A/N: This story is going to be mostly about a Naruto raised differently he will be smarter and stronger then most so if you hate that bare with me I think this story will be good. Also he will be a tad bit darker.
Disclaimer- No own naruto if i did I would make Naruto stronger and able to use more Jutsu!
He leapt through the trees towards the village in the distance. He wore normal clothing, a black shirt with a red over shirt with dragon design. Shorts with various pockets and normal shoes his hair was sandy blonde and cut short and eyes piercing blue. He looked about fifteen and had a smile on his face as he jumped down to the road. He ran towards the gate his smile growing but as he came closer two men leapt down and raised their hands. They wore green vests and headbands with a leaf engraved on them. "Stop what business do you have here?" The teen smiled and kept going the two Ninja drew their Kunai and threw them the teen smiled caught the weapons and threw them back hitting them in the legs.
"Get out the way." He quickly punched them in the face and stomach knocking them out then with ease he leapt up the gate and over the wall and into the village his eyes on the tower. He ran quickly but as he did the other ninja wearing masks appeared behind him. "Tch." He leapt quickly to a roof top and as they leapt to follow he spun and made quick hand signs "Katon Karyuu Endan!" The teen leaned back and blew and a huge burning hot stream of fire. It flew towards the masked men who had jumped towards and they were quickly enveloped and fell trying to put out the flames.
"The weak should stay where they belong!" With that the teen laughed and continued towards the tower. But as he leapt towards the tower a pair of Ninja jumped in front of him he slid to a stop and glared. One was a silver haired Jounin by the look with his headband over his left eye and a mask hid his face, next to him was a girl with brown hair and markings on her cheeks. "Well more Ninja of Konoha maybe you're worth the time?" The teen one eye narrowed. "Why are you attacking who sent you?"
The teen laughed and shrugged "no one sent me I came on my own." The silver haired Jounin glared, "Then why are you attacking?" The teen smiled and charged, "I wanted to start a fight!" He then leapt up and punched forward the Jounin blocked and slid back then countered pushing up the teen flipped and landed on his feet a smile on his face. "You may be strong enough." He then charged again this time making hand signs, "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!"
Solid clones of the teen appeared and attacked the Jounin who quickly made the same Jutsu allowing his clones to fight the teens allowing him to turn towards the teen. "Come on!" The teen attacked his attack a flurry of speed and power the Jounin defended and countered and the teen started to block both in a seesaw battle until all the clones were gone.
The Teen took a hit to the cheek and slid back on the corner of his mouth a small trickle of blood, "It's been awhile since I've had this much of a fight." The teen then made hand signs that only he knew his smile growing wider. "Try this Unseal!" Suddenly his body glowed dark black and his chakra increased the Jounin's eye widened and he then reached and removed the headband from his eye allowing him to see the Sharingan.
"Alright come on!" The teen disappeared but the Jounin could see him and quickly blocked but as he did his eye widened. The teen had his hand in the same seal as before, "My win. Katon Karyuu Endan" The flame attack enveloped the Jounin the girl screamed and the Teen smiled but as he smiled a gloved fist shot from the flames and slammed him in the face the teen flew slamming into the roof sending tiles flying then sliding to a stop and looking up. The flames blew away revealing a golden haired man with piercing blue eyes and a flowing white coat and Jounin uniform he also sported a headband with the leaf symbol. "Kakashi you all right?"
The teen spit and shook his head the attack had rocked him. He stood and smiled darkly "Another strong opponent well that's great." He charged forward and made hand signs his eyes filled with excitement. "Katon Ryuuka no Jutsu!" he was surrounded by flames that flowed out of him and straight from the teen towards the man that had attacked.
The flames hit and the teen smiled he knew he'd won no one to date had escaped that technique. "That was powerful a normal ninja would've died but." The teen spun and saw him a ball of chakra in his hand and a smile on his face. "I'm the Yellow Flash of Konoha Minato Namikaze!" With that he thrust the ball into the Teens stomach, "Rasengan!" The Teen screamed as he was sent flying into the air and into the Konoha wall.
