Total Evolution
This is my first Evo fic. I haven't watched the show in a while, since my parents watch TV in the goddamn time slot, but o well. Some things might not be exactly like the show, but this is also movie verse and figments of
my imagination (now there's a thought). OC!
'Thoughts'
~telepathy~
"Speech" (duh)
&change setting/place&
Codename: Raptor
Real Name: Jessica Flyt
Age/Gender: 14/F
Abilities: You'll find out
She trudged in the ditch along the highway. She had no idea what time it was, because her watch had broken along when she had transformed. She wasn't crying, because that was not her way to express her feelings. She remembered what happened.
*Flashback*
Jessica Flyt had just gotten out of school. She jogged home with her friend, James. They stopped for breath, and James got out his CD player.
"Guess what? I got the Evanessence CD yesterday. Want to listen?" James asked. Jessica nodded. They laid the player on the bench and put an earphone to their ears. James hit a button and listened intently.
How can you see into my eyes like open doors Leading you down into my core Where I've become so numb without a soul My spirit sleeping somewhere cold Until you find it there and lead it back home
Wake me up inside Wake me up inside Call my name and save me from the dark Bid my blood to run before I come undone Save me from the nothing I've become Bring me to life
Now that I know what I'm without You can't just leave me Breathe into me and make me real Bring me to life
Wake me up inside Wake me up inside Call my name and save me from the dark Bid my blood to run before I come undone Save me from the nothing I've become Bring me to life
Frozen inside without your touch without your love Darling only you are the life among the dead
All this time I can't believe I couldn't see Kept in the dark but you were there in front of me I've been sleeping a thousand years it seems Got to open my eyes to everything Without a thought without a voice without a soul Don't let me die here there must be something more Bring me to life
Jessica smiled and took off the headphones. She told James goodbye and then ran home. Suddenly she felt a pain in the back of her head. She ignored it and ran faster. Then her head exploded with pain. She gave a sharp cry and fell in someone's yard. She writhed, crying, as a crowd gathered around. Her skin itched and moved as if it were alive. At first, the crowd didn't know what to do.
"What's wrong with her?"
"Someone go call an ambulance. Quick!"
"Oh my God, look at her!" the crowd gasped. Thick scales were sprouting out of her and becoming her skin. She grew a tail and wings. As she stood up, she noticed James in the growing group of kids. She stumbled toward James.
"James, help me!"
"Get away, Mutant Freak!" James shouted. She backed off, startled. All of a sudden, she smelled his fear and anger. She staggered to the woods with a thousand thoughts swirling in her head, hearing the voices talking about her parents.
*End Flashback*
She stopped and sighed. This was pointless. What was she running from anyway? Her emotions? Her past? She laughed to herself. 'You can't ever run that fast.'
*Flashback*
She walked in the door, not expecting her parents to be ignorant to the fact on how she looked. 'It's awfully quiet. They would be waiting for me since it's late.' She smelled blood and rushed into the living room.
It was a disaster. Mutant slurs were written all over the inside room, and there was blood trails everywhere. She ran to her couch where she saw her murdered parents. Her head was reeling. 'They killed my mom and dad because of what I am! They were my friends! MY FRIENDS!' Even her pet cat was slaughtered. She held up her head and screamed her fury to the heavens.
*End Flashback*
She stopped at a remote gas station. She checked her hood and trench coat, walked in, and bought food with the money she found in her parents wallets. The clerk at the register glanced at her while ringing up her groceries. She strode out and walked to her camp that she set up in the woods. No one went back there, and she took advantage of that quickly.
At the camp, she prodded the fire, and then made the customary round about her little territory. She smelled and sniffed to see if anyone came. A couple of wolves, the dog she allowed to share territory with. (A/N: with little human contact, she is down to her primal mutation traits) Wait a minute. There was someone here. SOMEONE was here. She started to trace the SOMEONE scent. About fifteen minutes later, the SOMEONE scent led to a big jet. Raptor, as she was now called, squatted behind a bush and watched as four people walked around the jet. She sniffed and identified the man that sat away from the others as the SOMEONE. He got up, and reaching down to grab a bottle, walked to a man in a wheelchair.
"I didn't get anyone, Chuck. I found a primitive camp that reeked o' her, but she wasn't there. I waited, and then came back." The SOMEONE said.
