This is my new story and I haven't finished any of my others because I didn't think they sounded good later when I read them and I wasn't getting any reviews. So I need some reviews on ideas for the story and I need your opinion on how good I'm doing! Hope you like and Review!
Disclaimer: I do not own the X-Men but I do own Claire my OC!
Character Information:
Name: Clarity (goes by Claire)
Age: 16
Eye Color: Light Blue
Hair Length and Color: Light Brown and Long
Power(s): Energy Blast, Force Field, Sonic Scream
Claire made her way downstairs to the front door of her apartment.
She had just eaten breakfast and was on her way to school.
Claire lived by herself in a small town called Spring Hill.
She walked out to the parking lot and got into her old and dirty car.
She did her daily routine every day, getting up, going to school, and going home to start all over again.
Claire pulled into the school parking lot then got out.
She walked to the front doors of the school to her locker.
Claire was a great girl, but no one talked to her because they thought she was a freak.
She was different.
Claire walked down the hall to her first class, athletics.
She was on the basketball team and practiced everyday.
She walked into the dressing room where all the other girls were and changed into some workout clothes.
She put on a lime green tank top and some black basketball shorts.
All the girls including Claire walked into the gym and waited for the coach to give them a drill.
A few minutes later the girls were split into teams, and were running up and down the court to shoot a basket.
Claire had the ball and made a shot into the hoop.
"You totally cheated!" one of the girls yelled.
"She must have used her freaky powers!" another girl yelled.
"I did not!" yelled Claire.
"Claire go sit on the bench." the Coach said.
"But I didn't use my powers..." Claire muttered walking over to the bench.
It was almost like this everyday for Claire.
Always being blamed because of her powers.
Later the coach let all the girls go and get dressed.
Claire then changed into some blue jeans and a black tank top with a grey hoodie over it.
After changing she walked to her Math class.
She sat in the back of the class and concentrated on the lesson the teacher was giving until a student walked in with a note.
"Claire to the office." said the teacher.
Claire got all her stuff and went to the office wondering why she was called up there.
When she walked through the office doors she saw a man in a wheel chair and a women with white hair looking at her.
"Hello Claire." said the man in the wheel chair.
"Ummm...hi. Who are you?" Claire asked.
"I'm Charles Xaivier and this is Storm." he said.
"Why are you here?" Claire asked.
Well we would like to speak to you about your special powers." said Xaivier.
"Ok..." Claire said sitting down on a chair.
The Professer talked to her about his students at the mansion and asked if she would live at the mansion with them.
"You want me to go live in Bayville?" Claire asked smiling about the thought of getting out of this town.
"That's what I've asked." said Xaivier.
"I'll go." Claire said happy with her choice.
"Ok Claire then we leave today?" he asked.
"Of course." she said.
"We should let you have a few hours to pack your stuff before you leave though." said Storm.
"So pick me up around one? Claire said.
"That would be great." said Storm.
"Awesome! See you then." Claire said walking out the building to her car.
"Great girl." said Storm smiling.
Later Claire was at her house and was almost done packing her suitcase when she heard the doorbell ring.
She shoved the rest of her stuff into her suitcase,
zipped it up, and jogged down the stairs to the door.
"Hello Claire." said Storm taking her suitcase for her.
Claire followed Storm to a sleek red car where a guy with
sunglasses was sitting.
"You must be Claire. Nice to meet you I'm Scott." he said looking at her.
"Nice to meet you too Scott." said Claire hopping into the backseat.
Storm got into the passenger side and shut the door.
Scott began to drive off getting further away from Claire's home.
Claire was now finally getting away from that place she hated and heading to a new home where she hoped to make some new friends.
While Claire was lost in her thoughts time went by fast.
"We're here." said Storm looking over at Claire with a smile.
Claire looked over towards the mansion with shock.
"It's so big!" she said with a smile.
"Well the Professer has many students." said Scott pulling into the garage.
Claire grabbed her suitcase and got out then waited for Storm to lead her in.
"I'll take you to Xaivier and let him tell you more about this place." said Storm making her way inside with Claire following.
While following Storm, Claire saw many people her age in the mansion running around and having fun.
She even saw some using their powers.
When Storm and Claire got to the Professer's office Claire knocked.
"Come in." Xaivier said.
Claire entered and sat in a chair.
"I know you aren't familiar with this place just yet so I have some people I want you to meet so if you ever need help they can be there." said Xaivier.
"Please come in Scott, Jean, Kitty, Rougue, and Kurt." Xaivier said.
Then all five students walked in and introduced themselves.
"I'm glad we have a new student." said Jean looking over at Claire.
"So what power do you have?" asked Kurt.
"Well I have three..." Claire started.
"You have three different powers? That's like amazing!" said Kitty.
"Yes it is and because Claire has such strong powers she'll be training with you all." said Xaivier.
"What are her powers?" asked Rogue.
"Well I can shoot energy blasts but i need to work on my aim. I can do an ear shrieking scream called a sonic scream and I can create force fields but the
last one I did was on accident so I have no idea how to work the force fields." said Claire.
"That's pretty amazing." said Scott.
"So Kitty would you show Claire to her new room?" Xaivier asked.
"Of course Professer." Kitty said.
Claire followed Kitty out of the office and through the halls of the mansion.
Kitty lead her down the girls hall and stopped at a door.
"This is your room." said Kitty smiling.
"Thanks." said Claire entering the room.
"Rogue and me live right next door to you so if you ever need one of us just ask." said Kitty.
"I will." said Claire shutting the door behind her.
"It might take a while to get use to this place..." Claire sighed.
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