Heyy! This is my first story that I have taken down and fixed and put back
up again. Anyway I own nothing, except any new characters you see in the
story. Some characters are going to be a little out of character. So, read
and review I guess. If you see any mistakes or have questions ask in a
review and I'll answer it in the next chapter posted. And please don't
flame, if you want to correct something then that's fine but if you don't
like the story don't bother telling me just stop reading it. Ok? Excellent,
glad we got that covered. Anyways here's the first chapter of the fixed
version.
Chapter one: Hospital.
"Oh my God! I can't do this! Drugs! Give drugs!" A girl screamed as she gripped her boyfriend's hand. "Ow! Hermione relax! Breathe! And let me go!" Her boyfriend cried, trying to free himself from Hermione's death grip. "Draco! I need drugs! It hurts! It's all your fault!" Hermione said releasing Draco and leaving him to tend to his now bruised hand. "My fault? I don't think so. It takes two people to have a child not one, if I'm correct which I know I am." He stated smugly. "I know, I know sorry. This just hurts - ow! So much." She told him crying softly. "I know it does love, but it'll be over soon." He told her and lightly kissed her on the forehead.
"Hermione dear, please try not to scream so loud! You're going to wake the whole castle!" Madam Pomfrey said walking into the hospital wing, followed closely by Professor McGonagall. "That is she hasn't already." Draco mumbled to himself, luckily no one had heard.
"I quite agree Miss Sna- I mean Miss Granger. No one said having a baby was going to be easy," McGonagall said coming to stand beside her bed. "Plus, no one can find out about Mr. Malfoy here being the father, until-," She trailed off. Draco and Hermione both knowing what she was going to say. "Anyway what's done is done. And Mr. Malfoy we must ask you to leave now." Pomfrey said.
Draco of course didn't go quietly, Hermione screaming his name and begging him not to leave didn't help in the slightest. So before he left he blew her a kiss and mouthed ' I love you' before he turned and walked out, wiping a tear from his cheek with the back of his hand.
Meanwhile in the waiting room Mrs.Granger and Mrs. Malfoy were having quite an excellent conversation about baby things. Mr. Granger and Mr. Malfoy on the other hand, were both pacing back and forth and back and forth and back and forth, oh sorry I guess I got carried away. Anyway you get the idea.
"What could be taking so long?!" Lucius asked his wife. "It didn't take you this long to just pop Draco out." He said stopping in front of Narcissia. "Excuse me? How would you know how long it took? You were passed out on the floor if I recall correctly. You woke up long enough to hear 'it's a boy' then you passed out again." Narcissia told him smirking. Lucius turned pink.
"Pink's a good color for you Lucius." Harry Potter said grinning. "Shut it Potter. And not a word from you Weasley." Lucius growled. Harry and Ron smirked. (A/N Harry, Ron, Lucius, Narcissia, John (Mr.Granger), Sarah (Mrs. Granger), Dumbeldore, and Snape are in the waiting room. Ok? Grand)
"They kick me out! The nerve of them! My child is being born and they kick me out!" They heard Draco say to himself as he came around the corner. They all looked at him. "So, you have been kicked out? What on earth for?!" Harry asked bewildered. "I don't know, I should be there, this is my child were talking about." Draco said sitting down to wait with the rest of them. Lucius and John went back to pacing, Sarah and Narcissa went back to discussing baby things, Ron and Harry were as usual talking about quidditch, Dumbledore and Snape had gone somewhere and Draco was sitting with his head in his hands hoping for the time to pass quickly.
So, the hours went by, and they all became very impatient. Draco had started to pace with John and Lucius. "Boys, will you stop? Relax, sit down but stop pacing!" Sarah said. Draco sighed and sat down beside Harry who was asleep. "This is going to drive me nuts, I need to be in there, I need to know what's going on, and I need Hermione." He said. "Yes, well-" Sarah stopped. "Draco?" Draco jumped up. McGonagall had come into the hall where they were all waiting. "Well? Can I see her? What's happened?" "Yes, you can see her now, but-" McGonagall didn't get to finish her sentence as he was out of his chair and running as fast as he could towards the hospital wing.
Ha! I have finished chapter one, this chapter didn't actually need that many changes. Anyways, till the next chapter, bye bye.
Chapter one: Hospital.
"Oh my God! I can't do this! Drugs! Give drugs!" A girl screamed as she gripped her boyfriend's hand. "Ow! Hermione relax! Breathe! And let me go!" Her boyfriend cried, trying to free himself from Hermione's death grip. "Draco! I need drugs! It hurts! It's all your fault!" Hermione said releasing Draco and leaving him to tend to his now bruised hand. "My fault? I don't think so. It takes two people to have a child not one, if I'm correct which I know I am." He stated smugly. "I know, I know sorry. This just hurts - ow! So much." She told him crying softly. "I know it does love, but it'll be over soon." He told her and lightly kissed her on the forehead.
"Hermione dear, please try not to scream so loud! You're going to wake the whole castle!" Madam Pomfrey said walking into the hospital wing, followed closely by Professor McGonagall. "That is she hasn't already." Draco mumbled to himself, luckily no one had heard.
"I quite agree Miss Sna- I mean Miss Granger. No one said having a baby was going to be easy," McGonagall said coming to stand beside her bed. "Plus, no one can find out about Mr. Malfoy here being the father, until-," She trailed off. Draco and Hermione both knowing what she was going to say. "Anyway what's done is done. And Mr. Malfoy we must ask you to leave now." Pomfrey said.
Draco of course didn't go quietly, Hermione screaming his name and begging him not to leave didn't help in the slightest. So before he left he blew her a kiss and mouthed ' I love you' before he turned and walked out, wiping a tear from his cheek with the back of his hand.
Meanwhile in the waiting room Mrs.Granger and Mrs. Malfoy were having quite an excellent conversation about baby things. Mr. Granger and Mr. Malfoy on the other hand, were both pacing back and forth and back and forth and back and forth, oh sorry I guess I got carried away. Anyway you get the idea.
"What could be taking so long?!" Lucius asked his wife. "It didn't take you this long to just pop Draco out." He said stopping in front of Narcissia. "Excuse me? How would you know how long it took? You were passed out on the floor if I recall correctly. You woke up long enough to hear 'it's a boy' then you passed out again." Narcissia told him smirking. Lucius turned pink.
"Pink's a good color for you Lucius." Harry Potter said grinning. "Shut it Potter. And not a word from you Weasley." Lucius growled. Harry and Ron smirked. (A/N Harry, Ron, Lucius, Narcissia, John (Mr.Granger), Sarah (Mrs. Granger), Dumbeldore, and Snape are in the waiting room. Ok? Grand)
"They kick me out! The nerve of them! My child is being born and they kick me out!" They heard Draco say to himself as he came around the corner. They all looked at him. "So, you have been kicked out? What on earth for?!" Harry asked bewildered. "I don't know, I should be there, this is my child were talking about." Draco said sitting down to wait with the rest of them. Lucius and John went back to pacing, Sarah and Narcissa went back to discussing baby things, Ron and Harry were as usual talking about quidditch, Dumbledore and Snape had gone somewhere and Draco was sitting with his head in his hands hoping for the time to pass quickly.
So, the hours went by, and they all became very impatient. Draco had started to pace with John and Lucius. "Boys, will you stop? Relax, sit down but stop pacing!" Sarah said. Draco sighed and sat down beside Harry who was asleep. "This is going to drive me nuts, I need to be in there, I need to know what's going on, and I need Hermione." He said. "Yes, well-" Sarah stopped. "Draco?" Draco jumped up. McGonagall had come into the hall where they were all waiting. "Well? Can I see her? What's happened?" "Yes, you can see her now, but-" McGonagall didn't get to finish her sentence as he was out of his chair and running as fast as he could towards the hospital wing.
Ha! I have finished chapter one, this chapter didn't actually need that many changes. Anyways, till the next chapter, bye bye.