"Alright, Logan. I'll tell Storm to halt the search. Prep the Blackbird." (A/N: I think it's called the X-jet in Evo, but come on, Blackbird is so much better!) The wheelchair man said. The SOMEONE walked up the ramp, then stopped. He sniffed the air as Raptor suddenly realized her mistake. 'There downwind of me! Uh-oh'
"Hold on, Chuck." He looked around the clearing. Raptor nervously took a step back. Crunch. She jerked her head down at the twig just as Logan jerked his up at the sound. He padded silently toward her. She stayed stock-still. He saw her, and bolted. She screeched and shot into the woods like a cannon, roaring all the way. ~Don't hurt her. Logan! Don't hurt her.~ Charles Xavier mentally shouted to Logan. Logan mentally acknowledged and ran through the woods. 'Damn, this kid is hard to catch! She knows this wood, that's to my disadvantage.'
Raptor fled, but not in fear. She knew that she couldn't fight in these woods, but she a clearing that was big enough. She couldn't smell the person, but she knew that he could probably do a lot of damage, or else he wouldn't be chasing her. Her ears picked up strange sounds, soft BAMFS that were getting closer. Then the BAMF got close enough, and she lashed out. But her hand just went through a puff of smoke that smelled strongly of brimstone. Just then the dangerous SOMEONE caught up with her. She instinctively launched herself into the air, gliding and landing in the clearing. She crouched (A/N: can't stand up straight) there for about two minutes and then saw the BAMF and SOMEONE emerge from the woods. She smiled inwardly and got ready to fight.
OOOKKKKAAAYYY!!!! I decided to stop there because I need food. If you are a complete idiot, the BAMF is Nightcrawler and the SOMEONE is Wolverine. Here's the deal: five reviews before a new chapter, and there will be new chapters typed daily b/c I'm home alone all day! You can flame, but they won't count. Constructive criticism and ideas do.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything but my rabbit, a CD player, an Evanessence CD, and my character, Raptor. But once I steal Nightcrawler, he WILL BE MINE! MMUUWWHHAHAHAH! *sees lawyers pounding on door, waving lawsuits* ooookkkayy, I won't steal him!!!!
This is my first Evo fic. I haven't watched the show in a while, since my parents watch TV in the goddamn time slot, but o well. Some things might not be exactly like the show, but this is also movie verse and figments of
my imagination (now there's a thought). OC!
'Thoughts'
~telepathy~
"Speech" (duh)
&change setting/place&
Codename: Raptor
Real Name: Jessica Flyt
Age/Gender: 14/F
Abilities: You'll find out
She trudged in the ditch along the highway. She had no idea what time it was, because her watch had broken along when she had transformed. She wasn't crying, because that was not her way to express her feelings. She remembered what happened.
*Flashback*
Jessica Flyt had just gotten out of school. She jogged home with her friend, James. They stopped for breath, and James got out his CD player.
"Guess what? I got the Evanessence CD yesterday. Want to listen?" James asked. Jessica nodded. They laid the player on the bench and put an earphone to their ears. James hit a button and listened intently.
How can you see into my eyes like open doors Leading you down into my core Where I've become so numb without a soul My spirit sleeping somewhere cold Until you find it there and lead it back home
Wake me up inside Wake me up inside Call my name and save me from the dark Bid my blood to run before I come undone Save me from the nothing I've become Bring me to life
Now that I know what I'm without You can't just leave me Breathe into me and make me real Bring me to life
Wake me up inside Wake me up inside Call my name and save me from the dark Bid my blood to run before I come undone Save me from the nothing I've become Bring me to life
Frozen inside without your touch without your love Darling only you are the life among the dead
All this time I can't believe I couldn't see Kept in the dark but you were there in front of me I've been sleeping a thousand years it seems Got to open my eyes to everything Without a thought without a voice without a soul Don't let me die here there must be something more Bring me to life
Jessica smiled and took off the headphones. She told James goodbye and then ran home. Suddenly she felt a pain in the back of her head. She ignored it and ran faster. Then her head exploded with pain. She gave a sharp cry and fell in someone's yard. She writhed, crying, as a crowd gathered around. Her skin itched and moved as if it were alive. At first, the crowd didn't know what to do.
"What's wrong with her?"
"Someone go call an ambulance. Quick!"
