A Sasuke Love Story!! ^_^
So you know in advance I'm not a fan-girl… *shudders at the thought*… I made this because I felt like it. I'm changing parts of the original story to fit my own; like they have iPods. Also, for the most part I'm mutilating the emo-asshole Sasuke you all know… Muhahaha!
Quick Notes: []= me or you talking, ""=person talking, ''= person thinking, (NAME)-= who's talking, __time__= amount of time passed, **= a action, ()= something to extra/something to note. THNX 4 READN.!.!.!^-^
Name Hikari Reouk- Looks: Eyes such a dark blue they're almost black. Snowy white hair, falling just so it brushes ypur sholders.
Normal Attire: which is dark blue-purple pants, a black tank-top with fish-net sleeves and sometimes a chunine jacket.
Justu's- your own justu, which you most often use, is called the 'white tiger spiral'. What happens is you gather visible chakra (it's white, with silver and black threads) around your body then either shape it as a white-tiger (that makes a deep growling sound), attacking head on, or shooting out bolts of that power. Otherwise you can use chiodri and regular weapons.
Attitude- You can be a bit emo yourself. You're normally quiet. [NOT SHY!] You hardly ever show emotion around someone unfamiliar. But when around those you trust and care for, you are more open and bubbly. When you're irritated you show it clearly; and you get annoyed easily. You try not get very angry because when you are enraged you become 'demonic'; smiling and killing all who stand in your way(0.0).You love music, and your good at dancing. You practice you taijustu with music normally; you also like to go to clubs. What you listen to can affect your mood. Your dream is to be strong enough to protect those who need you. [Protect not avenge: D]
Past- You came from the Village Hidden in the Mist, where your parents and then best-friend were killed by gang violence. Your dad was in a gang. He wasn't nice; you were tormented by him and your brother on a regular basis. Both of your parents and brother were killed when you were 5 by another gang. You were already a low-level ninja and only stayed to protect your best friend Rena, who was killed when you were 9. She died while you weren't there to protect her. You tracked down and killed the people who killed her. Then you ran-away to Kohona, after this, to start anew. And the story starts………
CHAPTER 1- New... everything
Your Pov− [remember you are 9.. also wearing. ]
You didn't think you had any tears left; you felt numb, alone, and broken. You knew where you were going, but you wondered what was making you put one foot in-front of the other. Eventually you saw a big gate way before you and your face lifted from relief. You wandered through the entrance until
[-sorry I forgot their names ']
Ninja 1: "Name and Business?!" he barked.
You whirl around to find two bored-looking ninja staring at you; you stammer,
You: "I'm R-r-reouk H-hikari.!. And I'm here to… get a fresh start …"
You said the last part softly, and sadly. The two looked at you then each other. At that same time another ninja walked up, most of his face was covered and his white hair stuck straight up. The one who spoke before, swiftly asked;
Ninja 1: "Kakashi-san can you take this girl to the Hokage's office?"
Kakashi's POV−
You had just come back from a hard mission, and all you wanted to do was go sleep; [You Ö - None of his perverted books? Me ^.^- Yes, shocking I know.] when you heard one of your fellow ninja asking you something.
Ninja 1: "Kakashi-san can you take this girl to the Hokage's office?"
You looked down in front of you to see a child of about 9, staring up at you curiously. You blinked and looked at her again… 'She looks like… well me?!'
Your Pov−
'He looks more like me than my father did!?' You thought, as you looked upon this ninja incredulously. The other two obviously noticed this as well, because they glanced between the two of you, and just as the second one was going to say something the man who looked like you said,
Kakashi: "Sure I'll take her." His attention shifted to you, "If you'll follow me please."
You smile a little and nod; then follow behind him to the Hokage's office. You reached it, than waited outside his office doors as Kakashi went within. He came back a few minutes later and motioned for you to go in. You walked in cautiously and saw an elderly man sitting in front of you. He kindly said,
Hokage: "Hello, what's your name?"
You: "Reouk Hikari." Happy you didn't stutter this time.
Hokage: "Where are you from..?"
You: "The Village Hidden in the Mist." you replied quietly; looking at the floor. He looked surprised for a moment then became more serious.
