New story

Pairings

Minato/Kushina

Mito/?

Naruto/? No real pairing just implied. Like Boyfriend/Girlfriend.

Nagato not an Uzumaki

Will have some Star Wars elements. You'll know it when you see it.

Good Orochimaru Good Itachi No Uchiha clan massacre

Prolog: Dark Child of Prophecy

A man in black armor covered from head to toe, his face covered by a black and red full face mask, fell to the ground. His breathing heavy and labored. This man was Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze, and he was dying. Slain by a close loved one.

Naruto POV

How did it come to this? How...? Have I succeeded in what I tried to accomplish? I... I am the Dark Child of Prophecy. At least... I think I am. I wonder... was my sister the true Child of Prophecy? How did it come to this? Slain... by my own sister. Oh... now I remember. It started... 18 years ago. When we were born. My twin sister and I.

(Mass Story Flash Back)

18 years ago the nine tailed fox was taken from our mother Kushina, by a man. He put us on this path. Me on this path. My father, Minato Namikaze fought and sealed the Kyuubi, 1 half into my younger twin sister and the other half back into our mother Kushina. Although our father said he meant to seal it in me instead of Mito, named after our great great grandmother Mito Uzumaki, my sister. But he was in a hurry and grabbed her by mistake. Not that either me or Mito blamed him. Growing up was alright. Mito was hailed as a hero just like father and mother for holding back the Kyuubi once more. Sometimes I felt like I didn't belong in the family. Sometimes I'd be forgotten in favor of Mito, but I didn't mind. She was a hero. I... was just a son of a hero and a brother of a hero. But no matter what we were close. When we we're younger we shared the same bed, not like that you sick pervs. Like twin brother and sister.

I was 5 when I heard of pervy godfather Jiraiya and the Child of Prophecy warning. I was coming from the bathroom when I heard my mother yell at the old guy.

"Say that again Jiraiya!" My mother said, in a dangerous tone I've heard before when some Uchiha named Fugaku would try to get my sister married to his youngest son.

"It's a prophecy I heard from the elder Toad Sage years back." He said

(Small flashback)

"Many years from now, a child will be born, this child will be the first male born Uzumaki of the all female Uzumaki clan. This child, well hold the fate of not only the ninja world, but the world as a whole. He was either save the world... or destroy it. And but a signal action he will make will affect his future. The path of Light and salvation. Or the path of Darkness and destruction." The elder toad sage said.

"And... what is this action?" A younger Jiraiya asked the old toad on one knee.

"The action that will decide the fate of the world... will be a small simple act of kindness."

(Small flash back end)

"That's what he said to me." He finished.

"So, our boy is destined to save the world. Wow, how many mothers can say that their son will save the world." Kushina looked happy.

"Kushina, he might destroy the world as well." Jiraiya said.

"Are you saying my baby boy will destroy the world Jiraiya! I hope not, no boy of mine will become evil!" Kushina defended her son.

"All I'm saying is that he could. I mean, come on Kushina. Even I at first thought a male born Uzumaki would never exists. I mean no matter what all Uzumaki women give birth to females. When I heard that Naruto was born I froze. I remembered what the old toad said and everything he ever said has come true." Jiraiya defended.

"I don't care! Naruto will not become evil Jiraiya! Your toad sage has gone senile if he thinks that my boy will become evil!" Kushina made her way to the door. "Now if you excuse me. I'm going to tuck my babies in bed." She finished.

I ran to my and Mito's room. I jumped in bed with Mito.

"Brother?"

"Shh! Go back to sleep. Mother is coming." I say quietly.

Soon after our mother walked in. She kissed us on our foreheads. "Goodnight mama's special baby girl. Good night mama's special baby boy." She said to us.

"Night mama." We said together.

I wasn't less loved then my sister in the family. Just by the village. Council and all. When we we're 5 we came into our own so to speak. I looked more like dad and acted like mom, while Mito looked more like mom and acted like dad. The only two things that we had in common 1: we both had blue eyes and 2: we both had whisker mark from birth. From the Kyuubi no less. However, it was when we were 6 that everything went to hell for me and my family. It was here that the small simple act of kindness was now. It was our first day at the ninja academy. Father as at his Hokage desk doing paper work. Or really watching his shadow clones do the paper work while he lay on the sofa in the office of his. Mother was walking us to school. We made it out of the gate when.

"Oh no!" Mito yelled checking herself.

"What?" Mother asked.

"I forgot my kunai holster inside the house! I thought I grabbed it." Mito yelled.

"Mito you dummy." I yelled at her.

"Naruto that's not nice." Mother scolded me.

"I'll go back and get it!" Mito was about to run in.

"No, I'll go get it. Where is it?"

"On the desk near our room." Mito told me.

"Got it. I'll be back in a moment." I ran into our home. Searching for my sister's kunai holster. I looked for it all around the room and the dresser. "Dang it! It's never where Mito puts it." Then I saw it. Right in front of my face. "Oh. Well, I take it back." I walked up to it and picked it up. "Got ya." I heard a sound. A hissing sound. I looked at the hissing sound. It was a paper bomb where my sister's kunai holster. A red seal array was then showed; it traveled all around our home. I was too shocked to move. "Oh Shi"

(BOOM)

A massive explosion accrued, and I was set on fire from head to toe.

"AHHHH!"

"NARUTO!

Outside my mother yelled. But I was in too much pain. I felt the fire burn me skin off, it burned me to even to this day I remember seeing a man in an orange mask. I never thought about it.

"NARUTO!" I heard my mom yell. She gasped in shock when she saw me on fire. She used a strong water jutsu and it put me out. But the damage was done to me.

She took me to the hospital where Tsunade and the best doctors tried to save my life. And they... unfortunately... succeed. They saved my life. But that's all they saved.

(Normal POV)

Tsunade was looking at Naruto's chart. She and a dozen doctors spent the better part of 2 days trying to save Naruto's life. But the damage to his body was devastating. Tsunade walked up to Kushina, Minato and Mito.

"How bad is it Tsunade?" Minato asked in a fearful voice.

Tsunade sighed. "Bad, 94% of his body suffered 3rd degree burns, the other 6% suffered 1st and 2nd degree burns. I thought he was going to die 8 times in the first 12 hours of surgery alone. He's alive by sheer willpower alone." She told them. Kushina and Mito where crying hugging Minato. Minato was trying to comfort his family. "But I'm afraid that is where the good news ends." She didn't want to say what she was going to say next.

"What do you mean?" Kushina asked fearful.

"The damage by the fire... destroyed his chakra system." Tsunade waited.

"WHAT! HOW CAN THAT BE!" Minato asked. Fire doesn't destroy chakra.

Tsunade took a breath. "The fire was laced with corrosive chakra. This was no accident Minato. Someone tried to kill your son." She said. "The ANBU that you sent to investigate said they found a burned paper. It was destroyed by the fire but they said that it had a chakra signature that they couldn't identify before it turned to dust. I can only assume that this was an assassination attempt."

"Oh no." Kushina had a relation.

"What is it honey?" Minato asked his wife.

"Mito said that she forgot her kunai holster. She was going to get it herself when Naruto went for her. Could Mito be the real target?" Kushina was fearful. Some tried to kill her son and may be after her daughter.

"Maybe. But Naruto, I'm afraid, won't be able to use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. His body is too damaged to use Taijutsu. And all of his internal organs suffered manger trauma. Again, Naruto by all counts should be dead. But he lives." Tsunade couldn't take it anymore and had to leave.

Inside Naruto heard the conversation. A lone tear left his eye as the machines kept him alive. His dream to be Hokage... up in flames.

