(this is my first story so please take it easy on me)
Prologe
Hi. This is a story of how I found out about these amazing creatures called cryptids. It all starts in a forest opposite my house in the small town of Uckfield...
Chapter 1
(Jess' P.O.V)
I could hear my heart beating in my chest as I ran from this monster. (It had grey fur and red eyes but sort of resembled a dog) Why? Why was it
always me to get into bad situations? Not my friends or my family. It was me, the clumsy one. I had to stop running as I could barely breathe. I could
hear the monster catching up so I climbed the closest tree and sat on the nearest stable branch, hoping that the monster couldn't climb. But it could.
I started to panic and screamed. Then another monster came but this one looked friendly almost like a teddy bear, it was quite tall with brown fur
and red eyes. The monster tackled the one climbing the tree and restrained him. Then there was a voice shouting "Good tackle Fisk!". I turned my
head to the direction of the voice and saw a boy that looked maybe a few years older than me, he had pitch black hair with a white star shape. (I
don't know how to describe Zak's hair) wearing a orange and black jumpsuit thing and was tanned. In his hand he had some sort of weapon. When
he came closer to the monster being restrained his eyes glowed orange and so did the monsters. Then 'Fisk' let go of the monster as it had calmed
down, the boy then started to stroke the monster! "Zak!" A woman shouted running towards the boy. She had white hair, slightly paler skin and was
wearing the same jumpsuit thing as the boy. "Zak, sweety don't run off like that. That goes to you to Fisk." she said looking at the monster. "But
mum, Fisk and I heard a scream and" but before Zak could finish, there was a loud crack noise seemed to echo through the trees. Oh-no. The branch
I was sitting snapped and I screamed with all my might as if it would save me the last thing I remember was hitting my head on a branch on the way down...
Tell me what you think PLEASE