Authors note: hi! This is my first story so be nice no flames.
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intro to the story (the words scrolling through space thing that u see at the beginning of any star wars film)
THE CLONE WARS CONTINUE TO RAGE THROUGH OUT THE GALAXY MEANWHILE ON GEONOSIS A BATTLE RAGES ON THE SURFACE WHILE BELOW THE SURFACE SOMETHING FAR MORE DEADLY IS STURRING….
A fierce battle rages on geonosis meanwhile below the surface a clone trooper 2466 is exploring a recently discovered cavern unaware of the danger that lurks near bye.. "Hmm I wonder what these are" said 2466 as he finds some eggs he goes closer then one of the eggs open "what the…." Screeeeeeeee! "Agggggggggggg" screams 2466 as the facehugger jumps on him and he struggles but the facehugger gains control..
Meanwhile on the surface the clones have gained the upper hand and have defeated the droids. the clonetrooper awakes after his encounter with the facehugger who, unknown to him has given him a little surprise for later 2466 heads up to the rest of his battalion "where the hell have you been trooper?" asks the commander "I can't remember much I've found something you should see" explains 2466 "what would that be?" asks commander Fred "I don't know sir follow me I'll show you" says a groggy 2466 when they get down there commander Fred contacts chancellor palpatine "planet secure sir we've found some strange eggs what do we do with them" asks commander Fred "do nothing send some droids down there to collect them keep you're men a way from the eggs" says palpatine "understood sir" replies commander Fred.
The droids put the eggs in to stasis tubes so they don't hatch and impregnate the clones and then the eggs are loaded on to a awaiting shuttle and then flown up to a orbiting ship the eggs are unloaded and taken to the labs storage facility to be studied at a later date. the unborn alien is getting ready to burst from its host. 2466 goes to his quarters after all the clones but one have gone to there quarters an unseen stowaway awakens, the technician unaware of the danger is dispatched by the alien which then settles down to eat its kill but hearing voices runs and escapes through a air vent.
Meanwhile in 2466's quarters.. "cough cough ow god my chest" says 2466 as the chestburster moves into hatching position "ah AGGGGGG!"screams 2466 as the newly hatched alien queen bursts through his chest killing him instantly. the queen runs into a airvent near by to find a place to grow and start a hive…
Authors note: so that's my chapter I will write more I'm just seeing how many reviews I get first.