Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood...
Homunculus Fan-fiction
Hello FMA fans! This fanfiction is based off the homunculus from Brotherhood. This is my second fan-fiction. I hope you enjoy :) I would like to thank my friend, Victoria (Saphira99v), for editing my fan-fiction.
I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist nor do I own Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood.
Chapter One
Lust looked at all her brothers and wondered why they all had been called to Roy Mustang's office. Roy had mentioned to them that they were waiting for someone and that it would only be a few minutes.
Then someone came bursting through the door.
"Pipsqueak!" Envy yelled.
Edward, of course, offended by being called short, yelled and tried to punch Envy in the face.
"Stop it, all of you!" Roy commanded, "We are here to discuss something with you, homunculus."
All the homunculus gave their attention to Roy.
"Fullmetal and I have decided to send all of you to a deserted island," Roy smiled as a giggle escaped him.
Pride questioned, "A deserted island?"
"Yeah!" Edward confirmed, "Since there are seven of you, you'll be there for seven days."
"Each day you will have a competition, and the loser will go home," Roy explained to them.
"Then, by the 7th day, there will be one of you, and and that person will be the winner," Edward chuckled and proudly crossed his arms.
Greed told them,"Yeah, sounds fun and all, but what if we want to go home? Can we just throw the competition?"
"I thought you might say that." Edward grinned," Just remember that the loser of every competition will be punished!"
The homunculus just stared at each other, and no one said a word. Finally Roy broke the silence.
"You leave in a hour," He informed the group, "Go get ready."
One hour later
The Homunculus had gathered around the boat, ready to go to the island.
"Have fun," Edward snickered.
Envy glared at Edward, thinking only of victory. Pipsqueak probably had some awful punishment for Edward as well.
"Bye, Pipsqueak!' Envy called out, "Go have fun with your girly friend!"
Edward hoped Envy was the first to go home.
Later that evening
The Homunculus had arrived on the island. What first caught their attenton was a huge obstacle course in front of them.
"Wow," Pride smiled.
"You think you can win this?" Wrath taunted giddily.
"Yep!" Pride gave a big smile, "I'm not going home!" His shadows came out as he talked.
"Look there's a note," Lust told them, picking it up.
Welcome to the island! Today you will be having your first competition. This competition is an obstacle course. Pretty self explanatory! Climb and crawl over things. Don't be the last to finish, or you will leave this island. Good luck...
"Well then, let's get started!" Pride exclaimed.
All the Homunculus went to their starting spots, and a bell went off, and they began.
The first obstacle was a dark narrow tunnel. Lust, Pride, Envy, and Greed had an easier time through the tunnel. It helped being small. The tunnel was very dark, so Pride couldn't go that fast. Meanwhile, Gluttony had caught up with Lust, and the two had gotten out with relative ease. Wrath and Pride made an alliance and finally found their way through. Sloth used his speed and was at the finish before anyone else.
Greed and Envy finally found the exit. Knowing they were the last two, they tried to sabotage each other.
The next obstacle was climbing a rope net. Lust and Gluttony were first to it. Lust got on Glutton's back and yelled, "Jump over it!"
"Lust, it's too high," Gluttony explained, "We wouldn't make it."
"Then jumped as high as you can, and grab the rope!" Lust demanded.
Gluttony did as he was told and climbed the rest of the way. He managed to bring the two of them in the lead.
Sloth was taller than the net, so he just stepped over it.
Wrath and Pride were climbing it. Wrath had a harder time getting up the net, and Envy took advantage of this by stepping on his hand. This caused Wrath to fall all the way to the bottom. He encouraged Pride to go on without him. Pride and Envy both made it over the net. Wrath had begun to climb it again.
Greed, in dead last, started to climb the net. The only thought in his head was that he couldn't lose.
Gluttony and Lust made it to the last obstacle. It was a muddy river. Gluttony had fell in, and floated to the other side of the river.
"Congratulations Gluttony! You have won the first competition," Alphonse cheered. "Now let's see where everyone else finishes!"
Lust had a hard time walking through the river in her heels, but she knew she was in second. Hopefully she could take as much time as she needed.
Envy was the third homunculus to arrive to the muddy river. He quickly ran into it, and tried to swim/walk across.
Pride followed Envy and also tried to swim/walk across.
Wrath was tall, so it was easier for him to walk across the river without being held back by it's viscosity.
Sloth muttered how this was such and pain when one of his chains got stuck in the mud. All he could do was watch the rest of his brothers and sisters finish. Then he realized he wasn't last. Sloth had finally gotten the chain free. He continued to make his way across the river.
Greed knew he was still in last place by the time he reached the river. But then he saw that Sloth had not made it across the river yet. Greed started to run, but being in the river made it a little difficult. With less than ten steps left, Greed had passed Sloth and beat him.
"YES!" Greed cheered.
"Congrats. You didn't lose," Envy mumbled bitterly.
"I'm sorry, Sloth." Al sympathized half-heartedly, "You are eliminated! The boat will take you back home."
"This was all just a pain," Sloth spoke his last words and left the island.
"Congratulations to the rest of you. Tomorrow will be the next competition. Have a nice night!" Alphonse told the 6 remaining Homunculus.
The homunculus went to their designated tents, and went to sleep. They were going to need the energy for tomorrow competition.
Thanks for reading the first chapter. Sorry if Sloth was your favorite. Stay tuned for the next chapter. Also please rate and review and tell me who you want to win. And tell me who you think should be eliminated next. Bye for now.