A Fractured Soul

by tratatolord

Yui was at a breaking point. The realization hit her hard. Nobody cares about her. At least, not in the Afterlife Battlefront. But who does she know outside of the Afterlife Battlefront? Unless you count the Vice President, who she met when she first came to the Afterlife world, she knows no one. Flames are welcome peoples. Sorry for the short first chapter...

1. Chapter 1

This is my very first attempt of an Angel Beats! fanfic… Plz let me know if you like it or not, I'm not really good at writing and all….. Flames are welcome with open arms.

EDIT: After thinking about it, I decided to add some new stuff…..

Yui lay there on the floor, the cold rain pounding on her motionless body. They had left her in the rain mercilessly. He didn't even look back at her. She was merely an extra of the Afterlife Battlefront, an extra that no one cares about. A waste of space…..

No one bothered to help her. They were all exhausted from the fight, but most of the SSS had minor injuries, unlike her. She had blades spearing her sides and a bunch of bullets in her stomach, arms, and legs. It was painful, but the hurt of realization that no one cared stung more. Her pink hair and eyes lost their bright color as she realized that no one cares about her and whether or not she disappears…..

Otonashi tried to help her, but she knew he only did it out of guilt. She assured him that she will be fine, but she wasn't so sure herself. She wished that she didn't bother to come at all. After all, no one cares if she is hurt or not. If she could laugh right now, she would've done so.

How ironic. The Afterlife was supposed to give her a chance to have a happy childhood, but this only made it worse…

'No one cares about me. I'm just a waste of space. I want to disappear right now,' were her thoughts before a figure walked towards her. She couldn't recognize who, though. The figure kneeled down next to her motionless body.

"It hurts for the one you loved to have held the gun that was pointed towards your heart, huh," the figure said. The figure gently picked her body up. That was the last thing she remembered before she fell into unconsciousness. Erm… So, what do you think? I think you should have an idea of who she was thinking of. If you don't, then oh well. Sorry for the short chapter (Um… Understatement of the year? It's hella short!)…. Plz tell me what you think…. First attempt of an Angel Beats! fanfic ya see -_- And why the heck are there no other fanfics with this pairing (you have no idea who I'm pairing with Yui at all -_-)? The intended pairing of Yui and Hinata are too popular in the fanfic world! n And I do not know why the fight started….. And it ISN'T (hint-hint) the fight with Naoi either.