Hokage: "That's a long ways away… did you come on your own?"
You: "Yes…" you answer solemnly
Hokage: "Why did you come here?"
You: "..Mm. A few reasons…" you say after some hesitation
Hokage: "Like what?" he prodded further.
You: "First… to get out of there, then for a fresh start, and to get stronger…"
Hokage: "Stronger how?" you look up at him
You: "If you will let me I'd like to become a ninja here…… though as I'm not sure of your customs, I'm not saying I will participate in them." You stare up at him sadly but stubbronly. The Hokage smiled pityingly.
Hokage: "Are you thinking of your past villages graduation custom?"
[Note- to become a ninja in their village you have to kill some of your classmates. !x!]
You: you wince then look at him, shocked, and stutter "Y-y-yes sir…" 'Dammit I hate stuttering!' He smiles at you
Hokage: "Well, you are welcomed into our village… but we have no open foster houses at the moment…" he pondered this for a moment then called "Kakashi?" Kakashi walks in "Would you mind opening your home to Hikari for awhile?" Kakashi looks down at you and shrugs,
Kakashi: "I don't mind…" you blink at him, then quickly bow saying
You: "Thank you, sir! I will not to be any trouble…" the Hokage smiles at you both. Then, to you, says
Hokage: "You will be tested on the skills you already have tomorrow."
You: "Thank you Lord Hokage." You bow to him also. You and Kakashi both take this as a dismissal and go outside his door.
Kakashi's POV−
'Ugh… Oh, great I have NO idea what to do with a child… maybe I should ask Kurenai for help?' you smile a little while you think of how she would react... you look down at your new responsibility. It surprised you that this little girl wanted to be a ninja. But, what was still more astonishing how much she looked like you. You both were even examining the other in the same way!.! After a moment you ask her
You: "Do you need to get any more of your stuff?" She tilted her head
Hikari: "No this is all Kakashi-sama…" she said, indicating her backpack.
You: you winced at the formal title "Good. Then let's get going." You wanted to test her so you picked up your pace. She still stayed at your side so you picked it up a little more… she still kept up. You started to run towards your house and she kept up without any trouble or complaint. You were stunned.
Your Pov−
You finally made it to his house. You were extremly tired before the run, so that just zapped the remaining energy from you, though you didn't let it show. He showed you to his guest room and you went to sleep instantly, a kunai in hand. __a few hours later__
Kakashi's Pov−
You woke up, and it was just now getting light out. You remembered your new little charge and went to check on her. You peeked in her door and found her fast asleep. You would've said she looked like an angel but… *sweat-drop*… she was sleeping with a kunai visible in her hand. You thought it best to not wake her up. [Scaredy cat! ^ώ^] You decided to do something nice for her so you went to your kitchen and made some pancakes for the two of you. [Sorry if they don't really eat them -.-']
Your Pov−
'Pancakes?' was the first coherent thought to cross your mind as it entered into consciousness. You are NOT a morning person. You always wake up looking demonic; though it matches your mood which is grumpy at best. Your life flashed through your mind at a rapid pace, slowing slightly at yesterday's events. You felt the familiar form of a kunai in your hand; and continued to process the smell of pancakes. You did your morning routine: brush teeth, brush hair, warm-up exercises, ex. You went downstairs and saw Kakashi had already eaten and was reading a book.
Kakashi- "Morning Hikari-chan." You blinked at the familiar title.
You- "Good morning, Kakashi-sama." He flinched at the formal title.
Kakashi- "I made pancakes… if you're hungry dig in…" you smiled a little
You- "Thank you." He blinked then you thought he smiled [darn mask .]
Kakashi- "I'll escort you to the Hokage's office after you eat…" you twitch
You- "Thank you again…" 'CRAP! I forgot.!!.!'
Kakashi's Pov-
You had just said good morning to Hikari…
Hikari- "Good morning, Kakashi-sama." You cringe at the very formal title.
You- "I made pancakes… if you're hungry dig in…" she smiled a little… it was cute. You blinked, and smiled back from under your mask.
Hikari- "Thank you." She said quietly. She was like the sweet little sister/daughter you never had… that illusion was helped by the fact she looked so much like you.
