Behold my first stories is now revised. I know that it was my most popular story, but I felt like it needed to be better being that it was a few years old. I hope that you all enjoy it.
chapter 1:
Prince Gumball was always getting prince-napped by that creepy old cougar, Ice Queen. Fionna was tired of saving him.
Sure he was cute, smart, and everything she wanted, but he didn't love her back. She was wondering why he didn't. She has been his best friend for about 4 years now. Was it because she wasn't a princess, or that she was an adventuress?
I mean Lord Monochromacorn was already dating Cake. It wasn't fair for her. All she wanted was to have Gumball like her back and maybe have a chance with him.
Fionna sighed. Her heart was always being broken. She was tired of it. It made her want to punch something. Or someone.
Aaa was never a boring place though. There is always someone to save or a place to go adventuring. She could even go to Lumpy Space and see Lumpy Space Prince (LSP). She could even visit Marshal Lee the "Vampire King" (his mom still thinks that she is the Vampire Queen in the nightO'sphere).
She didn't care much for Marshal's mother much anyway's, so she didn't care what she thought.
She went through their whole conversation again in her head.
She finally beat Ice Queen. Fionna was bruised and cut up from her ice shards, but she didn't care.
"You are grounded four a month. Got it?" She said to Ice Queen. She clearly didn't like it, but she knew better than to argue with Fionna.
She and Gumball walked out of the Ice Kingdom, out into the cold. Fionna thought that it felt nice against her sores.
"Thank you, my dear, Fionna." Gumball said sweetly. She blushed.
"It's nothing." She mumbled.
"I mean it, she is cray-Zee with a capital Z." He joked. This made her laugh. She had a nagging feeling in the pit of her stomach.
"Hey PG? Can... Can I ask you something?" She asked knowing that nagging feeling all too well. He simply nodded. "What would you say if I told you I told you that I really liked you?" He sighed as he stopped walking. She paused beside him.
"Fionna I know how you truly feel about me, I have known since you were thirteen, but... " He paused and looked at her. He looked sad. "I am very sorry Fionna. I just... Don't feel the same way. I do care about you, but it is like a younger sister to me and not... Not like you like me." He said sadly.
Fionna felt crushed. She dropped her head and stared at her feet.
"Fionna?" He asked.
"No... No it's fine, I figured you didn't, but... I... I just needed to hear it." She turned away from him and started walking away.
Fionna teared up just thinking about this.
She shook her head to try and forget about it, but to no avail. She sighed again and continued on her path to her home. Hopefully she wouldn't be crying when she arrived, this was a day that she would much rather not tell to her overprotective sister, Cake.
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Marshal Lee knew how he felt about his little adventuress.
"Fi, why don't you love me. Fi, oh, Fi don't you know I love you? Please just love me. I need you in my life…" He was singing to himself while he played his ax bass. "Urg." He exclaimed.
He tore the piece of paper up that he had it written down on. That wasn't good ether. How was he supposed to tell her if he can't write a single love song to her? Yeah she was 16, but she already loved someone else. He didn't know what she saw in him, well he did but there not even alike in anyway.
Well, neither was Fionna and him. But there was a saying opposites attract, so maybe he did have a chance with her.
At least he hoped so.
He was in love with her and he didn't know how to tell her.
I mean he was lumpin' in love and it was hard for him to love anyone. He was supposed to be hard as rock (pun intended) and as tough as nails (pun also intended). He was the Vampire King. But he had a soft side for the last human did he have this feelings for her?
He didn't have the answer for that, and he hated not knowing. He wanted to tell her how he felt, he just didn't know to break it to her, since she was head over heels for Prince Gum-butt. He hated that guy, he would say it to his stupid pink face, too.
OK maybe not in front of Fionna but still. He felt like he needed to punch something every time he even thought about him.
He could do that to her. He's been writing songs about her since he first met her. Wow he had feelings for her when she was 12 years old. But there was also Cake he had to worry about if she found out she would be on him faster than a cheetah could. She would hunt him down and shove garlic down his throat, or stab him with a wooden stack repeatedly until he "bled to death". He could only smile at the thought of seeing her try.
He thought about Fionna. Her smile, her beautiful hair, her strong spirit. He loved everything about her. Her laugh was infectious.
He just loved being near her.
He sighed. He made a split decision that he would tell her, no matter the consequences. He would tell her the next time that he saw her. And that was a promise to himself.
A/N: This still is the same story, just hopefully with more depth to it. It also has longer chapter's. Review!