This is my first fanfic plz tell me how it was :)

Naruto walked into Tsunade's office and asked,''whats the big emergency?''

''There have been spottings of rogue ninja outside the village," relpied Tsunade.

"And you want me to go alone and defeat them like the awesome ninja I am?" said Naruto.

"No," said Tsunade,"Hinata and Sakura will be accompaning you."

"Oh," replied Naruto," thats a bummer but oh well when do we have to go?"

"As soon as your ready...and you better be ready in five minutes."

As Naruto left the office and got outside he spotted Sakura and Hinata waiting outside.

"Hurry up Naruto we have to go now." bursted Sakura

"Ok, ok I'll be back in a minute." replied Naruto.

Naruto grabbed all of his ninja gear and went to the gate where sakura and Hinata were waiting.

On there way out Naruto started complaining about how he was hungry.

"Shut up Naruto we're on a mission your going to have to wait until we're done with the mission.

Right as she said that a shuriken whizzed right past them and stuck right out of the trunk of the tree.

"Hide." Naruto shouted.

Everyone ran and hid under the brush.

In front of sakura landed a ninja and said

"Come out, come out wherever you are." he said.

Naruto popped out from under a bush and threw a shuriken and it hit him in the shoulder.

"Ow that hurt you punk." the ninja said," your going to regret that."

Naruto pulled out two more shurikens but a kunai hit him in the right arm and he dropped the shuriken in pain.

"I wouldn't do that if I were you." mocked the ninja

"Fine then have it your way." said Naruto "Shadow-clone justu."

The real Naruto slipped away behind a bush as all of the shadow clones were hit with shurikens and kunais.Naruto winked at Hinata and she jumped into the tree above. A ninja dropped out of a tree, then two more, then another. Then Hinata came falling. Naruto ran from his cover and caught just before she hit the ground. Three ninjas came from their hiding spots in the trees.

"Looky here what do we have? Two small fries trying to get rid of us eh?

A kunai popped out from under the bushes and was flung at the ninja in front but he deflected it and said,
"get out you cowerd." he said, then paused " well then I'll get you myself. He ran to the bush grabbed Sakura and flung her on the ground in front of Naruto who was still holding Hinata.

"Your going to regret that," yelled Naruto, " If you ever touch one of us again I will kill you."

"Ha what are you going to do hurt me I'm so scared," he said, he picked up Sakura and held a kunai up to her neck and said if you get any closer your little friend here gets it."

Naruto set Hinata down and said " I told you if you touched one of us again I'll kill you."

"Shadow-clone justu,'' yelled Naruto.

Fifty clones formed and they all jumped at the ninja he dropped Sakura and fought off the clones. After all of the clones were killed Just Naruto, Hinata, Sakura, and the rogue ninja was left. Naruto charged the ninja and threw several punches but he blocked them all.

"Why won't you just accept defeat little kid?" mocked the ninja.

"Because I am Naruto Uzumaki, that is why I won't accept defeat," yelled Naruto

"Well since you told me your name I might as well tell you mine, its Mizuki."

"Well sorry Mizuki but I won't lose so get ready," blurted Naruto.