It took 6 months before Naruto could leave the hospital. Even then he needed to be brought in weekly for an exam to make sure he was alright. Naruto no longer looked like his father. Without everything he used to cover himself with, he was bald, pale white and all of his body was either scar tissue or looked like a skeleton. The few parts of his body that were somewhat alright was the top right corner of his head. But it didn't matter. His body was so badly damage his muscles were all but gone. He needed a cane to help him walk. His sister and mother was always near him. Also because of his damaged body he never left his room unless it was for the bathroom, to eat with the family or for his checkups. But he couldn't eat normal food anymore, just baby food as his damage was that severe. He also needed a respirator to help him breath for the rest of his life. Even his eyes were no longer the same. The fire had damaged them as well they turned yellow and where was white was now red.

(Naruto POV)

It was when I was 7 when I was heading for my parents room. Mito and got our own rooms because if she hugged me she could injury me. And that's what I wanted to talk about. Neither of us liked it. It was said that Uzumaki twins don't like to be away from each other. I guess that we are the same. However I could feel my body weakening, there would be no point to keep me alive longer then necessary. When Mito is old enough to let go. That is where I heard the news my mom and dad got that day. I had another check up and I saw the face grandma Tsunade made.

"Why!" I heard my mom yell. "Why is it that we are cursed like this Minato? Our son is barely alive because of someone that hates us! He lost his dream to be Hokage like you. To be great like the both of us. Why! Why it is that he must lose his life too!" My mom said crying into our father's chest.

I knew they were talking about me. So I continued to listen in on the conversation.

"I know. I'm sorry. We can't let this discourage Naruto or Mito. All we can do is make Naruto's last mouths of life as conformable as possible." Minato told his grieving wife.

"Why!" She was crying even more now. "Why must we lose our son to gain another child?"

I was shocked. My mom was pregnant. With a younger sibling a sister or brother. We didn't have to wait long. 8 months or so later our mom gave birth to a baby girl; she must have been pregnant for a while. She was a bundle of energy. Mom named her Naruko. I didn't understand it at the time. But they named her after me. But I felt my life waning. I would cough more and more. Mito looked worried for me. I saw mom and dad looked fearful for my life as well. They knew my time was almost at an end. I knew my time was almost at an end.

One day mom left to walk Mito to school with Naruko. Dad was at work and I was left by myself again. I felt my time coming near. I cried for the first time since I heard that my dream was gone. My regret was I wouldn't see my sister become the Hokage. The first female Hokage like our mother wanted. I would fight. I would fight to stay alive long enough to see my sister become Hokage. I vowed that day I would. But...

"Well well well what do we have here?"

I heard a voice. I was almost fearful. I saw an orange mask, with a spiral. I remembered it as the same one that I saw when I was on fire. Fear came back to my eyes.

"Abandoned by your own family." He said to me. "Abandoned to die alone... how does that feel Naruto?" He asked.

"My family loves me! They didn't abandoned me!" I yelled at him.

"Oh? Then how did I get in here again?" I didn't answer. "I would tell you why but I really don't care to tell you right now. I'm just going to leave you a going away present." He placed a paper right above me, just out of reach. He also tossed my cane out the window. I was stuck until mom got home or Rin got there to watch over him she was suppose to be there by now. "I do hope you enjoy my present to you. Think of it as punishment to your mother and father for ruining my plans. I've also placed the same seals all around your home." He smiled evilly. "But I'm not done Naruto." He raised his blade. Then he cut off my right arm. Just above the elbow. I didn't scream. I saw his face, he was mad that I didn't. I saw the anger in his lone eye. He then cut off both of my legs just above the knee. I did not scream. He was beyond pissed now. I just smiled at him. "What's the matter... can't make a kid younger... then ten scream?" I smiled at his anger. Not the best thing to do but I did it.

"Goodbye child. I do hope you die painfully." He said then vanished in a vortex like thing.

I heard the hissing sound. I looked to the seal; I had 60 or so seconds before it blew. I knew I couldn't escape. I grabbed my note pad that was near me. I left one last message to my family. Then I tossed it out the window. Soon after, I was engulfed in flames once again. I didn't yell. I didn't scream. I let the flames consume me. I didn't give that asshole the satisfaction that he managed to make me cry out in pain.

(Normal POV)

Kushina came home when she heard that there home was once again torched. She fell to her knees. She almost dropped her new born baby. The ANBU were looking for the son of the forth Hokage. Looking through the ruble. Mito came home and screamed when she saw her home where her brother was.

Hours passed and the ANBU didn't find a body just an arm and 2 legs. They looked like they belonged to a child. It could have only been one person. Naruto was declared dead. Later that day.

"Kushina-sensei." Kushina looked up to see a purpled haired ANBU approach her. It was one of her students, Yugao. "I found this near your home. It's Naruto's." She handed her Naruto's note pad. It had many notes in it that he kept. She hugged it close. She had lost everything about her son.

Later that week the Namikaze family had a funeral for Naruto.

It would be weeks before Kushina found Naruto's last note. "MINATO!" Kushina yelled. Both Mito and Minato, both still grieving over Naruto death, ran to Kushina. She was holding Naruto's note pad close to her chest. Crying her eyes out. Minato was trying to comfort his wife, she was still not over Naruto's death. Kushina dropped the note pad Mito picked it up.

"Look at the last page." Kushina said while crying.

Mito crawled up close to her parents and turned to the last page. It read.

This will be my last note in this book. As I will die soon.

To my Mother, father and two younger sisters Naruko and Mito.

I love you. No matter what I will always love you.

As I am about to die I will tell you who killed me.

A man in an orange mask with a spiral on it to his eye. He did it to me the first time.

Burned me beyond recondition and now this time with my death.

He said it is punishment to mom and dad for stopping his plains.

I love you all... good bye.

Love Naruto

That was the last note Naruto wrote before he died. The family cried but Kushina and Minato were angry. The man that set their life and made their oldest daughter a Jinchuuriki and now killed their only son. Mito however, made a promise. A vow.

"I promise you big brother. I will kill this man." Mito vowed. But she needed to get strong. She trained and trained hard. She trained all the time. Sometimes not paying attention unless it was training. However, her Mother and younger sister prevented her from become an avenger. She became kind to her little sister over the years. The young girl was told how her older now dead brother said he would be Hokage someday. Now her older sister will do it for him. Little Naru was also always around Mito, Mito didn't mind. She turned from the path of the avenger before she could walk it. Her sister and parents helped with that. But she will still kill the man that first destroyed her older brother's dream then later killed him.

Time passed and now she was 12. She didn't graduate early as her parents didn't want her too. She didn't care, she would graduate with her friends and be a great ninja. She hoped that she could bring her brother's murder to justice. But for some reason, a reason she could not explain, she felt that her brother wasn't dead. "Brother, if you're dead, please, watch me." She said. "And if you are alive. Wait for me, wait for me to find you and bring you back home." She had a tear in her eye. She will always miss her big brother.

(Naruto POV)

However, I did not die that day.

(Small flash back)

I was on fire when another vortex opened. A man with long black spiky hair with armor came into view. I recognized him from book. Madara... Uchiha.

"It would seem that my ware ward apprentice did this to you child." With a wave of his hand, the fire was put out. But the burns were already great. I wouldn't live this time. I was too weak for before. All this man did was making me suffer longer. "My old apprentice has turned from my teachings." He said as he picked me up. "Come child, I need a new apprentice. One that will be stronger than him. I wonder if what I'm doing is the right thing." We left into another vortex he made.

(Small flash back end)

We left and arrived into a village. And it was raining. "Nagato!" He yelled.

A man rushed to him. Along with a blue haired women. She grasped and nearly vomited at the site of me. I looked like a burnet mummy.

"I need your best to save the child's life. And I need them now." Pain nodded. He knew what was at stake.

When they placed me in a bed the doctors got to work. "My lord his arm must be amputated. We cannot save it." The head doctor said. Nagato nodded.

I was still very much awake. They had no time for pain killers as I was knocking on deaths door. They worked fast. They cut off my arm and worked on my body with an experimental procedure. They replaced my arms and legs with metal limbs. Connected to my nervous system. But my body was frail and would break. So they encased me in a metal suit, or imprisoned me as it were, because from now on I would die without it. It was black, with a built in respirator as they were told I needed one for life. They put the respirator over my mouth and connect it to my face. I could lower it for a bit if I wanted. Not that I needed too. Then finally a face mask. The back came first, covering the back of my head with locks for the mask. It covered my face with a long but small eye visor it was red and black. It went over my respirator to cover my weakness as it were. (AN: Think Darth Raven's mask) The locks clicked locked. I was reborn as it were. Or, I was cursed with the affliction of living. It took a few mouths to get use to my new body. But I wasn't in any pain anymore. In fact, I felt nothing. No pain, no happiness, no nothing. I was alive but not alive at the same time. I was... just there.

Madara came up to me soon after that was over and done with.

"Come young one. First we must think of a new name for you. Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze is dead. You are a new being now. What shall your name be?" Madara asked me.

I thought about it. I couldn't think of one for a while. I like my name, it meant hope to me and my family. But I wasn't Naruto anymore. I was someone else. Something else. I was no longer the son of a hero. I was the product of a villain. I was...

"You're new name is... Darth Nemesis." He told me. Then it was done, it was then that I became the thing that Jiraiya feared. I became the ninja's world destroyer. The Dark Child of Prophecy.

"Come Darth Nemesis, we have much to do." Madara said to me.

He told me everything he told his first apprentice. How the Sage of the six paths was really a women. His and the first Hokage's mother. His plan to untie the world under the banner of the leaf village. But his old student just waited to rule the world, not help it like he wanted. Now that I wanted. He trained me. Now that I had a new body I could fight. But I was no ninja. Never was going to be. But now I was something else. I was great and grand. Soon after Madara had me make a sword. I made it out of obsidian black metal. Madara placed seals that allowed red lighting past through it. The electricity made my sword able to cut through anything. And so it did. People place or thing my sword went through anything I wanted it to pass through. At age ten I had killed over 100 people. Not a lot compared to some, but I'm just starting. Madara also taught me strategy and tactics. So I could be unmatched by anyone else in the world. Something his old apprentice didn't take the time to do. It was when I turned 11 that Madara passed away leaving me with the burden to fulfill his desire. To unite the world under one banner. I will deliver, at any cost. Even if my mother and sister must sacrifice something. But before he died he told me one last thing.

"Darth Nemesis, there is one final thing you must know. The tailed beasts were once a whole creature. But my mother, the first Sage of the Six Paths broke it apart as you know, but what I didn't tell my other apprentice as he had no patience for this, the tailed beast needed to be sealed in a particular order. With the 9 tails being the last one to be sealed. As it has not only the most power but has the most intelligence. Sealing them out of order would not work and you would lose everything you worked for." He took one of his final breaths. "I will tell you what you need to know..." There he told me what I needed to know to seal the tailed beasts. I smiled, a cruel smile. I just needed all of the Jinchuuriki alive for it to work. I would take my time. But it will work.

For a full year I allowed Nagato or Pain to run Akatsuki. It didn't matter to me. We had 10 members strong. Pain, Konan, Sasori, Kisame, Kakuzu, Hidan, Zetsu, Daidara, Orochimaru and myself. 10 of us, 9 tailed best. Simple really we each capture one. Daidara will get 1, Hidan will get 2, Sasori will get 3, Orochimaru will get 4, Kakuzu will get 5, Kisame will get 6, I'll get 7, Pain will get 8 and I'll get 9. We'll change as needed but that was simple. But we needed to prepare first. So we acted like a mercenary group. Doing jobs for money, Kakuzu loved this part. As he knew the best places to get the best deals and the most money. Although the rest of the group thought we needed money we didn't. It was just a front like any other. Only I knew what was needed and what was going to happen for my goals. But this was a fine mask. Now that I was 12, it was time to move. To make everything I worked for, come true.

(Normal POV)

10 see through figures came together in a dark cave.

"So, where going after the tailed beasts now?" Asked one of the holograms asked.

"Yes, in order to complete the goal of we, The Akatsuki, we need all of the tailed beasts." One with a ripple like patter in his eyes answered.

"Getting the tailed beasts will be no easy feat, not for any of us." One with serpent like eyes said.

"That's true." One with a raspy voice said. "However I'm sure that we can attain them." The man was in a mask said he also had a black cape and a hood.

"And what would you know of this matter?" Asked the serpent one again.

"If you're unsure of your skills, you can always leave." The masked man said again.

"Enough, we still have a little time before we go after them. Just aware of the fact that we are after them. That is all." 8 of the 10 left the meeting.

"This is getting annoying." The mask man said.

"I know. But true peace is not easy to come by. Nor is it easy to keep." The man with the strange eyes said.

"I know. But if all goes according to plan, we will have peace." The masked man said again. "I'm going to check on something. But we cannot let this opportunity past up. The 5 great nations are more divided than ever, this is the best chance to achieve our goal." The masked man left. The final man left soon after.

"I don't trust that boy Nagato." A blued haired women said.

"Me nether Konan. But despite that he is powerful. We need him as much as he needs us. He can't do it alone and we can't do it without him. For now, he is on our side. If we need too, we will kill him. After all, we made that boy into what he is, and I can destroy him just as easily. " A man with red hair now known as Nagato said.

"I know, but the boy... he has more evil than Madara. And only we know that the man is truly dead as of last year. He is hiding his power. It is great." Konan said once more.

"I know. Only the true god of this world knows what Madara trained the boy in. In the short amount of time Madara managed to train him the boy would have become strong. All ninja's have their secrets Konan. You, me, Madara, and all others. The boy will helps us... for now. But he knows that he is no match for me." Nagato finished. Konan didn't say it, but she hoped it was true.

With Darth Nemeses

Nemeses was tinkering with something. Below him an unmoving army of an unknown amount of the white Zetsu. "Soon, this army will be greater than before." He said to himself.

"Are you sure no one else needs to know of this?" Zetsu said.

"No, no one else. Your ability makes you one of the more lethal of Akatsuki." Nemesis said. "The others may have nice big jutsu but you are out spy, combined that with your morphing ability we can't lose."

Zetsu nodded. "How many clones have you made so far?" He asked.

"Not much... only about 50,000." He answered. "Go back to what you were doing. I need you to find all of the tailed beasts." Zetsu nodded once more and left. "It's not enough. Not for my plan to work. I still need at least 50,000 more." He went back to work.

(Leaf Village)

Elsewhere in the world, while Zetsu was finding all of the locations of the Jinchuuriki, and Akatsuki was still doing their mercenary work. The world moved on. Ninja were growing, fighting and dying, in a never ending cycle of hate.

However, a little heroine was in the works, Mito Uzumaki Namikaze, daughter of Minato Uzumaki Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze. A vary long name but it works. She was training, she was going to be the first female Hokage, she even started to act like her mother a bit more. But not as much as her little sister, Naruko Uzumaki Namikaze. The prankster from hell.

"Naruko! Get back here!"

"You've cross the line this time Naruko!"

Two Chunin were chasing the 5 going on 6 year old little girl of the Hokage. It seemed that, as a graduation gift to her sister, the little hell raiser pained the Hokage faces. The first Hokage looked like Might Guy. The second Hokage looked like he was saying "I like the little Orange book so does Sarutobi." While the third Hokage was saying "Shhh." The forth Hokage looked annoyed at the other 3 while next to him said "Greatest Dad Ever!" The on the space next to that it said "Reserved for Mito Uzumaki Namikaze" Then next to that it said, "Reserved for Naruko Uzumaki Namikaze."

"Lord Hokage we have an emergency!" A man yelled.

Minato sighed. "You'd better bringing me something important, and don't tell me it's Naruko again!"

"But, it is Naruko again. She climbed up the great stone faces!" The first man yelled.

"She put graffiti all over the Hokage faces." Minato sighed again.

(Back with the chase)

"Get back here!" One Chunin yelled.

"Na Na!" She gave them a raspberry and vanished around a corner!"

"We have you now! WHAT!" She was gone.

"Fined her!"

At the Hokage Tower

"Maybe I should send them back to the academy for a refresher course." Minato said as he watched his youngest make fools out of his Chunin Ninja.

"That's not fair Minato. I mean, she is our little girl." Kushina said to her lover.

"Yes, she is. But she shouldn't be able to out run all of my Ninja. I'm tempted to see if she could outrun my ANBU." He said.

Back with Naruko

The Chunin pasted a wood fence. "Get back here!"

Part of the fence fell to revel Naruko. She had reddish blond hair down to her mid back. Along with the family birthmark of whisker marks on her cheeks. She had a cameo pattered jacket and pants. The colors were red, yellow and orange. The only thing out of place was a black Uzumaki Spiral on one shoulder and a white Uzumaki Spiral on the other.

"Man those guys suck at chasing me. No one can take on the Prank Queen of the Leaf Village!" She yelled.

"Oh yea?" Asked a voice all too familiar to Naruko. As she was picked up by her jacket caller.

"AH!"She was turned around. "What are you doing here big sister! You should be training with pervy uncle Kakashi." She said hanging like a cat would if picked up this way.

"We past early, but what are you doing here? You should be in class." Mito pointed at her little sister.

"Uh... we got out early...?" She said/asked.

"Buzz Wrong. Let's go." Mito started to walk to the Hokage tower. While her little sister was flailing trying to get out of her sister's grip.

A little while later. The door of the Hokage's office was opened.

"Aw. How come you used the door? That's so old school." Naruko said disappointedly.

"Kami gave man the ability to make a door. So why not use it?" Mito said. She turned to her parents. "I believe this belongs to you?" She asked sarcastically.

"Hi mom, hi dad." Naruko waved. She saw Tsunade and Jiraiya. "Hi grandma, hi pervy godfather." She said to the Sannin.

"Naruko do you know how much trouble you're in?" Minato asked his youngest.

Naruko shivered. But then she got a smile. Not one of her happy go lucky smile. No, this one was one of pure evil that would make even the Kyuubi sweat."Mom, dad I have a question." She asked. Her parents looked at her. "You see..." She reached behind her in her pack and pulled out a little orange book. "Pervy godfather gave me this book to read one night when he was tucking me in. I can't read these big words yet but I like the funny pictures." Jiraiya froze and was about to high tail it out of the window when Tsunade grabbed him. "I like this picture on page 69. It kind of looks like mom and dad and aunt Mikoto. See~~~" She showed them the picture. "Why are they wrestling?" She asked.

Kushina snatched the book away, while Tsunade, Minato and Mito blushed. Kushina looked pissed. "Mito, be a dear and take you sister out for ice cream. We need to talk with Jiraiya about a proper way to tuck kids into bed." Kushina said in the kindest smile she could muster. With the sincerity of the Kyuubi.

"Okay mom..." Mito said fearing that the Toad sage had see the last of his days.

"Yea Ice cream!"Naruko yelled happily while still being held like a cat. Outside the door with the door closed.

"You know that was cold right? You left pervy godfather to the wolfs." Mito told her little sister.

"Sacrifices must be made for the greater good." Naruko said as a light shined upon her and holy music was playing.

"You mean you didn't want to get in trouble right then and there." Mito said deadpanned.

"That too."

"AHHHHHHH!" Everyone in the left village heard Jiraiya cry out in pain.

Mito she was rubbing a necklace she had. It was white gold with the Uzumaki swirl as it's pendant. It was her half of the Uzumaki twin necklace. Hers was white. When her and her older twin brother got them they had no idea why hers was white while her brothers, Naruto's necklace turned black.

"Thinking about brother?" Naruko asked.

"Yea... I do hope he is fine where he is."

"I'm sure he is sis. I'm sure he's rooting for you in the afterlife waiting for us to join him when our time is done." Naruko said. "If he hasn't pissed off Kami with all of his pranks." Naruko and Mito laughed.

(With Nemesis)

But unknown to them. Their older brother was not in heaven, but in an eternal hell.

"Why am I with you again?" Asked a serpentine man.

"We are here because the first of our objectives is here and he is your target Orochimaru." Nemesis told him.

"Now, remind me, why are you part of this group? You have no skills to speak of." Orochimaru froze when he felt the boy next to him that looked like he was 18 already let out an evil surpassing anything he had felt before. 'What... what evil... Lord Hokage must know of this.'

"Now if you are done talking we have work to do." Nemesis told Orochimaru.

They continued to walk within the Land of Stone. They walked for days until they felt their target nearby.

"He is here. Are you ready Orochimaru, you'll take part in the first step in what Akatsuki seeks." Nemesis told him.

Orochimaru nodded as the two approached there target. Orochimaru noticed a necklace dangling around the man in blacks neck. "What is that?" He asked.

Nemesis noticed what he was looking at. "That is my own business. Now focus."

Orochimaru nodded once more. Soon they came upon the 4 tailed host. "Roushi... Jinchuuriki of the 4 tails..." Nemesis says.

"Yes, who may I say is asking?" Roushi asked the two in front of him.

"No one you need to know. Just come with us, you are needed." Nemesis said to the older man.

"No thanks boy. I go with no one I must try to understand my power." He told them.

"Too bad we are not giving you a choice in this matter." Orochimaru said.

Nemesis watched as Orochimaru engaged the Jinchuuriki. He just watched as Orochimaru was just like a snake in battle. Even though that none of Orochimaru physical attacks will do nothing to this one his cunning made him the perfect choice to capture the target. The lave that the partial formed tailed beast is what made the target hard to get. Then finally the battle was coming to an end...

"It seems that Orochimaru was not up to the task..." Nemesis said. He saw Orochimaru being burned alive by the Jinchuuriki.

"Got ya!" Roushi yelled at his victory, although he was tried and breathing hard. he had almost forgot the man in black that let his comrade die without moving a muscle.

"How sad... that this is over so soon..." He said to the older man.

"What?" True to his word, as soon as he said that, Orochimaru came from behind and unleashing a gas. A gas that would have killed a lesser man, but not a Jinchuuriki. No it only put him out.

"Excellent. Now we have one of the tailed beasts, only 8 more to go." Orochimaru said he saw his partner nod. Orochimaru grabbed the body. "Come on. I don't know how long he will be out."

"Leave that to me. I have some seals that will make him as weak as an normal person his age." Nemesis slapped over a dozen seals on the man. Covered from head to toe in seals, the Jinchuuriki of the 4 tails was now captured.

"That... was tiring..." Orochimaru said.

"You faced a tailed beast. It is to be expected. You did well to win Orochimaru, not many can claim the same. But we must move on." Nemesis said.

'This Darth Nemesis is quite an enigma. I can't figure him out. But, for him to make me of all people freeze with such little effort... he must be stronger than me. He even might be as strong as Lord Hokage.' Orochimaru thought to himself.

The two returned to the main hide out in the Rain Village.

"Your late." The 'leader' of the Akatsuki said.

"The Jinchuuriki was a little tougher than first expected. But it is done. We have the 4 tailed host." Nemesis said as he placed the man in a cell.

"Good. We have taken the first step in making our goals come true. We still have a ways to go. Darth Nemesis." The leader looked at the full body armor masked man.

"Yes my lord?"

"The leaf village will be hosting the Chunin Exam in a mouth or 2. Thanks to the information you gave us we know that the odds of the 9 tailed Jinchuuriki will participate. This will be a golden opportunity to get one of the 2 Kyuubi hosts." He said to the man.

"I understand. We will get at least one of them." Nemesis said.

"Good. We'll be in touch. Dismissed." The leader vanished.

Orochimaru and Nemesis left the cave like hide out. "So... Orochimaru..." Nemesis started. Orochimaru looked at him. "It seems that we will be going to your old village... any... lovers there that I might need to know about? I don't want one showing up and you not wanting to fight her." He said.

Orochimaru gave him a scowl. "No, everyone I care for is dead. I have no one left in this world."

"That's something we have in common." This shocked Orochimaru, some information for free. "I too have nothing left in this world. My family is gone to me. I have no past, not anymore. And my future is death." He said in a cryptic manner.

Orochimaru didn't get what he said. "Why is your future death?"

"Time and death are the only absolute thing in this world. Everything withers with time. Then death takes what's left. No matter how fast you are, time cachets you. No matter how strong, death defeats you. You can prolong as long as you want. But everyone will die one day. Even I." He told the snake Sanin.

"You sound like you want to die. Me, I want live forever, to learn every jutsu this world has to offer."

"Is that why you left the leaf village? Because you wanted to be immortal?" Nemesis asked the man.

"Yes."

"That's foolish. Knowing all the jutsu in the world will not give you unsurpassable strength." Nemesis said. "Everyone is born with a certain amount of power. Once that power reaches its peak, it starts to die. No one can stop it. You are born with it. I am born with it. The leader and everyone else. Trying to be immortal it pointless. For you will still die. No matter what." Nemesis said.

"Hum... I will have to disagree."

"That is fine. I did not join to chance you. Let's just get ready for our job then go about our own business." He said to the snake Sannin he again nodded."We have much to do until then. So get ready for any type of reunion that might accrue."

'This aura, its far more evil than Kyuubi.' Orochimaru shivered. 'I... I feel like an ant next to a god.'

"This is where we part ways for now. I must check on something." Nemesis vanished in a black portal.

Orochimaru did what he did best. He ran. He ran as fast as he could. He doubted that He, Tsunade and Jiraiya could beat this guy. This boy. He needed to find Jiraiya and warn him. He headed to a nearby town where Jiraiya would be staying in case would contact him during his reports on the Akatsuki. This being the most important yet. However, unknown to Orochimaru, he was being followed.

'I have to warn them. This... thing is after Minato's daughter and his wife. Good thing he always leaves to somewhere.' Orochimaru made it to the small town he hoped to find. He walked unnoticed by the rest of the world. Until he found a bath house and heard giggling. "Found him."

(With Nemesis)

Nemesis was walking alone in a forest. Searching for the 7 tails host. He knew what he was looking for. A young girl with mint green hair bronze colored skin and orange eyes. He was searching in the Waterfall village area. He knew what he was doing, to an extent. He knew that he would change this girls life, for better or for worse he will change it. He felt her close.

"Halt! State your business in Waterfall!" Yelled his target.

"Fu... Jinchuuriki of the 7 tails. My business is you." He stated.

"M-me...?" She stuttered.

"Yes. You, I've come for you." Nemesis said to the girl.

"Why me?"

"You have something I need, something I want."

"You mean the tailed beast inside me right." She stated.

"Yes."

"Will... will it hurt?" She asked frightened.

"Hurt?"

"You're going to kill me right? I just want to know if it will hurt." Fu asked again. Knowing that her fate would be death even if she fought this person in front of her.

"I do not know if it will or not. But what I can promise you is that if my goal is reached, no matter how it is reached, you will know peace." Nemesis showed a side he never showed anyone.

"Peace? As in, peace of the dead?" Fu asked.

"Yes, and no. If my plan works you will know peace. That is all I can promise you. As to your death, you will not die yet. You will be held in a room made just for you until you are needed. You'll be treated right if that is what your afraid of. And no one will take advantage of you. If they try to, they know the penalty for trying such an act." He told her. Trying to get her to trust him enough to go with him without a fight.

Fu nodded. "I have a request, if it's not too much to ask." She said.

"Depending on the request, I might be able to grant it." His voice was hollow, yet to her it was kind.

"Will... you come and talk to me, sometimes when you're not busy? Maybe... be, I don't know, a friend?" She asked shyly.

Nemesis tilted his head. Was she serious? He looked into her eyes and saw the loneliness she suffered all her life. Then he remembered something Madara told him. 'Nemesis, Jinchuuriki are not well treated. No matter where they live odds are when you face one they will either be full of hate. Or loneliness. If it is loneliness they fell it will be easier to get them to trust you. You might not like it but it beats having to fight them. Just know, just as the human body craves the touch of another human, the human mind desires someone to be there for them. A friend as it where. Female hosts tend to want a friend over male hosts who just hate everything. Remember my words Nemesis, they might save you one day.' He nodded. "That will not be so hard to do. Very well, if you come with me I'll be your friend." The condition wasn't a problem for Nemesis. It was just a strange concept to him. He saw the girl brighten up at his words.

"Thanks, My name is Fu, what's yours?" She asked.

"I am Darth Nemesis. You may call me Darth Nemesis or just Nemesis. Now come. We may get to know each other on the way to our base." He said.

As they walked to the base they talked to each other. Or rather, Fu talked and Nemesis listened. He wondered if it wasn't too late to change the deal. But that thought was brushed aside. She was better company than any of the other Akatsuki members would ever be. Once you get past her talking. But then again, her voice was better than any of the other... you know what, he would exchange any of the other Akatsuki members for her in a heartbeat. "I must stop you there. For you see, we are here." He told her.

"Oh. Um... that was a long walk. Do you go for long walks with all of the girls." She asked trying to get an emotion out of the man next to her.

"No. You're the first girl I've spoken to in person... in quite some time." He told her.

"Oh... um, why is that?"

"I'll tell you another day."

They walked in the cave door and soon was in a massive room.

"Well, it seems your were successful."

"Yes. I was."

"Good. We are that much closer to achieving our goal. Link up with Orochimaru it is almost time to meet him to go to the leaf village."

Nemesis nodded. "Follow me Fu. I'll show you to your room." She nodded, afraid of the man Nemesis just talked to.

"Um, Nemesis... do you have... a real name? I mean Darth Nemesis sounds like a title to me." She asked hopefully not trespassing on his good graces.

"Darth Nemesis is my real name. My old name died when I did. Do not try to understand that line any further than you already have." He waved his arm and a door opened up. "This will be your room. It is not much, but if you want to decorate it any let me know. I am you're friend after all." Fu smiled. She got him to say that. He wasn't so bad. "I must go. You must know the rules for now, until I get back. You are not allowed to leave your room unless I or someone of higher rank is accompanying you. If you try to escape you'll lose any privileges you had while you stay here. If you are hungry, press this button and someone will bring a little something to eat. Also, tell them what you like, give them a few options and next time they'll bring one of them for you. One more thing. We, thy Akatsuki, are not really much talkers. Only me and one other will ever be around you. Her name is Konan. She has blue hair and is the only female member of the Akatsuki so you'll know her when you see her. I must take me leave now. I'll see you in a few days. Oh, one more than. If you want to stretch your legs, you'll going to have to wait until I get back." Nemesis walked out the room.

