Hiya! So, here's a small preview for a new SWAC story I'm working on! But, it won't be out until after Frosted Glass is finished. I'm just putting this out there for some feedback, to see if its worth pursuing or not haha(;
Now, I know that this preview may seem like it's in 2nd person( Ex: you bought an apple), but the story itself will be in either 3rd person (Ex: Chad bought an apple) or 1st person ( Ex: I bought an apple) I haven't decided yet.
So please review this, because I need to know if y'all will like it before I write the whole thing out haha(;
Enjoy!
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Do you love someone?
Yes?
Good.
Now imagine the person you love. You're holding hands, laughing, smiling, things are perfect. The way it should be. You're gazing deeply into their eyes. . . nothing could go wrong. You're in love, you're naive, you don't have a care in the world.
But look again.
His hand grip is slightly less tight. The usual sparkle is less, well, sparkly. He seems distracted, his smile seems forced. What could be wrong? You're having the time of your life! You're in love! Everything's perfect. . . right?
But just like that, everything goes back into balance. He holds your hand tight, his eyes sparkle, his smile is genuine.
Much better.
Because, you don't know what you would do if for some reason he forgot about you, or lost interest. Which, of course, would never happen. I mean, come on, you're (forgive me, but I must repeat it yet again) in love.
But as you gaze into his eyes, feeling completely content and at peace, you know that you love him. You really, really love him. No doubt about it. You and him will always hold a special place for each other in your hearts. You will never forget him, and vice versa.
Now, just imagine, that something happened, and all of the sudden, this was all snatched up away from you in the blink of an eye.
You shake your head, knowing that everything will be okay because you're destined to be with him. Love always prevails, right?
You don't know it. . . but soon, very soon, it'll all be gone. Your worst nightmare will become a horrible, horrible reality, you're heart will shatter and break in ways you couldn't even imagine. Deny if you want too, but you'll see, that nothing good lasts forever.
So get ready for the ride of your life. Get ready to fight for what you love, and what you believe in, because if you don't, you'll lose everything you've ever wanted, everything that's ever mattered.
Remembrance.
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Ehhh…?
What do y'all think?
Now, I know it may seem just a tad bit confusing, but once the actual story comes out (if I decide to make it, it depends on what you guys think) it'll make more sense.
I really hope y'all like this, because let me just say: I am SO excited to write this. Like, I'm really hoping it'll blow all y'all away. Gosh, I'm so excited!
Anyways, PLEASE review and tell me what cha think!
-Emily(:
