First fanfic review and maybe suggest some things I could add and I might do romance between kallen and lulu or CC and lulu tell me what you think I don't really know lol \_^_^_/
"Damn that hurt, I wasn't expecting it to hurt that much." I said until I realized where I was. "This place... It's not familiar." I muttered there was nothing but fog, thick dense fog. I was lying on the ground but I managed to break away from my thoughts. I stood up and began to wander around unable to even see my own hand in front of my face.
I herd I quiet laugh that sounded like a girl "this story can't end now I've been very amused at what you've been doing hehe."
'what the fuck' I thought to my self " who the hell are you!" I yelled.
"after all, the game has just begun, right Lelouch, heheh." she whispered into my ear.
My eyes opened fast I took a huge breath in a exhaled it all out. My mind was filled with questions like 'who the hell was that!?' and 'where the fuck am I!?' but all these thoughts immediately stopped. I clenched my chest with my hand" aww fuuuuuck," I screamed in pain writhing on the ground. Suddenly the pain started to disappear I looked down to my chest to. See the wound heeling and an insignia was burning on the back of my hand but for some unknown reason it did not hurt. I looked around well laying on the ground light was shining through the green trees. 'ok so it's probably spring or summer, I'm in a forest, with only rugged white pants that look torn to be shorts with no shirt on. Well this is so fuckin' weird.' I thought to my self. I felt something in my chest my vision became blurry seeing a figure walk over me. "Nunnally..." my voice drifted as my vision becam blurry until it was complete darkness.
Sorry it was so short, I want to know what people think of it before I let loose and write if there is really anyone that's reading this. Also review and suggest something I could do with it. Also I'm not sure what I should do with the insignia on his hand so tell me something I should do or send it to me if that's possible I don't really know I'm new and I'm just figuring it all out. ^_^