"Oh my God, look at her!" the crowd gasped. Thick scales were sprouting out of her and becoming her skin. She grew a tail and wings. As she stood up, she noticed James in the growing group of kids. She stumbled toward James.
"James, help me!"
"Get away, Mutant Freak!" James shouted. She backed off, startled. All of a sudden, she smelled his fear and anger. She staggered to the woods with a thousand thoughts swirling in her head, hearing the voices talking about her parents.
*End Flashback*
She stopped and sighed. This was pointless. What was she running from anyway? Her emotions? Her past? She laughed to herself. 'You can't ever run that fast.'
*Flashback*
She walked in the door, not expecting her parents to be ignorant to the fact on how she looked. 'It's awfully quiet. They would be waiting for me since it's late.' She smelled blood and rushed into the living room.
It was a disaster. Mutant slurs were written all over the inside room, and there was blood trails everywhere. She ran to her couch where she saw her murdered parents. Her head was reeling. 'They killed my mom and dad because of what I am! They were my friends! MY FRIENDS!' Even her pet cat was slaughtered. She held up her head and screamed her fury to the heavens.
*End Flashback*
She stopped at a remote gas station. She checked her hood and trench coat, walked in, and bought food with the money she found in her parents wallets. The clerk at the register glanced at her while ringing up her groceries. She strode out and walked to her camp that she set up in the woods. No one went back there, and she took advantage of that quickly.
At the camp, she prodded the fire, and then made the customary round about her little territory. She smelled and sniffed to see if anyone came. A couple of wolves, the dog she allowed to share territory with. (A/N: with little human contact, she is down to her primal mutation traits) Wait a minute. There was someone here. SOMEONE was here. She started to trace the SOMEONE scent. About fifteen minutes later, the SOMEONE scent led to a big jet. Raptor, as she was now called, squatted behind a bush and watched as four people walked around the jet. She sniffed and identified the man that sat away from the others as the SOMEONE. He got up, and reaching down to grab a bottle, walked to a man in a wheelchair.
"I didn't get anyone, Chuck. I found a primitive camp that reeked o' her, but she wasn't there. I waited, and then came back." The SOMEONE said.
"Alright, Logan. I'll tell Storm to halt the search. Prep the Blackbird." (A/N: I think it's called the X-jet in Evo, but come on, Blackbird is so much better!) The wheelchair man said. The SOMEONE walked up the ramp, then stopped. He sniffed the air as Raptor suddenly realized her mistake. 'There downwind of me! Uh-oh'
"Hold on, Chuck." He looked around the clearing. Raptor nervously took a step back. Crunch. She jerked her head down at the twig just as Logan jerked his up at the sound. He padded silently toward her. She stayed stock-still. He saw her, and bolted. She screeched and shot into the woods like a cannon, roaring all the way. ~Don't hurt her. Logan! Don't hurt her.~ Charles Xavier mentally shouted to Logan. Logan mentally acknowledged and ran through the woods. 'Damn, this kid is hard to catch! She knows this wood, that's to my disadvantage.'
Raptor fled, but not in fear. She knew that she couldn't fight in these woods, but she a clearing that was big enough. She couldn't smell the person, but she knew that he could probably do a lot of damage, or else he wouldn't be chasing her. Her ears picked up strange sounds, soft BAMFS that were getting closer. Then the BAMF got close enough, and she lashed out. But her hand just went through a puff of smoke that smelled strongly of brimstone. Just then the dangerous SOMEONE caught up with her. She instinctively launched herself into the air, gliding and landing in the clearing. She crouched (A/N: can't stand up straight) there for about two minutes and then saw the BAMF and SOMEONE emerge from the woods. She smiled inwardly and got ready to fight.
OOOKKKKAAAYYY!!!! I decided to stop there because I need food. If you are a complete idiot, the BAMF is Nightcrawler and the SOMEONE is Wolverine. Here's the deal: five reviews before a new chapter, and there will be new chapters typed daily b/c I'm home alone all day! You can flame, but they won't count. Constructive criticism and ideas do.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything but my rabbit, a CD player, an Evanessence CD, and my character, Raptor. But once I steal Nightcrawler, he WILL BE MINE! MMUUWWHHAHAHAH! *sees lawyers pounding on door, waving lawsuits* ooookkkayy, I won't steal him!!!!