Okay guys this is another Story that I wrote please review
I walked down the road not daring to go back to that dastrid place. The place of horror as its king. The horrid smell of the dead. The place known as the orphanage. Who dares to go there! I escaped today and shit there's the cops! I started to run the fastest I had ever been in years. It felt great but no one can know my secret. Not ever! Its too dangerous for anyone to know. But you might find out soon. SHIT! They're hot on my trail well I have until 200 hundred feet until I have to run. shit! They're close I need to go now! I started running faster and I headed to the cliff side. I stopped and turned around. The cop stood in front of me
He said "alright Cameron settle down" I smiled before I leaned back I could hear him cussing and swearing as I fell down the cliff side I snapped open my wings. I stayed low down toward the ground so he wouldn't see me. I touched the ground as I heard sirens blaring. I smiled and went into the trees and through the forest. I climbed up the tallest Tree and fell asleep. I went to the orphanage because my mother Maximum Ride did it to protect me from my Uncle Dylan who competes with My father Fang, For my mother which becomes super annoying... I was with my mother for 6 years before she put me in the orphanage, now I'm 13 and still haven't been adopted. So I ran away from that place. My parents aren't dead I just have to find them in the whole united states of America... Oh damn that's going to be hard but where are my parents now... I don't know how to swim or anything, I just know how to fly... I have a 17 foot wingspan ad I have a mix of brown and black hair. My hair starts out brown at the top then turns black at the lower end of my hair. My wings are a mix one's brown the other is black. Oh Shit there's the cops..
Okay so tell me what ca think when your done and plus they're might be a secret character coming into this