Updated! Yes People I have updated it!! I read it and I saw all the
mistakes!! I could have hit myself.wait I did! Oh well, anywayz, I am going
to put more of my ficcy back up after I get 2 R&Rs! I get no R&Rs I know
people have to read this crap.at one point.So after 2 R&Rs I will put
another chappy in! This method seems to work for my friend so I am going
to try! *V-Man: Kami, woman go to the freakin' fan fic already!* Ooh right!
Here I my ficcy!
Disclaimer: roses are red and so is saiyain fur! So I don't own DBZ or saiyains..( Ooh well, you get the picture!
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Chappy 1: the obsession
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"Miyoko, Come on. We're going miss Dragon Ball Z!" Kikiyo yelled.
"Hell, don't you know I know that! This lady won't hurry up!" Miyoko yelled hinting to the ice cream shop lady to hurry. The lady handed Miyoko and Kikiyo their ice cream cones. They ran to their purple mustang and road off.
"Kami! That lady was butt slow, I mean Shit!" Miyoko said.
"Yea.Dog! She was kind of slow but, you only going 60 mph and it is 5:28 and we're still a mile from the house!" Kikiyo Replied.
"Thanks. I know but do you what me to get a ticket! Then, we can miss a lot more of it and here's an idea, you can pay the ticket!" said Miyoko trying not to crash. They made it to the driveway in one piece. Kikiyo didn't bother to open the door because it would only waste time! She ran threw the door after she opened it of course, and plopped on the sofa and turned on the TV.
"Damn! I missed four minutes of it. What am I going to do now?" Kikiyo yelled in rage.
"Kami, don't have a cow Kikiyo! You only missed the announcer dude. Gees! I know I like it but I can miss it for four freaking minutes!" Miyoko yelled back.
"True.Okay what some popcorn? Wait don't answer I know it, yes you do!" Kikiyo said feeling rather stupid at the moment. Miyoko just looked at her, as if to say if you don't hurry you will miss more! Kikiyo ran it to the kitchen got the popcorn and popped it.
"Have you seen Bouncer yet today? His food has not been touched!' Miyoko said worried.
"Yea. He was outside, with his girlfriend! " Kikiyo replied with a satisfied look on her face mostly because she finally got her popcorn.
"Girlfriend.what?!?! Was she cute?" Asked Miyoko with a curious look on her face as she grabbed some of the popcorn.
"For a cat yea. I guess, I am really not the one to judge considering the fact that first I am not a cat and second I am not lesbian! And shut it, dbz is back on." Kikiyo said waving her hand up and down in her face as Cooler walked on to the screen.
"Okay." Miyoko said as she sighed. Then started watching the TV. Dragon Ball Z ended and the frustrated Miyoko and Kikiyo started yelling at the figure on the screen, Goku, to get his ass to super saiyain and kick Coolers butt!
"I can not believe him he is so stupid! Kami you would think he could do that but, nooo he has to wait! Put us in more suspense!" Kikiyo yelled as she walked in to the kitchen to put the popcorn bowl in the sink.
"You would think but, the people are just messed up! They have no idea what we're are putting up with! Look I have a zit because of them!" Miyoko said a little calmer then most likely because, she was getting drinks for her and Kikiyo out the frige.
"I still got a term page to write. See you outside the door at 8:00! Okay?" Said Kikiyo now halfway cheerful.
"Okay see you at 8:00! I am going to play my PS2 for a little! Bye!" Miyoko yelled back as she ran in to her room.
"See you! Stupid term paper." Kikiyo said as she walked upstairs to do her term paper
"Did you finish it? 'Cause if you didn't I won't bring us any where!" Miyoko declared.
"When did you become my mother and for your info I did finish it! Thank you very much!" Kikiyo said in frustration.
"Okay sorry. So where do you want to go? BK, Taco Bell, or Rally's?" Miyoko said with a questioning look on her face.
"Ummm.. that is a hard decision! Let's go with Rally's! Got to eat!" Kikiyo said before she started to sing the Rally's theme song. Miyoko ran after her and jumped in the car at the same time as Kikiyo just like they always did. But, little did they know that one of the actions that they did would change their life for.how ever long it changed their life. Bum Bum BUM! (Sorry I had to do that!)
