This is my first ever story pls review i need some ideas thanks

They had been tracking down dusk for a month now and had basically found nothing besides infected heaps of them. "Maybe we should just give up" Valkyrie suggested

"Skulduggery won't accept a job half done." Fletcher replied

"Humph" Valkyrie sighed and slumped her shoulders

"Hey where's your happy face gone" Fletcher said as he came over and gave her a peck on the check

"Get lost" she said brushing his face away. Fletcher moved to the other side of the room and started to fiddle with his hair he could feel the tension between them this isn't what boyfriends and girlfriends are meant to act like he thought."I'm going to go and find something to do" he said moving towards the door as he reached it Calean approached from the other side. Calean stepped aside letting Fletcher go through "she anit in a good mood mate" Fletcher said just before he teleported

"Fletcher shut up" Valkyrie yelled as she turned around and saw who was actually standing there So calm and quiet "Calean" she said turning a light shade of pink "what are you doing here have you found anything?"

"No" came his calm reply.

Fletcher had left just before Valkyrie had chucked another hissy fit. She was always so worked up these days and never let him play round with her. Now she was with Calean... humph that stupid vampire he'd never be right for her.

"If you haven't found anything then why are you here" Valkyrie asked getting worked up again

"Valkyrie, calm down you're stressed out" Calean said his voice was soft but it carried all the way over to her. "please just sit down I have something I need to tell you" he gestured to a chair and Valkyrie went over and sat down she was puzzled had something terrible happened or was Calean going to tell her that his cage had been destroyed again. Once she was sitting Calean took a chair and sat in front of her. She looked up and caught his eye just before he looked away she thought she saw something in them but... he was a vampire they couldn't she looked into her lap again.

"Valkyrie I feel like such a little kid saying this but I...... I love you" Calean said Valkyrie's head snapped up and she stared at him "please stop staring at me" he said. She turned away shocked what the heck was he thinking. She felt his gaze on her and turned he caught her eye and she couldn't look away those eyes they were so cool and calm and so beautiful he leaned in and she landed in they were an inch apart when she stopped and said

"Wait you're a vampire but you can't what if you were to like bite me or something?"

"I don't want to hurt you" he said she nodded and they leaded in again until their noses where touching. Calean lifted his hand and slid it between her hair and neck gently and slowly pulling her forward util his lips touched hers. Valkyrie couldn't get over the fact that it was a vampire that her lips were touching she felt Calean kiss her and she kissed him back while thousands of butterflies were doing summersaults inside her stomach. She was confused wasn't she mean to be in love with Fletcher and be his girlfriend? She broke apart from Calean and. "are you okay" he asked looking at her worriedly

"Yeah.... why?"

"You look really pale and as if you're about to be sick... I haven't hurt you have I?" he asked quickly getting worried that he had bitten her when he said he wouldn't

"No" she replied" it just me and Fletcher were together well at least where meant to be and you... well..."

"Shh don't worry about Fletcher he'll never know" he said pulling her towards him again and pressing his lips on hers. She was the first person he had ever kissed and had a crush on why should Fletcher be the one to ruin it?

Fletcher was getting bored he decided that Calean would have left by now and that Valkyrie would have calmed down by now he teleported tot eh corridor outside the room where Valkyrie was he peeked round the door to check she was there and his jaw dropped Calean and Valkyrie were both there and talking he could hear Valkyire saying 'it just me and Fletcher were together well at least where meant to be and you... well' and then Calean said something like ' don't worry about Fletcher he'll never know' and pulled her towards him and kissed her. What! Fletcher thought. He could see Calean was like fully kissing her all over her mouth and she was responding to him with the same sort of thing. How long have they been together is this why Valkyrie seems so distant from me? He asked himself I'll just have to catch them red handed. He step into the door way and cleared his throat and Valkyrie and Calean broke apart.

okay well i guess that was okay and i know theres probably some spelling mistakes but ahh well pls review and i hope to put something up soon

Jenny Dably

I live to turn aurthors world right side up!!! hehehehehe Alyss mainwaring (my bff)