So Close
Inspired from the song "So Close" from enchanted please listen to it while reading if you can. And also inspired from a line in L.A. Doyle's fanfic "The Dance".
Reference to "Solitudes", Season 1.
Am not sure if the style I used is ok, though; I just felt it was suitable for the flow of the scene. Hope you like it and pls review.
….
Trapped again.
Cold planet again.
This time it's not earth.
This time it's far far away.
It's not me that's in trouble, though.
It's not me that's about to die, though.
It's her!
This time it's her.
I wish it were me, though.
If I'd have regretted dying then,
I'll sure regret her dying now, much much more.
I wish it were me!
There's no way out!
I've checked everywhere.
There's not way out!
No help is coming, this time: they don't know where we are.
"Sir, cold.
It was an honor…."
"No don't say it Carter.
It's not the end.
I'm getting you out of here."
"Sir."
"Carter, I'm not losing you.
Stay with me!"
"Cold."
I hold her in my arm.
Keep her safe and warm.
I hold her close to me.
The moment I wrap my arms around her,
It's as if we got transported far far away.
No coldness.
No dying.
No pain.
Her body slowly stops trembling.
I can feel her pain slowly fade away.
She feels it, too.
For just a moment,
She's transported with me.
The whole world is gone.
There's only us.
This embrace.
Closeness.
Warmth.
I feel her breath.
She feels mine.
We're so close together.
We're almost one.
I've never felt so alive.
Only she gives me this feeling.
We're so close.
I'm keeping her warm.
I'm keeping her alive.
I'm keeping her safe.
Only in my arms does she feel that way.
That's what she says.
I never wanna let her go.
Never want this to end.
Still, I want nothing more,
but for this to end.
I want help to come
I want them to save her.
I wanna keep her so close.
This is our chance.
No one is there.
We're so close,
to reaching that famous happy ending.
We're so close,
to having true love's kiss.
Almost, I almost believe
we can make it.
We can have our chance.
We can admit out feelings.
Come out of the dark.
Come out of the coldness.
"Don't worry Jack, Sam we're here.
It's over now you're going to be ok.
It's ok, I'm Daniel, I'm here.
We'll get you out of the coldness and dark.
Don't worry.
God, it was so close.
We, almost lost you."
It's over.
They found us.
I'm losing her.
I'm losing her all over again.
We were so close.
So close to our happy ending.
And so close to forever ending.
It's over.
Our chance is gone.
We're never getting out of the darkness,
never will our hearts feel warmth.
We almost had it, though.
We almost believed we'd make it.
Let's go on dreaming though.
Maybe one day I'll hold her close, again.
Maybe one day the warmth will not have to end.
Maybe someday we'll be
So close,
But not so far.
Not today though!
But it was so close!