Summary
it al started 13 years ago, a husband lost his wive and children, and a daughter lost her parents and her brother. Until one day faith reunites a daughter with her father and a father with his daughter.
The story of Tris and her adventure in finding herself and at the same time a part of her family
With almost al of the main characters of Divergent! I DO NOT OWN DIVERGENT, ALL CREDIT GOES OUT TO VERONICA ROTH. #DISCLAIMER !
*MY FIRST FANFIC DON'T JUDGE*
CHAPTER 1:
13 years ago*
Beatrice Grace Zara Braveheart is the three year old daughter of Max and Natalie Braveheart, she has a brother named Caleb who is almost two years older.
They live in Chicago a city that was created after the war ended, the city is divided in 5 factions.
Abnegation: The selfless
Amity: The peaceful
Erudite: The intelligent
Candor: The honest
Dauntless: The brave
Beatrice and her family live among the dauntless, in fact her parents are the two leaders of dauntless.
They where both first in there initiate class and they both value the dauntless manifesto:
"We believe in ordinary acts of bravery, in the courage that drives one person to stand up for another… We believe in shouting for those who can only whisper, in defending those who cannot defend themselves"
Natalie and Max where great leaders and they made sure that everyone in the city was safe, they made sure that everyone in dauntless got what they deserved(good or bad).
The people who worked hard got rewarded, but the people who committed a crime where punished just to make sure that everything went smoothly and dauntless was a better faction because of them.
Max and Natalie where very committed leaders but they always made sure they had enough time to spend with their two children Beatrice and Caleb who they both loved very much.
Their lives where perfect but everyone knows that nothing stays perfect forever.
One night Max came back from an overnight trip to the fence to make sure everything was running smoothly, he was gone for two days.
He always tried to avoid trips where he had to stay overnight because he wanted to be with his family, but this time he had to go and sort out some issues near the fence.
Max POV
Why did that meeting have to run late, I was supposed to be home two hours ago, knowing Beatrice she will stay up until I am home, and knowing my wife she will let her.
I was just talking to bud when I saw it or rather I didn't see it, our house it was gone.
It was burned down, al that was left where the ashes of my home, I jumped of the train and started running right away screaming the names of my children.
That's when they told me they where gone… A man and woman from abnegation(the selfless) went inside trying to safe them but they where to late. The abnegation woman, got stuck in the house and also died herself.
I immediately felt so many emotions rushing threw me, sadness, love, gratitude but most of all guilt and anger.
Guilt because that woman gave up here life to try and save my family and so much anger because I wasn't there to save them, it was my job to keep them safe and I failed.
Everything around me flashes by there is so much going on but i don't even notice it.
All I know that from now on my life will never be the same, because it's my fault the are gone, I should have been home on time because maybe my family would still be alive.
What really happened:
Evelyn and Andrew Prior are two abnegation members, they try to be as selfless as possible.
One night they where walking trough the city when she saw the flames coming out of the house.
They rushed over to help(being abnegation and all) when they arrived at the house they saw a woman and her daughter in the living room.
Andrew grabbed the girl and Evelyn reached for the girls mother,
But when Evelyn wanted to grab Natalie she started screaming: NO! save my son he is upstairs i can take care of myself.
Evelyn ran upstairs trying to save the boy but when she ran up the stairs the house collapsed and all three where trapped inside… and died.
A couple of seconds after Andrew ran out of the house it collapsed, he started screaming in disbelieve his wife, the love of his life and the mother of his unborn child died.
He took the three year old and started running, al the way back to abnegation and when he came home he realized he had a crying three year old in his hands.
He took the child and held her close, both crying over the people they just lost and Andrew made a vow to the little girl that he would never leave her, and he would always protect her from that day forward.
They would be each others family from now on, and he kept that promise to keep her save until the girl was about ten years old….
*Done, hope you guys enjoyed it, it was my first fanfic. I am a dutch girl so i apologize if they are some things wrong with the grammar.
Would like to know what you guys thought of my story and if you liked it, chapter two is coming as soon as possible!