dude, my old story sucked so I'm going to make a new one. Sorry to the people who actually liked the old one but I reread it and it is typical Mary Sue garbarge so here's the new one!!
Ch.1
Amy sat at home in the dead of night staring out of her bedroom window as if expecting to see something extrordinary but it never came.
Amy was a shy girl of fourteen, with locks of gold like the summer sun (as her mother put it). Eyes as big and as blue as pools of rain. She was extremely quiet and didn't have many friends because her family moved a lot.
That night as she stared out of her second story window, she saw a dark silouette against the bright light from the street lamp. She opened the window to find a tall red-head boy about to throw a rock at her. She was completly shocked to see him for she never got visitors, especially not at this hour.
"What are you doing? Who are you? Don't throw that rock at me!OW!!!"
"I'm sorry! I'm Ron Weasley. Come on we don't have much time! there are people coming! we've got to hurry!"
"Who's coming for what?!"
"The death eaters! They're coming for you!"
"I'll be down in a moment, just let me grab some things..." Her voice trailed off as she ran to her dresser and started throwing clothes into her backpack.
She hurried down the steps and into the kitchen and made for the back door, but before she could reach it she heard it creak open and close. The man entered and and slowly turned to face Amy. As her eyes widened in distress she tried to scream but no sound came out. The man tried to grab a hold of her, but she quickly turned and ran tword the front where Ron was waiting for her return.
When she got there she was greeted by more men in dark cloaks. One of them wispered an incantation of some sort which Amy could not understand. Three seconds later she found herself wrapped in a full body bind. Suddenly she heard someone behind her shout
"STUPEFY!" and the man that put her in the bind fell to the ground.
Well I think it is much better than my other one! and I hope you all review!Remember I love all my reviewers even if you flame this story!and if you feel the need to, go ahead! the flames make me laugh!!!!!!
Ch.1
Amy sat at home in the dead of night staring out of her bedroom window as if expecting to see something extrordinary but it never came.
Amy was a shy girl of fourteen, with locks of gold like the summer sun (as her mother put it). Eyes as big and as blue as pools of rain. She was extremely quiet and didn't have many friends because her family moved a lot.
That night as she stared out of her second story window, she saw a dark silouette against the bright light from the street lamp. She opened the window to find a tall red-head boy about to throw a rock at her. She was completly shocked to see him for she never got visitors, especially not at this hour.
"What are you doing? Who are you? Don't throw that rock at me!OW!!!"
"I'm sorry! I'm Ron Weasley. Come on we don't have much time! there are people coming! we've got to hurry!"
"Who's coming for what?!"
"The death eaters! They're coming for you!"
"I'll be down in a moment, just let me grab some things..." Her voice trailed off as she ran to her dresser and started throwing clothes into her backpack.
She hurried down the steps and into the kitchen and made for the back door, but before she could reach it she heard it creak open and close. The man entered and and slowly turned to face Amy. As her eyes widened in distress she tried to scream but no sound came out. The man tried to grab a hold of her, but she quickly turned and ran tword the front where Ron was waiting for her return.
When she got there she was greeted by more men in dark cloaks. One of them wispered an incantation of some sort which Amy could not understand. Three seconds later she found herself wrapped in a full body bind. Suddenly she heard someone behind her shout
"STUPEFY!" and the man that put her in the bind fell to the ground.
Well I think it is much better than my other one! and I hope you all review!Remember I love all my reviewers even if you flame this story!and if you feel the need to, go ahead! the flames make me laugh!!!!!!