"Sensei!" Minato turned towards Kakashi and Rin and smiled, "You two alright that guy seemed-"He ducked as two Kunai flew over his head he turned and blocked a punch from the Teen then pushed back and the two slid apart. "You can still fight?" The Teen smiled but he puked blood from his mouth his shirt was torn and ripped and blood leaking down the side of his face and a wind burn on his now bare stomach.
"Your name its Minato Namikaze…right?" Minato only looked at the teen who was looking down making it impossible to see his face. "Yes" The teen looked at him and smiled "I am Jeiku Karita take this name to the grave!" He then made hand signs and a green glow surrounded his hand, "Chiyu Hayai Jutsu ." The wounds vanished and he was on the attack Minato blocked the attacks and stepped back he swore and countered the two seesawing but almost impossible to see as they leapt back.
"Suiton Daibakufu no Jutsu!" Jeiku's water Jutsu attack hit Minato sending him to the other building but Minato vanished then with cold blue eyes he made two Rasengan in his hands and then slammed them into Jeiku who only stared down in shock. 'Double Rasengan!" Jeiku screamed this time even louder as he slid his eyes filled with pain but he didn't fly off towards the wall this time he stayed but he was unable to stand he fell top his knees. 'Gah No way… how the hell did you?"
He then fell forward but caught himself and stood he made hand signs and stopped. "Sensei be careful." Minato was walking towards Jeiku and he couldn't help being a little shocked, "It's alright call some medical Ninja this guy's passed out standing."
Jeiku stirred he felt covers and something itched at his arms wrist and ankles. He opened his eyes slightly he scanned the room it was white and he could see that no one was in, but that didn't mean that no one was in he sent out his chakra and after a moment he smiled. He looked at his wrists bound by specially enhanced leather that made Jutsus impossible he only chuckled and then pulled and tore the binds like paper. "Trying to keep me here with such weak bindings." He undid the bindings on his ankles and stood, then fell to a knee, "Shit still shaken by Minatos' attack." He made the same hand signs and held them to his chest allowing the wounds to heal quickly.
"That should do now, Henge!" He disappeared into a poof of smoke and a man in ANBU uniform stood his mask a dragon. "Not an exact copy but what can you do?" He then made a Kage Bunshin and had it go back to the bed minus the straps and then walked out right into Kakashi. "Oh I came to see if the prisoner was up." Jeiku smiled, "No he still sleeps but after the attack Minato-Sama used what do you expect?" Kakashi nodded and turned and quickly walked towards the room he was supposed to be in. Jeiku only smiled and walked down the hall he had someone to find before the Bunshin ran out of Chakra.
He walked the streets noting everything, people talking children playing Ninja walking and talking to one another he couldn't help chuckling they had no idea how lucky they were to have this peace even if the Stone was still attacking them. "Very different to my old home…" He then saw him, Minato was in a restaurant called Ichrakus Ramen Jeiku smiled and walked in and sat. "What can I get you sir?" Jeiku looked up and pointed to what Minato was eating, "Without any vegetables if you don't mind."
The man had it made and Jeiku lifted the mask enough to begin eating. "Well Dragon-san what do you want?" Jeiku chuckled and slurped the noodles then turned to Minato, "Just a question why did you spare that man?" Minato leaned back and thought about it, "Well he was strong and he seemed to want to fight and he didn't kill anyone and it was really in his power so I thought maybe he'd join the village. Or we could become friends."
Jeiku laughed out loud and ignored the confused look on Minato's face. "Sorry I just was shocked I expected maybe he'd become a servant or maybe he'd have good information, not a friend and village invite." He leaned back smiling to himself, "What if I told you that he was awake and asked how old you were?" Minato shrugged, "I'd say twenty." Jeiku chuckled, "Then he owes you twenty favors as a tribute for saving his life."
He shrugged and returned to eating, "So you owe me twenty favors?" Jeiku smiled removing the henge showing him still in his ragged clothes with bandages covering most of his chest. "Yeah that is it ." He threw a scroll into Minato's face which he caught with ease. "That scroll will allow you to send me a message no matter where I am. When you want something or need my assisstance. Just right on the scroll and I will come." Minato laughed and threw an arm over Jeiku's shoulder, "What would you've done had I answered differently?" Jeiku smiled, "Gotten annoyed and thought of ways out of the debt, lucky me." He then shrugged off Minato's hand and finished the Ramen.