You- "I'll escort you to the Hokage's office after you eat…" she twitched. You *sweat-drop* 'Heh, I think she forgot…' She finishes, and does her dishes in silence. You were starting out towards the Hokage's office when you couldn't take the silence anymore!… so you asked,
You- "So… you're from what village again?" she looked startled for a second, then her face went back to the polite mask. She responded evenly,
Hikari- "I was born in the Village Hidden in the Mist" you were a bit surprised but kept that to yourself. You were trying to think of a question, when…
Your Pov−
You were preparing yourself for another uncomfortable question, when a loud voice yelled,
???- "HEY! KAKASHI!!!" abruptly there was a strange man in front of you. He wore a bright-green-jumpsuit and aHitai-ate around his waist; also, in your opinion, a bad hair-cut. Though the most disconcerting things for you were the cheesy smile, and he was looking at you oddly. His close figure alarmed you, and you unconsciously grasped a kunai. Only when Kakashi sighed wearily did you relax. He then reluctantly said,
Kakashi- "hi Gai…" The man apparently called Gai, the looked between the two of you and frowned.
Gai- "Kakashi, I didn't know you had a daughter.?!" [[.]o[.]What theHell?] Kakashi's eyes widened in shock. Your lip twitched, you were deciding between being: surprised, annoyed, or amused. You settled on some-place in-between, then calmly replied.
You- "Sir, my name is Reouk Hikari. To my knowledge I'm in no way related to Kakashi-sama. He is being kind enough to escort me to the Hokage's office." Kakashi got over his alarm just in time to pick up on my subtle hint.
Kakashi- "Right, we should go." We started. Until the man said cheerfully,
Gai- "Hey that's where I'm going! I'm supposed to proctor a match some new-comer who wants to be a ninja." Kakashi twitched and you grimaced,
Kakashi- "Well I think you just met her…" he muttered, Gai looked at you with an irritating amount of disbelief.
Gai- "Really? A little girl like you? Well we'll see…" then he smiled again and yelled, "Let's go!" you both sighed but followed. __At the training arena__ The Hokage sat in a area above the arena, he looked at you and smiled,
Hokage- "Good morning, I see you already met your proctor. This is your opponent…" he motioned to the man beside him. His brown-hair was in a pony-tail and he had a long scar across his nose. He bowed to the Hokage, then looked at you and smiled kindly. Then he said,
??- "Hello, I am Iruka. I am a chûnin but that's nothing to worry about." You quietly sigh in relief, you had been afraid they would set you up against someone less experienced. You smile softly and say to Iruka
You- "Thank you for taking the trouble to come out here;" To the Hokage you say, "and thank you for this opportunity." You bow politely. You then face your opponent, now walking onto the field. You politely ask,
You- "It would be easier if you attacked me first." He regards you curiously. Then Gai gives you the signal to start. He 'disappears' and tries to land a kick on your right, you stop it easily. He jumped back, throwing rapid punches and kicks; you blocked them easily never seeming to put out effort, and never attacking yourself. You finely got annoyed, and give a light kick to his stomach, pushing him away a couple feet. You frown at him and say,
You- "I understand the need to test me… but underestimating me will prove nothing." He appeared uneasy at the thought of using more of his power, so you sighed; and then made his decision easier. You gather a little of your sparking black, white, and silver charka around your hand; just enough to shock him. Then you swiftly jump towards him and spin, landing two firm hits: one in his abdomen, and one on the back of his neck. Your opponent gasps and staggers, for a moment you are unsure of what to do but then you hear a soft clapping. You turn towards the Hokage to see a slightly bewildered look on his aged face. He stops applauding and says
Hokage- "Well, I think that that's enough for today it is obvious that you are on a chûnin level at least. An from what we saw of your justu's there would be no better teacher for you than Kakashi… Do either of you mind?" you look at Kakashi again, wondering why he would be such a good teacher for you, then you and him in unison quietly say,
You & Kakashi- "No sir." All of you in the room bow, then head out.
[A/N sorry i know that was REALLY long, but i just wanted the backround to be there... There will be a 3 year skip next chapter... and to all who read and like this i love you already, but it'd really give more reason to post if i knew people actually wanted me to! THANKS!.! - LAG ^-^]