"Thank you... Nemesis." Fu smiled at the boy/man that saved/kidnapped her.

Nemesis paused med-step. Then continued as the door closed behind him. He walked until the leader addressed him again.

"How did you get her to come along willingly? Does she know she is going to die?"

"She knows, and I made her a promise. You know I keep them. Besides, I wasn't in the mood to fight Fu." He said.

Konan and Pain looked at the boy. "Fu is it?" Konan asked. "To think that you can show emotions."

Nemesis gave her a glare. "That's enough, I don't care how you did it just that you did. Now, go link up with Orochimaru so that the both of you will go to the leaf village. The final part of the Chunin exams will start and end soon. Get there and see if you can get one of the 9 tails hosts." Both Konan and Pain hologram images vanished.

Nemesis nodded. He went to his room, which was next to Fu's for now. He, for the first time since he be became Nemesis, took off his mask. He looked at himself. His nose and mouth was covered by his respirator but the rest of his face was pale white, like when the first time he was burned alive. His eyes where now yellow and where there should be white is now blood red. it was hard to see. he could only see a foot or so without his mask. He saw visions of his past... when he was Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze. He saw a tear fall down his eye when he could not look away from his necklace. The black necklace his mother gave him.

"No..." He breathed out. "Not mine. Naruto's necklace. I am Darth Nemesis... I am Darth Nemesis... I am Darth Nemesis... I am Darth Nemesis..." He repeated. He remembered the training Madara gave him because of the name issue alone.

(Flash back)

"AHHHHHHHH!" A boy in black armor screamed.

"SAY IT!" Madara yelled.

"My... name... is Naruto... AHHHHHHHHHHH!"

Madara made him pay every time he said that name. "Naruto died that day! You are Darth Nemesis! The incarnate of destruction! You will destroy this old world and bring it about a new world! NOW SAY IT!"

Konan couldn't stand seeing a boy that has already suffered so much. But she was forced to watch. Pain just watched impassively. Although Nagato couldn't stomach much more.

"SAY IT!"

"I... am... Naruto Uzumaki... NamiKAZEEEEEEEE!"

"NO YOU ARE DARTH NEMESIS!" Madara continued this... training... for weeks without any rest or stopping period. After the weeks had passed. Madara noticed that Naruto held on to a necklace. he looked at it and saw the Uzumaki symbol on it. He tried to take it off and then mental hit himself. Uzumaki's and seals. They made anything like this impossible to be removed unless the wearer removed it herself. But Madara made it so Naruto couldn't hold on to it anymore. That robbed him of the strength to fight Madara anymore.

"Say it. My name is Darth Nemesis."

"My... name... is... Darth Nemesis."

"Good. Now come. We have work to do." Madara Pain and Konan heard Nemesis continue to repeat that sentence.

"I am Darth Nemesis, I am Darth Nemesis, I am Darth Nemesis, I am Darth Nemesis, I am Darth Nemesis..."

(Flash Back End)

"...I am Darth Nemesis, I am Darth Nemesis, I am Darth Nemesis, I am Darth Nemesis." Nemesis saw the necklace that gave him the strength to be someone else for so long. It was his only weakness. And it must be destroyed. He placed it in his hand. Ready to destroy it. Crushing it in his metal hand. It would be simple. So simple to crush it and destroy his past. It would be easy... almost. He couldn't do it. But he couldn't keep it.

He walked to Fu's room, he had a moment before he had to leave, he waved his hand and opened the door to Fu's room. What he saw surprised him. Fu was naked, just got out of the shower and was getting dressed. She had the deer in the head lights look. She was shocked. She tossed a pillow at him. "Close the door!" She yelled at him. Nemesis waved his hand and it closed. It took a few minutes before he heard her say it was alright to open the door. He walked in.

"Fu, I need you to do something for me. Something I can no longer do myself."

Fu looked at him strangely. "Okay."

Nemesis reached behind his neck and unhooked his, Naruto's necklace. "Turn around." She did. Then he put it around her neck. "I need you to hold on to this for me. I can no longer wear it."

Fu looked at it. A gift from her captor as it were. "It's beautiful." She was lost in its shine. "Who gave it to you?"

"No one. Just keep it. Never take it off. Let no one take it off. Keep it safe for me. For I can no longer keep it." He said to her. Fu looked at the boy. Surprised at his reaction. She knew that him being her friend was something she forced on him. She figured he'd talk to her once or twice a mouth. But... this. "Keep it safe for me. I... I can no longer ware it." Nemesis left. Closing the door behind him. " I am Darth Nemesis... I am Darth Nemesis... I am Darth Nemesis... I am Darth Nemesis..."

(Days later Leaf village)

Nemesis and Orochimaru were in the morning mist to the leaf village. They were close. The Chunin exam had ended not too long ago and the place was just starting to relax.

"So, you captured the 7 tails host? I thought your target was the 9 tails host?"

"It is. Just that there was an opening on getting the 7 tails that we could not pass up. I got her, no trouble. Also, Kakuzu is going to get the 5 tails. And Kisame the 6 tails." Nemesis said.

"We're going rather fast are we?" Orochimaru asked. Not wanting Akatsuki to move too fast.

"No amount of speed is too fast. Just not fast enough. If we are successful we'll be ahead of schedule. Let's stay forced on the task at hand." Nemesis wasn't one for content talking. Orochimaru nodded knowing that this boy could kill him if he wasn't careful. They walked past a guard who was asleep at his post. Or what looked like asleep but was knocked out by Nemesis so fast Orochimaru didn't know how he did it. "Let us move quickly. I know that the 4th Hokage's wife and oldest daughter hold the Kyuubi. We need only one of them. The daughter would be easier considering." Aging Orochimaru nodded. He has been doing that a lot as of late.

The pair walked in a tea shop and ordered some tea to relax. Their presents would not go unnoticed. But Orochimaru insisted. Orochimaru never took his eyes off Nemesis. He wanted to see underneath that mask of his.

"Kakashi, fancy meeting you here." The pair heard Asuma yell out loud.

"Yes, well I'm killing time until my students get here." He said.

"Oh? It's not like you to be waiting." Asuma and Kurenai caught on.

"Well, I wouldn't want to be you should Mito find you. You remembered what happened last time?" He asked.

Nemesis and Orochimaru left them. They appeared again near a river. "Do you think they noticed us?" Orochimaru asked.

"Yes. Two of the them are on their way."

On cue, Asuma and Kurenai appeared in front of them.

"Now then... can one of you tell me why two unknown and powerful ninja's are doing in the leaf?"

"Asuma... Kurenai... long time. I haven't seen you two in quite some time." Orochimaru answered.

"The fact that you know our names means your ninja formally of this village. Who are you and what are you doing here?" Asuma asked again.

"Yes... I use to be a ninja for this village... I guess a reintroduction is in order." Orochimaru removed his hat slowly.

A scared leaf village head band was revealed.

"No doubt about it... Orochimaru... of the Sannin." Asuma answered, although he was a little scared that a Sannin was his foe with an unknown not too far away.

(With Mito and Naruko)

"Come on old man what did I do!" Whined Mito. She had been on office arrest since the morning hours. When her mom and dad woke her and her little sister up around 5 am and sent them to the Hokage office with Old man 3rd Hokage watching them. If they were in trouble it would have been Naruko alone seeing as Mito was in the hospital since the Chunin exam. Which by the way she is now a full fledge Chunin.

