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Chapter One:
You made your way into the great hall tying your hair into a pony tail while chatting to your best friend Raven. The two of you sat down at the Slytherin table waiting for the feast to begin. As you were chatting someone grabbed you round the waist and whispered in your ear.
"Your looking beautiful as usual." Turning round you saw Marcus Flint Slytherin Quidditch captain he was also your boyfriend.
"What do you want?'' You asked with a puzzled look because you knew he only sucked up like that when he wanted something or had done something wrong.
"Nothing can't a guy tell his girlfriend how beautiful she is?'' Marcus asked and you sighed.
"I guess but don't I get a kiss too." You said as Marcus bent down kissing you softly, he may not be the hottest guy or the nicest in the school but the boy sure knew how to kiss taking your breath away each and every time. Marcus pulled back giving you a smile as you slowly opened your eyes.
"Wow." You said with a sigh as the feast began, you had forgotten how good the food was as you grabbed anything that was in front of you. You were eating away happy in your own thoughts when your best friend nudged you.
"What?" You asked.
"Oliver Wood is staring at you and has been since we got in here." Raven replied.
''So? he probably has an eye probem." you said looking over as she looked away.
"I think someone likes you." Raven replied in a sing song voice.
"Shut up or else Marcus will hear." you said quickly looking at Marcus who was talking to Draco Malfoy.
"Oh come on like he would care." Raven said and you stared at her.
"Hello! it's Marcus and Oliver Wood we're talking about those two hate each others guts." And Raven nodded in agreement.
"True but wouldn't it be cool if he did like you, I mean he is cute and the whole Slytherins shouldn't go out with Gryffindor's makes you want him even more." Raven said and you smiled.
"I guess but it's not going to happen, I'm with Marcus and he would kill me if I ever left him for Oliver." you replied then noticed Oliver staring again so you gave him a smile which he returned then both looked away.
"Oh you so do want him." Raven said and you shook your head.
"I do not want him." As the feast ended, the two of you followed everyone out of the great hall walking to the Slytherin common room where you both fell onto the leather couches.
"So what are you going to do about Oliver?" Raven asked.
"I don't know most likely nothing" you replied as Marcus came over.
"What are you girls talking about?" Marcus asked helping you up.
"Nothing." you both replied as Marcus wrapped his arms round your waist kissing you which you returned.
"Why don't you stay in my room tonight?" Marcus whispered into your ear.
"Why? You feeling lonely." You asked and he smiled.
"Yeah a little, so is that a yes?" You leaned in close so that your lips brushed his ear.
"No." You pulled back to see his stunned face.
"No? What do you mean no?" He asked.
"I know I couldn't share a bed with you without you trying something, I'm not ready to go that one step further." You replied and he sighed.
"Fine see you in the morning." Marcus replied letting you go as the two of you walked down the stairs to the dorms splitting to go different ways. You entered your bedroom that you shared with Raven to see her lying her on her bed reading.
"Asked again?" Raven said and you nodded falling onto your bed.
"Yes I just told him I wasn't ready to move to that level, if he really loves me he can wait a little bit longer."
"He probably sees it as a challenge." Raven said.
"Yeah, we better get some sleep, classes start tomorrow." You replied.
"Don't dream about Oliver." Raven added and you looked at her.
"Ha fat chance." You laughed closing your eyes.
A/N so what did you think? REVIEW!!!!!!!!!
Chapter One:
You made your way into the great hall tying your hair into a pony tail while chatting to your best friend Raven. The two of you sat down at the Slytherin table waiting for the feast to begin. As you were chatting someone grabbed you round the waist and whispered in your ear.
"Your looking beautiful as usual." Turning round you saw Marcus Flint Slytherin Quidditch captain he was also your boyfriend.
"What do you want?'' You asked with a puzzled look because you knew he only sucked up like that when he wanted something or had done something wrong.
"Nothing can't a guy tell his girlfriend how beautiful she is?'' Marcus asked and you sighed.
"I guess but don't I get a kiss too." You said as Marcus bent down kissing you softly, he may not be the hottest guy or the nicest in the school but the boy sure knew how to kiss taking your breath away each and every time. Marcus pulled back giving you a smile as you slowly opened your eyes.
"Wow." You said with a sigh as the feast began, you had forgotten how good the food was as you grabbed anything that was in front of you. You were eating away happy in your own thoughts when your best friend nudged you.
"What?" You asked.
"Oliver Wood is staring at you and has been since we got in here." Raven replied.
''So? he probably has an eye probem." you said looking over as she looked away.
"I think someone likes you." Raven replied in a sing song voice.
"Shut up or else Marcus will hear." you said quickly looking at Marcus who was talking to Draco Malfoy.
"Oh come on like he would care." Raven said and you stared at her.
"Hello! it's Marcus and Oliver Wood we're talking about those two hate each others guts." And Raven nodded in agreement.
"True but wouldn't it be cool if he did like you, I mean he is cute and the whole Slytherins shouldn't go out with Gryffindor's makes you want him even more." Raven said and you smiled.
"I guess but it's not going to happen, I'm with Marcus and he would kill me if I ever left him for Oliver." you replied then noticed Oliver staring again so you gave him a smile which he returned then both looked away.
"Oh you so do want him." Raven said and you shook your head.
"I do not want him." As the feast ended, the two of you followed everyone out of the great hall walking to the Slytherin common room where you both fell onto the leather couches.
"So what are you going to do about Oliver?" Raven asked.
"I don't know most likely nothing" you replied as Marcus came over.
"What are you girls talking about?" Marcus asked helping you up.
"Nothing." you both replied as Marcus wrapped his arms round your waist kissing you which you returned.
"Why don't you stay in my room tonight?" Marcus whispered into your ear.
"Why? You feeling lonely." You asked and he smiled.
"Yeah a little, so is that a yes?" You leaned in close so that your lips brushed his ear.
"No." You pulled back to see his stunned face.
"No? What do you mean no?" He asked.
"I know I couldn't share a bed with you without you trying something, I'm not ready to go that one step further." You replied and he sighed.
"Fine see you in the morning." Marcus replied letting you go as the two of you walked down the stairs to the dorms splitting to go different ways. You entered your bedroom that you shared with Raven to see her lying her on her bed reading.
"Asked again?" Raven said and you nodded falling onto your bed.
"Yes I just told him I wasn't ready to move to that level, if he really loves me he can wait a little bit longer."
"He probably sees it as a challenge." Raven said.
"Yeah, we better get some sleep, classes start tomorrow." You replied.
"Don't dream about Oliver." Raven added and you looked at her.
"Ha fat chance." You laughed closing your eyes.
A/N so what did you think? REVIEW!!!!!!!!!