"Well I best be off. Henge!" Jeiku became a normal civilian with long black hair. "Remember Minato I owe you twenty favors so if you die remember to give them to a famly member or else!" With that the man that had challenged the leaf and the Yondaime was gone.
(Day after the Kyuubi's sealing Hokage's office.)
Sarutobi had always loved Konoha but today was the first day he could say he held some hatred towards it as he looked down at the new born child the only son of Minato. The baby had blond hair and whisker marks on each cheek and slept peacefully as if nothing was wrong when in truth he was at deaths door pending on how he could handle the council. He sighed and began to rub his temples with his finger tips in a attempt to think straight.
"Damn those fools they don't want to see that Naruto is a normal baby not the Kyuubi." Sarutobi sighed and sat looking at the child he knew it would take an act of kami to save the boy. He stood and ordered his Anbu Rin and kakashi to guard the child them being the only trustworthy of his Anbuand made his way to the council chambers.
"The boy must die to kill the demon!" This was the Uchiha and Hyuuga yelling for blood the Yamanaka Akamichi and Naradisagreed saying the boy was not to be held for his fate. Inuzuka didn't like it they wanted blood for the many that had died in the battle. Aburame clan saw logic in both so stood neutral so it became a tie. Sarutobi then saw Danzo he wanted the child for a weapon while Homura wanted the child dead again it was a tie but Danzo mearly shrugged and changed back to not careing making it now one in favor for the childs death.
Sarutobi felt his hope die as he saw his own son vote neutral and he knew the boy needed kami more then anything but before the verdict was landed someone answered the prayer but not Kami. As Homura prepared the council to sentence the boy she was stopped as the doors burst open and the Anbu guards fell on to the table they were dead cut down the middle by a sword. They turned and saw who was the cause, and in walked a man that seemed to be death in human form. He wore a black Ninja vest of a Anbu but instead of the white vest it was black he wore a cloak that seemed to swirl and move on it's own. He wore a hood that hid his face in shadows and black Ninja pants with Kunai holsters strapped tightly to them. his sandals were the customary Ninja's but black.
"This is the council room correct?" The council was silent as the man walked in with out making a sound as his feet hit the floor. "Who are you!" Sarutobi looked at Danzo the man was as old as him covered in bandages from wounds and scars yet the old warhawk still was unafraid of anyone. But Sarutobi didn't know was that ROOT members were in defense ready positions. The man seemed to look at four areas and then chuckled as if he saw something funny then he laughed a chilling laugh and pointed at Danzo. "I am the Dasanteki no Shouten and i have come to do as my oath dictates I have come to redeem five favors to the Forth Hokage Minato Namikaze!"
This caused an uproar and the Dasanteki no Shouten silently waited as they calmed down then spoke again. "I owe the man twenty favors and I recieved yesterday from Minato-san what I thought his first favors but now I can see it was truly his will that I recieved." Another uproar but again the man waited then removed a scroll from his cloak. "I will now recite what I deem you need hear."
He cleared his throat and then read the scroll. "If you are reading this then it means I have died and the Kyuubi was sealed inside my son Naruto. I know that this is alot to ask but i have a feeling that my wish that Naruto will be seen as a hero and not a demon will be ignored due to the Council not the Hokage. So I will turn to you and ask five of my twenty favors. The first is that you take the Forbidden scroll of my Jutsu with you on your journies." This made the council roar but a wave of killing intent made them silent. "Second I want you to take my son from the village and teach him those Jutsu so he can return and protect himself." Antother uproar more killing intent. "Third do not reveal who his parents are till he masters Hirashin or Rasengan. Fourth I want you to become the father he will never have and also convice Jiraiya to be his God father."
