Hi people! I recently got into Ouran High School High School and I had to make a MorixOC fic because I absolutely love Mori! Okay, so I don't own Ouran, sadly.
Prologue
"Mommy!" a five year old girl screams, clutching her stuffed panda as she makes her way through the smoke. She lets out another body racking cough as more smoke invades her lungs.
"Eli!" her mother cries as Eli runs towards her and they embrace in a hug, completely forgetting about the flames eating away at their home.
"I'm scared mommy." Eli whimpers and clings tighter to her mothers body as the tears freely flow.
"I know honey but I need you to be brave for mommy can you do that?" her mother says while looking down at Eli, her aqua eyes holding an intensity that scared Eli a bit.
"Yes mommy." Eli says with determination on her face until she hears a crash, the her face was full of fear.
"Okay honey, when I say go run out of here as fast as you can and run to your aunt Marri's." her mom says quickly with fear stamped on her face.
"Where are they!" a male voice yells and her mom pushes her a bit.
"Go Eli! And remember I love you with all my heart." her mom says and there is another crash that makes them both jump a little. Eli hesitated, not really knowing what to do. Her eyes were filled with uncertainty and tears.
"Go Eli!" her mom yells and pushes Eli making her stumble a foot and finally make a mad dash for the door. As soon as she gets out she runs to the street and looks back to stare at the house her and her mom have lived in for four years. The house they loved so much, engulfed in smoke. Somewhere in the background she heard the sound of sirens coming he way but she was entranced by the flames. She was vaugley aware of a fireman bringing her to an ambulance but she never took hr eyes off the flame. Suddenly the house crashes to the ground.
"Mommy!" Eli exclaims and tries to make it to her demolished house but is stopped by a fireman. He lets go with a cry of pain and Eli makes another dash to her house only to be stopped by another fireman and this one doesn't let her go. All she can do is watch as other people try to get to her mother. The last thing she sees is and image of her mother smiling, and then she blacks out.
Okay, short I know, but its the prologue. Tell me how I did! Bad? Good? Any tips to make it better? I will take them all! Please review and make a 13 year old girls day!