End chappy 1
Okay, It stunk huh? Ooh yea! Okay I am going to have to know what everyone thinks! I am not going to keep writing a story that stinks like something that stinks! I want you opinion, and remember PLEASE R&R! * Cough* R&R new chappy * Cough* C u l8ter, Monique
Disclaimer: roses are red and so is saiyain fur! So I don't own DBZ or saiyains..( Ooh well, you get the picture!
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Chappy 1: the obsession
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"Miyoko, Come on. We're going miss Dragon Ball Z!" Kikiyo yelled.
"Hell, don't you know I know that! This lady won't hurry up!" Miyoko yelled hinting to the ice cream shop lady to hurry. The lady handed Miyoko and Kikiyo their ice cream cones. They ran to their purple mustang and road off.
"Kami! That lady was butt slow, I mean Shit!" Miyoko said.
"Yea.Dog! She was kind of slow but, you only going 60 mph and it is 5:28 and we're still a mile from the house!" Kikiyo Replied.
"Thanks. I know but do you what me to get a ticket! Then, we can miss a lot more of it and here's an idea, you can pay the ticket!" said Miyoko trying not to crash. They made it to the driveway in one piece. Kikiyo didn't bother to open the door because it would only waste time! She ran threw the door after she opened it of course, and plopped on the sofa and turned on the TV.
"Damn! I missed four minutes of it. What am I going to do now?" Kikiyo yelled in rage.
"Kami, don't have a cow Kikiyo! You only missed the announcer dude. Gees! I know I like it but I can miss it for four freaking minutes!" Miyoko yelled back.
"True.Okay what some popcorn? Wait don't answer I know it, yes you do!" Kikiyo said feeling rather stupid at the moment. Miyoko just looked at her, as if to say if you don't hurry you will miss more! Kikiyo ran it to the kitchen got the popcorn and popped it.
"Have you seen Bouncer yet today? His food has not been touched!' Miyoko said worried.
"Yea. He was outside, with his girlfriend! " Kikiyo replied with a satisfied look on her face mostly because she finally got her popcorn.
"Girlfriend.what?!?! Was she cute?" Asked Miyoko with a curious look on her face as she grabbed some of the popcorn.
"For a cat yea. I guess, I am really not the one to judge considering the fact that first I am not a cat and second I am not lesbian! And shut it, dbz is back on." Kikiyo said waving her hand up and down in her face as Cooler walked on to the screen.
"Okay." Miyoko said as she sighed. Then started watching the TV. Dragon Ball Z ended and the frustrated Miyoko and Kikiyo started yelling at the figure on the screen, Goku, to get his ass to super saiyain and kick Coolers butt!
"I can not believe him he is so stupid! Kami you would think he could do that but, nooo he has to wait! Put us in more suspense!" Kikiyo yelled as she walked in to the kitchen to put the popcorn bowl in the sink.
"You would think but, the people are just messed up! They have no idea what we're are putting up with! Look I have a zit because of them!" Miyoko said a little calmer then most likely because, she was getting drinks for her and Kikiyo out the frige.
"I still got a term page to write. See you outside the door at 8:00! Okay?" Said Kikiyo now halfway cheerful.
"Okay see you at 8:00! I am going to play my PS2 for a little! Bye!" Miyoko yelled back as she ran in to her room.
"See you! Stupid term paper." Kikiyo said as she walked upstairs to do her term paper
"Did you finish it? 'Cause if you didn't I won't bring us any where!" Miyoko declared.
"When did you become my mother and for your info I did finish it! Thank you very much!" Kikiyo said in frustration.
"Okay sorry. So where do you want to go? BK, Taco Bell, or Rally's?" Miyoko said with a questioning look on her face.
"Ummm.. that is a hard decision! Let's go with Rally's! Got to eat!" Kikiyo said before she started to sing the Rally's theme song. Miyoko ran after her and jumped in the car at the same time as Kikiyo just like they always did. But, little did they know that one of the actions that they did would change their life for.how ever long it changed their life. Bum Bum BUM! (Sorry I had to do that!)
End chappy 1
Okay, It stunk huh? Ooh yea! Okay I am going to have to know what everyone thinks! I am not going to keep writing a story that stinks like something that stinks! I want you opinion, and remember PLEASE R&R! * Cough* R&R new chappy * Cough* C u l8ter, Monique