v0.3

Chapter 0:

(Changes...)

If you only care about the story, skip this chapter.

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This is chapter 0 and only serves as a list of revisions:

Chapter 0:

07/30/07 Added chapter. Revised to v0.1.

07/30/07 Edit of chapter 1, fix spelling error, revised to v0.2.

07/31/07 Added chapter, revised to v0.3.

Chapter 1:

07/30/07 Added chapter.

07/30/07 Revised to v0.1, adding a small bit of dialog between Ayane, Ryu, and "Anonymous", fixed some spelling errors.

07/30/07 Revamp with Zaddy, many edits, including extra character talk, feeling, and general adding of material, background and character body description. Revised to v0.2.

08/01/07 Few changes, mostly added a few descriptions, revised to v0.3.

/08/08/07 Revised to v0.4 few edits, adding of material.

/08/11/07 Revised to v0.5 added a little bit extra to Inuyasha.

Chapter 2:

07/31/07 Added chapter.

07/31/07 Small edit, adding a few sentences and rephrasing a few, revised to v0.1.

08/01/07 Another small edit, rephrasing some words, adding stuph, revised to v0.2.

08/11/07 Revised to v0.3, rewrote the conversation between Ryu and Ayane near the end.

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Please remember that this is a work in progress and is in no way finished, I will add / remove / edit content as I please.

-ARCKEDA