v0.3
Chapter 0:
(Changes...)
If you only care about the story, skip this chapter.
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They don't have to be positive, but if you review I swear to god that I will considering incorporating what you think into my fiction, pointing out typos, ideas, and questions are always nice. :)
This is chapter 0 and only serves as a list of revisions:
Chapter 0:
07/30/07 Added chapter. Revised to v0.1.
07/30/07 Edit of chapter 1, fix spelling error, revised to v0.2.
07/31/07 Added chapter, revised to v0.3.
Chapter 1:
07/30/07 Added chapter.
07/30/07 Revised to v0.1, adding a small bit of dialog between Ayane, Ryu, and "Anonymous", fixed some spelling errors.
07/30/07 Revamp with Zaddy, many edits, including extra character talk, feeling, and general adding of material, background and character body description. Revised to v0.2.
08/01/07 Few changes, mostly added a few descriptions, revised to v0.3.
/08/08/07 Revised to v0.4 few edits, adding of material.
/08/11/07 Revised to v0.5 added a little bit extra to Inuyasha.
Chapter 2:
07/31/07 Added chapter.
07/31/07 Small edit, adding a few sentences and rephrasing a few, revised to v0.1.
08/01/07 Another small edit, rephrasing some words, adding stuph, revised to v0.2.
08/11/07 Revised to v0.3, rewrote the conversation between Ryu and Ayane near the end.
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Please remember that this is a work in progress and is in no way finished, I will add / remove / edit content as I please.
-ARCKEDA
