A/N: My English teacher assigned us the task of describing something beautiful without using the word beautiful or any words that meant beautiful. I chose to describe Axel from Kingdom Hearts 2. Please R&R and tell me what you think of it.
Crimson Adonis
A statuesque Adonis, surrounded by shining raiment of red and gold, stands before me. Burning locks of crimson adorn his head in a mane that rivals the sun in the evening at it's brightest of red settings of the long summer. Pale yet not placid skin, as if kissed by the sun but not truly darkened, graces his features warmly. His gaze pierces through me as if the acid green eyes that lay within the face were melting my soul to the core. Below the eyes lay two dark tears, frozen in time they linger as a silent reminder of a painful past. Slender and sculpted as is the way of the deities of the Romans and the Greeks his shape is seemingly flawless. Long legs allow this sculpture that lives as a person such as you or me to gracefully walk in a gate through which whispers of the clouds and winds in autumn can be heard. Soft and lush are his lips that appear so bittersweet in a mocking smile. His clothing is of midnight, dark and full of mystery, and cause the hair of his head to appear more vibrant still. He speaks and the voice flows through me as the songs of the birds that twitter on a wonderful spring morning. The passion in his gaze and the brilliant heat in presence light my soul ablaze and vanquish the frozen winter that once imprisoned my heart.
Within that fiery furry of his tender embrace I now 'ere do dwell. In this paradise my own trouble seems to dissolve away as if dissipated into a fine mist like water upon his heated figure. This is the place for which I always have craved to be and in which I now seek freedom from all which would previously harm me. For this perfect statue I would, with nary a second thought of my own well being, dive headlong into untold dangers the likes of which I would otherwise flee immediately upon merely a sight. For him I herein would give my wondrous all and, if I then could forthwith muster it, ten multiples more to give him the happiness he, in existence, then gives to me. Free me this insanity I pray and never lose his warm and loving, perfect embrace.
End Note: I actually wrote this so that it would be in Roxas's POV. That is why it describes his embrace. If anyone would like me to do one of these from Axel's POV so that it is a complete set please let me know.
I may also turn this into a fiction, based off the poems, if enough people want me to. Please let me know! Thanks!
Again please R&R!
Thanks a ton!
*~Aku-Chibi-Chan~*