nightDREAMERms: Ok, this is my first fan-fiction on here, and my probably 15th or 16th ever. So It shouldn't be that bad. But I'm not exactly sure of FFnet's standards so don't burn it ok?! But as always criticism is welcome!
P.S. This entry is really short and sucky, well, by my standards, it is. But don't worry this is just the intro, the rest should be longer.
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EDIT: Sorry peeps who were expecting an update! I just reread this chapter and practically died due to the grammar mistakes I witnessed. I gotta fix it!
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"talking"
'thinking'
'Inner mind'
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Chapter 1: Good morning Summer, Goodbye Happiness
It was a hot beautiful summer day. The sun was shining brightly, occasionally hiding behind white puffy clouds, the younger bluebirds were testing out their wings, chirping happily as they flew, and the laughter of young children could be heard echoing all around Kono-
"WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATT??????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
… there goes the peace.
Sakura shakingly wrapped her hands around the offending piece of paper. There was no way! Hoping she had possible missed something (Though her inner mind had blandly told her that was not so) she reread it:
Dear Miss Haruno's guardians,
We are sorry to report that there has been an error in the printing of your student's report card. It seems that Sakura's grades are … less than satisfactory and at this point in time she will not be invited back to Kosuna High.
However, we do request she join Kosuna's new summer program. If she completes this program, not only will her spot be returned to her but she may be placed in advanced classes.
We highly recommend this program to any and all of our former honor roll students. For more information…
That was all she needed to know.
'This can't be possible! I ace all my tests, do all my homework, heck, I even did that insane extra credit project no one did! This must be a mistake.'
Feeling slightly light-headed Sakura let herself plop down on her mattress, cherry-blossom pink strands flying wildly with the force of the air behind her and into her line of vision, hands still glued to the letter.
'Guess were not as smart as we thought we were, are we now' mocked her Inner Self. She had been their ever since Sakura could remember but sometimes… she wished the voice would just disappear… ok ALL the time!
' You know you just called yourself stupid', Sakura inwardly rolled her eyes.
'… shut up… just, shut up'
'… Maybe if I glare at it REALLY hard , it'll disappear'
' Yes, because that sounds oh so logical'
' You got anything better?!'
Sakura briefly thought of whining to her friend at the clear injustice, but decided against it, knowing that one, at least, would mock her to the point of insanity.
The rosette crumbled the letter into a ball and threw it hopelessly behind her, before walking across her room to solemnly look out her balcony window.
She could see one of her neighbor's, a red-head, talking animatedly with a boy with dark, smoothed-back hair. She was wearing nothing but a light blue bikini and a fashionable sun-hat that matched.
That was right, Karin was going to her summer house in Suna and planned to come back tanned and ready to start the school year with every girl in school looking at her to her with eyes full of envy.
And now, thanks to this random unexpected event, Sakura would be one of those jealous girls. Why? Because-
'I'm going to summer school'
She let her forehead greet the windowsill with a groan.
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nightDREAMERms: See! Told you it'd be short! R&R!