a/n this is my first fanfic so please be nice
intro
Jathme Sarrpoter stirred at the familiar hissing words of Hermione, his faithful sidekick,
"Time for the hunt my dear friend" said Jathme as the snake transformed itself smoothly into the Mudblood Queen,
"Yes, i believe it is time we paid the Riddles a little visit." said she.
Tom Riddle awoke to hear a knock on the door of his home, who could it be calling in the middle of the night. He crept silently down the stairs, cricket bat in hand, and pulled open the door...
"Abracadabra!" was the last thing he heard before plunging into the pit of darkness.
"Murder she wrote", chuckled the queen to herself, "come in my lord, the Muggle has been taken care of." she chuckled again as her master stepped through the door, "the muggle's brat and his whore mother are upstairs, my lord" the faithful servant added.
"Good Hermione, you will be rewarded most significantly, now, hold out your left arm," said the dark lord, drawing his holly wand out, " Mormordres!" and he stabbed his wand on Hermione's wrist.
At once a red lion prowled it's way up into the the sky, to be met with a gigantic serpent which swallowed it whole. And promptly puked up some figures dressed in black.
"tonight my faithful servants shall feast on the brown blood of the Muggle town, and let it be known that dark wizards are the most powerful force in the world!" cried Jathme "tonight is the night of the rebellion. Send news to Nabaksa and tell the dementors to allow everyone out, and follow them to the Ministry Of magic!" the small crowd roared as Jathme stepped inside with the queen and the weasel to take care of the Muggle lovers!
Merope rushed into her bedroom, with little Tom in her arms, desperately looking for her wand, anything that could protect her from You-know-who, when, strolling quite serenely came in Goofyus and Weaselby, with Jathme Sarrpoter.
"Stand aside girl, don't make me kill you, i just need the baby." said Sarrpoter, with an uncomfortable serenity about him
"Take me instead, not Tom, not little Tom!" cried Merope
"I didn't have to kill you but you left me no choice, abracadabra!"
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"oww!" and then all i saw was a bright green light and my mum lay down in front of me, i didn't know what had happened until i got hit by the same light, only this time it was different, i kind of felt a push back, and the hooded figure fled with his croney's. I have no other recollection of the incident and only here it when i get attacked by dementors, but all the same, it was the worst thing that ever happened to me, luckily it was the worst thing that ever happened to him as well!
so, what did you think
the character view points are as follows
Harry
Tom Riddle elder
Hermione
Merope Riddle
The Boy who lived
please review, i need the encouragement to start writing again.