was having trouble keeping control of her powers while going through the developing stage. They were all eager to meet her, Shalimar especially as she (as you all should know herself was a feral. Jesse landed the Helix smoothly on the tarmac of an alleyway, near the Empire State Building. Shalimar jumped out, closely followed by Emma and Brennan, and began searching. She heard a rustle from behind a cardboard box, and went over to have a look. Suddenly a man dressed like a Hell's Angel walked out of a door close to wear Shalimar stood. Shalimar looked at him, analysing whether or not he was a threat.
"What you lookin' at, sweetie?" he asked in a drunken stupor. Shalimar rolled her eyes and continued to search. He walked over to her and pushed her hard, "don't ignore me!" He screamed. "How dare you!" Shalimar groaned inwardly, wishing that this man would leave her alone, resisting the urge to kick him in the nuts "Bitch!" he shouted, "listen to me when I'm…" Shalimar had had enough, in one swift motion; she kicked him in the head, knocking him out. Shalimar smiled to herself. Then, she heard the same rustling as she had heard earlier. Her eyes turned a bright yellow colour, she concentrated hard on where the noise was coming from, and spotted a young girl, wearing a pair of worn jeans, a holey jumper and an old pair of sneakers, she looked about 18 years old, and was shivering badly.
Shalimar walked over to her and held out her hand, Ella looked up at the attractive blonde, and took her hand, Shalimar helped her up, and the two of them walked to the Helix, Brennan and Emma following them…
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