Naruto of the Akatsuki
By: Nate Wayne
Chapter 1: The Beginning
At the Valley of the End
As Sasuke and Naruto went for their finishing blows, Naruto had flashbacks of when he was younger and the villagers attacking him calling him " Demon child, Murder, and Killer" which afterthat the two powerful Jutsus hit sending both of them flying in different direction. As Sasuke hit the water, Naruto who had landed on his feet went to go check on his former comrade and found out that he was dying. Then, Sasuke spoke saying you are my best friend and a worthy comrade of mine. I want you to have these and then Sasuke extended his arm and opened his hand which was holding both of his eyes with the Sharingan still activated. Then as Naruto took them Sasuke took his last breath, afterthat, Naruto fainted with the eye balls still in his hand. After he fainted, 2 mysterious figure walked up to Naruto and picked him up. One of them was wearing a orange mask while the other had two large venus fly-trap like extensions that envelop his head and upper body, giving him a plant-like appearance. Then, they left in a instant. Afterthat, Naruto woke up still being carried by Tobi, not my OC. They were in a cave when all of a sudden Tobi dropped him on a bed and then, lefted the room as Naruto went back to sleep.
In the Cave, the next day
Naruto woke up in the bed that Tobi had put him in. Then, he got up and walked toward the sink in the room. As he got to the sink he look at his reflection he notice that he had red eyes instead of his regular blue eyes, which he begin to wondered. After he had washed his face, he went to find who had brought him there. But all he found was 10 scrolls and a note saying:
"Dear Naruto,
When you all ready we will come back for you, and let you join our organization. Even though you are an jinchuriki, we will no longer be looking for you. So train hard and everyday.
Sincerely, X"
Afterthat, Naruto unlocked one of the scrolls and looked at it:
First Lesson: Tailed Beast Control
After Naruto had read everything on the scroll, he started meditating, which he woke up in his mindscape. So head stood up and begin talking to the Kurama who was curious of why Naruto was there
In Naruto's Mindscape
"Why are you here? I didn't summoned you."
"I'm here because I wanted to learn how to perfectly use your Chakra."
"Alright as long as you train hard and don't be annoying."
" I promise, so when do we begin training?"
" Now while you are here. I'm gonna trained you for a year and by then, you will be able to use my chakra without being turned ferial."
" Alright, lets begin"
After a year training with Kurama which was like 2 hours in the real world, Naruto had mastered Tailed Beast Control. So then, he opened up the other 9 scrolls and mastered them within 3 months with the help of the Multiple Shadow Clones Technique which he had learn from the second scroll. The other 8 scrolls had the many techniques of taijutsu, genjutsu, and ninjutsu on them, which Naruto had mastered all of them in 3 , Naruto had mastered using the Sharingan in that time.
In the Cave, 3 Month laters
As Naruto meditated as he usually did to pass the time, when all of sudden he heard someone walking toward he got up to check it out, when he found the person. He saw Zetsu, he was there to pick him up to go to Pein's Tower to join the Akatsuki, but Naruto didn't know that, still went with him. But before he went with the stranger he went to his room and got his forehead protector which he didn't have on do to what Tobi had told before he left (and yes i forgot to put this ok, my bad.)
Flashback
"I brought you here to get you away from those Hidden Leaf villagers. I know what they did to you when you were younger and how they beat you because of that thing inside you. They don't want you they kept you there so that they could take out their anger on you for what that beast did to them which was wrong. I'm here to tell you that you don't have to worry about anything while I'm with you. See I grow up without my parents, but I never let that get me now. Also, we had the same dream, I wanted to become to Hokage just you did. My organization will take care over those worthless villagers in the Hidden Leaf for what they did to you. You will become strong and powerful with us at your side. With the Sharingan now, you will be even stronger and skilled as long as you train hard. Alright I have to go but don't forget that you must train hard to become powerful and !"
In Amegakure
Naruto and Zetsu appeared in front of 2 people one had orange hair and had six piercings, a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of its upper nose, and one spike stud on each end of the bottom lip, who introduced himself as Pain. The other was a female who had blue hair with a flower in it, she introduced herself as Konan. They analysis Naruto to determined if he was suitable to be in the Akatsuki. Afterthat, they accepted him in, and gave him an Akatsuki's cloak which he put on. He was also given a ring that had blue and was to put in on his left little finger. Afterthat, he was partnered with Zetsu .
So people review this and tell me my mistakes because to me that is Constructive Criticism.