"Now now, I don't get to spend time with my two favorite granddaughters as of late. This is a perfect time to do so." Old man Sarutobi said.

"Then why am I here! I haven't done a prank in hours!" Naruko whined. She'd almost want to be in class right now. Almost.

"And I told you, Hanabi didn't take too kindly to you dying her hair Haruno pink."

The two girls giggled. However the old man was worried. Minato would have put his girls here unless something was up. He hoped his successor would be alright, because the paper work was starting to say his name again.

(Back at the fight)

"And just who are you?" Kurenai asked the masked armored man.

"I am Darth Nemesis." He told her with his iron ice cold voice.

"Never heard of you."

"Sometimes the best reputation is the unknown one."

"Kurenai, I'll handle Orochimaru until backup arrives. You handle iron man." Asuma said.

"Right, be careful Asuma." He nodded. "Genjutsu! Tree binding Death!"

She hoped that he wasn't as good as her fear made him out to be. The tree bind the unknown man to it. "It's over." She said. She did a strike with a normal kunai. She hit where his heart would be. nothing happened. It seemed that she hit solid steel. She pressed harder only for the tip of the kunai to shatter. "What!"

Then the man broke out of the binding, turned around and grabbed her by the throat. His iron like vice grab was chocking her. "A weak Genjutsu like that won't work on me." He said. He was crushing her wind pipe and Asuma was being toyed with, many cuts across his body but Orochimaru didn't put any poison in the attacks. He wanted to make his old sensei suffer. "It's over." He was about to snap her neck when something powerful hit him in the face. It sent him skidding a few yards. Orochimaru didn't have the fine armor like Nemesis so he felt the full power of grandma Tsunade's fist. Nemesis would have cringed. If he could feel anything. He looked at the men in front of him.

"Kakashi... Hatake... Itachi... Uchiha... and forgive me for not knowing someone who is not a threat to me." Nemesis said.

"Then allow me to enlighten you my unyouthful friend! I am MIGHT GUY! THE GREEN BEAST OF THE LEAF!"

Nemesis tilted his head. "Never heard of you. Now stand back. Someone as weak as you isn't even a threat to me."

"I must decline that request. For I have come to stop you!"

"You are good to hid the amount of pain you're in. Your right hand is broken in several places from hitting my Dark Steel armor. Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Taijutsu are worthless against me." He told them.

"It's been a long time my dear old friends... Jiraiya, Tsunade... how have you've been?" Orochimaru asked.

"Good... until I had to look at your ugly face again." Jiraiya said.

"After today they'll be one less Sannin in the world!" Tsunade yelled.

"Your old teammates Orochimaru?"

"Orochimaru!" Everyone heard an old man yell.

"How are you... Sarutobi-sensei?" Orochimaru turned around to face his old teacher.

"To think that you have fallen so far. It's high time I settle my past mistakes..." The old man took off his old cloths and was no in his battle armor "...and bury you forever!"

"What makes you think you can? I am far stronger than any of you. I could take you all out myself." Orochimaru gave his normal snake smile.

"Could you Orochimaru? I don't feel like raising my hand to handle such trash. Not one of them is worth the effort to do so." Nemesis said in a board tone.

"You calling us weak!" Tsunade yelled.

"Yes." The man in black armor said bluntly. Orochimaru resisted the urge to smack himself in the face.

"Then you'll face the wrath of the Sannin!" Tsunade yelled.

"Bring it you old bitch." Nemesis said to her. The water now froze. 'Make sure you call a Senji a bitch if you ever see one.' Madara told his last apprentice. Nemesis no longer hand the strength to repel Madara's will. But his plan to unite the ninja world was still his own. It was brilliant. It could not be beat, he would win no matter what.

"What... did... you... say...?"

"You heard me." He breathed out. "Orochimaru... on second thought, I'll handle this. You stay back. Make sure no one interferes." He ordered Orochimaru. Orochimaru nodded, everyone was surprised to see Orochimaru talking orders.

"Now, come leaf scum, let me see what you can do." He told the elite of the Leaf village.

"Let's begin... Tsukuyomi." Itachi went first.

(Tsukuyomi world)

"You are trapped in my Tsukuyomi world. Here I am god." Itachi said to Nemesis, then his eyes widened when a sword went into his gut.

"No, you're not. You'll never be. Compared to the eyes of my master, yours is nothing but a cheap imitation. He trained me to resist this Genjutsu. You're defeated..."

(Real World)

"AHHH!" Itachi's eye was bleeding.

"Itachi! What happened!" Asked Kakashi.

"He... he beat me in my Tsukuyomi world. Genjutsu will not work on him." Itachi held his eye even more. He was done.

"Alright, it's time for me to get this unyouthful foe. AHHHHHH!" Guy was unlocking the 3rd gate. Then the 4th, 5th and lastly the 6th. "AHHHHH!" Faster than anyone could see Guy attacked. "Morning Peacock!" Guy attack with many fire ball like moves.

Nemesis didn't flinch. He didn't do anything. Every attack hit him, yet nothing happened. "A most uninspired move. I told you, Taijutsu won't work on me." He just stood there, even the ground he was on was unaffected by one of Guy's strongest attacks.

"Lighting blade!" Nemesis looked up to see Kakashi come at him with his strongest jutsu. He attacked the heart of the man in black. He hit his mark. Or so he thought. Kakashi's attack didn't price his armor. "I told you... Ninjutsu won't work on me." Nemesis back handed Kakashi and he flew into Guy and Itachi.

"Take this!" Nemesis looked to his right and say Asuma charge him with his wind blades. The blades bounced off his armor much to his surprise. The shock evident on his face. He was kicked in the jaw which broke it.

"AHHH!" Nemesis looked to his left, Tsunade had her widow maker ready to pound him into nothingness. Nemesis responded by punching her fist with his. This broke ever bone in her hand. Then he kicked her across the river where Jiraiya caught her. Or at least a clone as the read one was charging him with the...

"Rasengan!" A larger than normal Rasengan was plunged into his gut. He didn't even grunt. But the force made him skid a few feet away from where he was standing.

"Very good. You managed to make me move from my spot." Nemesis said downplaying their skills. In a heartbeat he kicked in the gut and flew into a tree. When he landed he vomited his lunch.

It took a few moments before Jiraiya recovered. "What are you doing here?" Jiraiya asked.

Orochimaru was dealing with the old man 3rd Hokage. "I will answer that, seeing as it doesn't matter if you know it or not." His breathing could be heard in the quite breeze. "We are here for one mission, and one mission alone... we are here for the 9 tailed fox. So, we wish to not have any un necessary bloodshed today, hand over either Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze or Mito Uzumaki Namikaze. We will take either one." He said calmly.

"Sure why not. We'll hand over the Hokage's wife or daughter to you no problem." Jiraiya said mockingly.

"You would? Thank you, it took a while to get here from rain." Nemesis said.

"ARE YOU CRAZY! WE WOULD NEVER DO THAT!" He then said.

"I know." Nemesis said.

"Damn you're a pain." Tsunade muttered. Still holding her hand.

"We have no time for this... give us... the Kyuubi and we will leave." Nemesis spiked his power, it was hollow. 'This is the power Madara spoke of? True power, a power that transcends chakra.' Nemesis thought to himself. Everyone froze at his power. Even all 3 of the Sannin froze, that frightened everyone there. "We have no time for this." In a dark flash he was in front of Kakashi, he brought down his pure black sword that he drew in a heartbeat. However, a hand grabbed his wrist and a foot kicked him away. He again skidded a few yards.

