hey guys ,I just wanted the story to make more sense so I am going to explain every the story is about a girl named, Addison,she is 12 years old, she has 2 names are,Sierra(who is 14),John(who is 6),and her best friends name is,christian he is 12. Addison lives on a farm in, Wisconsin with her mom and dad. Her mom's name was Faith, and her dad's name was mike. Her grandparent's, who live across the street from Addison. Their names were pa, and nanny. So now lets get on to the story! :)
One day, Addison was waking up, she thought, "oh no, I'm going to be late for school!" she ran downstairs and started making breakfast."Oh I have no time for food!" right as she was saying that ,her mom had walked in, "hi honey! Did you have a good sleep?" Addison was sure her mom would be yelling at her by now for being late for school. So she looked at her, very confused "what?" her mom said, "well aren't you going to yell at me?" her mom looked at her with the same face Addison had given her earlier. "Now why would I be yelling at you? You did nothing...wait,did you do something naughty?" Addison looked at her mom very confused. "I am going to be late for school." Addison's mom burst into laughter. "it's the first day of summer,silly!" She stood there thinking very hard about what had happened the day before. "oh my gosh!How did I forget!" They both started laughing very hard. They were so loud , that they had woken up sierra. She came in the kitchen with them and said, "whats all the fuss about?" Addison"s mom just looked at her and laughed one more time. Addison spoke up and said,"well you know, I was just getting ready for school on summer" she said, and they both started laughing , "well I better get ready for my swim meet" said sierra,"and I need to tidy up my room christian is coming over at 12:30" said Addison. "okay have fun you guys!" said Faith. " I need to go shopping. I will see if john wants to come." JOHN I AM GOING SHOPPING! YOU WANT TO GO!?" said Faith. Then she heard a little tired voice, "yeah sure, when are we leaving?" Faith smiled and said, "12 sweetie" "okay, what time is it now?" said john "8:30" she yelled back. Meanwhile, back in Addison's room: she had just finished cleaning up. " I wonder if christian wants to go swimming in the creek?" she thought. "I will text him and ask." She sat there on her bed texting him. "He does! Good, I think we will. So maybe I should ask if the new neighbor wants to go? she seems like a nice girl, I hope christian won't mind."
Thanks for reading my first chapter in "The Amazing Life of Addison Williams"!
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