He stopped talking and the council took up their talk they yelled at him saying they'd not allow the demon to live let alone leave but Dasanteki no Shouten only looked at them then Danzo spoke up. "Wait how many favors do you owe the now dead Minato-san?" Dasanteki no Shouten looked towards Danzo ad sighed, "Fifteen." Danzo smiled, "Then since the demon boy is to young to be used so we will be using these favors of your's." Dasanteki no Shouten Laughed then allowed his killing intent to wash over the man. "You will not try to gain me as a tool old man I will not do as you ask." He then looked up and saw the four ROOT members stir and he sighed "The fifth favor he asked for was a secret only for the Hokage's ears so I will be taking the child and with me Hokage-Sama please accompony me to your office so we can speak in private."
But as he walked towards the door the ROOT members struck all four leaping for the Dasanteki no Shouten but as they closed in in a flash he made hand signs and a sword of darkness appeared and he with ease slashed all four of them killing them instantly. 'Danzo was it I was would like to warn you of my status in the Ninja world if you've forgotten. I am the S-ranked Dasanteki no Shouten to be considered a Sanin class Ninja no loyalties number of S-Ranked kills ten A-Ranked kills twenty amount of deaths by my skill. Even I don't know any longer." Then he motioned for the Hokage to come and vanished into the darkness of the room.
(Hokage Tower)
Sarutobi looked at the Dasanteki no Shouten sat on the couch he was holding the young baby Naruto and making baby noises causing Naruto to giggle and coo. "So it is you Jeiku." Dasanteki no Shouten laughed and removed his hood revealing the young man that had fought Minato all those years ago he was older maybe twenty-one with the same blue eyes but now his sandy blond hair was shoulder length and he was sporting a beard now and smiled as he looked at Naruto. "This is Minato's kid no doubt about that. So I'm guessing that those two are Kakashi and Rin?" The two removed their masks revealing the cyclops and his wife to be. "It's been to long Jeiku last time we met you almost killed me." Jeiku shrugged and bounced Naruto. "That was a younger me sorry if i almost killed you then but I was stupid and wanted to find a worthy opponent Minato beating me was the best thing possible I grew up and became the Dasanteki no Shouten."
Jeiku leaned back and then looked at them all. "I can assume that they can be trusted with the rest of the scroll I neglected to tell the council?" They nodded and Jeiku opened the scroll. "Jeiku this is the last thing I will ask of you. I want you to take naruto to Kumo Kiri and Suna and raise him their for two years each once he turns four. This will allow him to see these villages and give you time to convince the kage's to allow him to become a member of the village incase Konoha does not allow him to grow so if he wishes to leave he can and join which ever is his favorite. That is all oh and Jeiku please take care of my son like he was your own. Minato Namikaze the only one who ever kicked your ass so bad!"
Jeiku had tick marks on his forehead at the last bit but sighed the guy loved rubbing that in. "So then you will be taking him will you at least write and keep me informed?" Jeiku handed Sarutobi a scroll and smiled. This is my Reaper scroll it allows me to right on this th master scroll and it will instantly go to this scroll that way I don't have to trust the Mail or council since once he sign in blood here you will be the only one that will see it." Sarutobi wrote quickly and Jeiku smiled then picked up baby naruto and made unfamiliar hand signs. "I will see you in twelve years when the academy will be holding it's finals until then try to keep the village a place I won't want to destroy." Then with out warning the man seemed to meld into the darkness and vanished the last thoughts that ran through their heads was hope that naruto stayed loyal to the village because if Jeiu trained the boy there was a high possibility that he would become the next Dasanteki no Shouten and that would lead to paperwork which as Sarutobi looked was already making it's seventh stack a living hell.
A/N: Alright here we are my newest Naruto review it please and remember this is a fanfic so it will have a couple areas where it will seem weird but that's my own mind for the Naruto universe so sorry.
Translator.
Dasanteki no Shouten- Mercenary of Death
Katon Karyuu Endan- Fire Dragon Flame Blast
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu- Shadow Clone
Katon Ryuuka no Jutsu- Dragon Fire
Chiyu Hayai Jutsu- Quick Healing
Suiton Daibakufu no Jutsu- Water Explosion (Zabuza Used it so hell so does Jeiku!)
Henge- Transform
There ya go so wait till next chapter pending on reviews I will either write about Naruto's life till he comes to Konoha and continue or it will be a story of Flashback's where you get bits of info here and there. So review people!