"Ow ow ow. Damn that hurt!"

Nemesis looked at the two that are now facing him.

"Minato... Namikaze... Kushina... Uzumaki Namikaze..." He said. "I am Darth Nemesis. It is an honor to meet you." He said to them.

"Well Darth Nemesis, care to tell me why you're in my village beating up my student and my elite ninja?" He asked. He saw another ninja, a med ninja treating the wounded. Rin, his past life said to him.

"Since you asked... I'm here for the 9 tail fox. Please hand over either your wife or your oldest daughter and we will leave in peace." He bluntly said.

"Honestly, how refreshing." Minato said.

"What do you want with our daughter!" Kushina asked/yelled.

"We need only one of you. All we need is one of the 2 nine tailed fox beasts. We'll take either you or your daughter, it makes no difference to me." Nemesis said coldly.

"And it makes no difference to us how Ibiki and Anko break you for your information." Minato said plainly.

"You'll forgive me it I do not know their names. I do not remember names that are no threat to me."

"Cocky much?" Kushina huffed.

"No... just confident." In the blink of an eye Minato was right in front of him. Ready to strike, however Nemesis was ready, he used his own super speed movement, and was now in front of Kakashi and Rin. He grabbed Rin by the neck and was gone in another second. He held her neck in his hands. Rin felt the cold of his iron grip. "This feels familiar doesn't it Rin?" He asked, like he knew her past.

"RIN!"

"Freeze. One more step and I snap her neck like a toothpick. Now, we are going to talk. Let's see where that gets us shall we?" He asked. But he truly had a different motive than just talking. "Now then... tell me Rin, one of my abilities is to see into some people's lives their past to be more accurate. Tell me... did you fail one Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze, the deceased son of your sensei." He asked. He soon felt the anger from everyone there.

"How...?"

"I told you. I can see into the lives of some people. The sad pasts, like that one. I see it know. You begged for forgiveness before the funeral. They forgave you, but you can't forgive yourself. Just like the time when Obito died, it was your fault he did... just as it is your fault that the son of the 4th died..." Rin lowered her head and tears were flowing down. He heard a gushing sound behind them. He looked to see the 3rd Hokage passed out by nose bleed. He raised an eyebrow. The 3rd woke up soon after.

"MINATO SHE'S HERE!" He yelled.

Nemesis tossed Rin away from him and hopped back when a blade came down. It was a standard Katana.

"Mito get out of here!" Minato yelled to his oldest daughter.

"Mito Uzumaki Namikaze... 1 of the two Jinchuuriki of the nine tailed fox." Nemesis eyed the second Jinchuuriki, his potential second target. "Will you come with me? It will make everyone's life so much more bearable if you did."

"Sorry, whoever the hell you, are I'm afraid I'll have to decline." She said smugly.

"That wasn't a request." He said darkly. In an instant he was in front of Mito, backhanding her into a tree. In another instant he was in front of her once again. His black blade raised now covered with red lightning. He brought it down. She raised her own blade to defend herself however she didn't know the power that the black blade held and before anybody could react Nemesis' blade cut through Mito's blade, and into her from her right shoulder to the lower left of her body. Blood gushed out from her wound. She was shocked to see her own blood or too shocked by his such devastating trauma.

"MITOOO!" Kushina yelled, as her oldest daughter was nearly killed. She rushed to her daughter side as Nemesis backed away. "MITO OPEN YOUR EYES!"

Minato uses Flying Thunder God jutsu to attack Nemesis once more, however Darth Nemesis was ready and managed to dodge his attack much to Minato's surprise.

Nemesis looked at Kushina cuddling her oldest daughter a twinge of jealousy in an ocean of hatred swelled in Nemesis' heart. But he paid it no mind. "Orochimaru we are leaving. There is no further reason to be here anymore." Nemesis said to the man.

"What about the nine tales. I thought we were after them ?" Orochimaru asked in a confused manner.

"Do not question my order there is no plans to capture then now would only hinder us later, we are leaving." Nemesis reaffirmed his orders.

"As you say." Orochimaru shrugged. He used his earth Jutsu to escape into the ground.

"We will meet again nine tales Jinchuuriki will become after you once more in four years. That's how long you have to train and prepare for that is how long Toshiyuki requires to become full power once more." Nemesis opened a dark portal and disappeared within it.

Soon after many ANBU appeared taking the wounded to hospital, Kushina never left her daughter side neither did Mito's little sister Naruko. It took her a few weeks to fully recover from her wound but he did leave a scar despite the nine tales healing powers. She vowed she would get stronger so that nothing like that would ever happen again to protect her precious people.

Elsewhere nemesis appeared within the cave with so many others over the Akatsuki.

"So you failed." The leader of the group Akatsuki said to Nemesis and Orochimaru.

"Surprising coming from the Golden group." One of the other group members mocked.

"Capturing any of the two 9 tales hosts would've been hampering not helpful right now. Unlike the other villages that leaf village would care if the okapi's daughter and or wife would go missing or in this case kidnap. The other villages don't care about their Jinchuuriki for the most part, besides we need the QB lasts not now." Nemesis defended his position.

"It is true besides we still have time for years before able to move against any of the other Jinchuuriki or tailed beasts. However Kakuzu doing the Kisame were successful which means now we have 4 of the nine tailed beasts in our possession." The leader told the group.

"Where does that leave us we still need one to 1, 2, 3, 8 and nine. When not halfway done yet." Said a bug eyed member of the group.

"No we are not but we are ahead of schedule we have five years to complete target objective and four years before we can move upon the other five Jinchuuriki. And when we do will move upon multiples at once. You are dismissed but remember we need them alive."

All but Nemesis left. "We are ahead of schedule that much is true we cannot get complacent 12 months is not exactly a lot of time to capture five of the strongest ninja in this world has to offer." Nemesis told him.

"It's more than enough time after all no one can defeat God." Pain said. Then later left

"You're no God pain, you're just extremely powerful however you two are nothing more than a pawn in this game. In the game to unite all of the five greet nations and even the entire ninja world under one banner." Nemesis left and then was soon greeted by Zetsu. "Anything you need to tell me Zetsu?"

"Yes as a matter of fact there is you are right about Orochimaru everything you suspect it will right about. That's all I have to say about." The human plant said to Nemesis. He nodded.

"Well done, however no matter what Orochimaru does it cannot change the fate of this world. It was handed to me the moment I was born and I will do with it as I see fit. No one can change that my plan is foolproof nothing anyone can do to change it. Now leave me I must go skin a snake pretty soon I'll think I'll let him play his little game for now."

It would be for long years before the world heard the word a Akatsuki once more. They bided their time got stronger deed with the leaders said to do they helped destabilize the ninja world a little more it was also during this time that they captured the three tales before his death upon the bloodline rebels. A new Mizukage rose up from the ashes. Also during this time Nemesis kept his word and talked to Fu the seven tales Jinchuuriki even though it went against his teaching that Madara had taught him. Madara taught him to be ruthless, cutthroat and cold. Even though none of the four now five captured gingery key where let's communicate with one another they each felt each other in their own minds, the three tales Jinchuuriki was livid when he found out what he was forced to do, but there is nothing he could do to change that now, his death would be soon and quick. Nemesis to bided his time gaining power he would need it for the time to come.

"For I am the Dark Child of Prophecy and I will destroy this old ninja world and make a new from the ashes of darkness." Nemesis said smiled as his plan was coming together.

(END)

this story will only be two chapters long here's the first, of a alternate version of the child of prophecy a can-do manager in my mind I just couldn't resist writing it the next day hope you'll like it.

R and R