The script style has be changed after the first chapter if your hoping to read it more better or clearer in the normal way
Soul Eater
Soul and Maka
1st chapter
On a sunny afternoon, Soul and Maka takes a stroll down the sidewalk heading towards the amusement park.
Soul: I don't see how this has to with becoming a death scythe…
Maka: oh soul can you just hold on a second about becoming a death scythe after beating the kishin we should relax and celebrate by going to the amusement park
Soul: (sigh) your right Maka
As the two enter the park Maka's eyes wonder all around with excitement never seen before in her eyes. She glances over at Soul, grabs Soul's hand and runs.
Soul: Ma- MAKA!
Soul tries catching his breath while he runs with Maka.
Maka: Soul look!
When Soul recovers his breath he looks up at what Maka was looking at and gets amuse with excitement
Soul: wow Maka that ride looks awesome…i…mean…what? you want to go on it?
Maka: Yeah let's go on Soul
Soul stares at Maka and looks carefully at her. Soul notices that Maka got a post card from her mom this morning. Wondering Soul starts thinking maybe the card must of trigger Maka excitement a lot not to mention she did beat the kishin yesterday, Soul starts wondering. Maka's mom must of have said something very interesting to her, Soul thought but then again he's just guessing. As Soul and Maka got onto the ride Maka gave Soul a smile like he never saw before.
After Soul and Maka got on all the rides Maka suggested and had fun Soul started to think. Soul thought, I'm tired of being so nervous so flush into feelings I can't explain to Maka. He didn't know what he was feeling. As Soul and Maka were walking home Maka begin to say something then stop. Soul look at her curiously.
Soul: Maka what's wrong?
Maka: oh nothing…
Soul couldn't stand suspense he hated it when Maka wants to say something to him and never finish it drives Soul up the wall.
Soul: Maka…I don't like suspense…
Maka: oh sorry Soul…
A long silence fell through both their ears. Then Maka finally started to say something.
Maka: I'll be leaving soon…Soul
Soul: …?
Soul started to think again then everything he thought puzzle together. Maka's postcard from her mom! Her mom must of have told her she'll be coming by this city to come see her and pick her up. Soul's mind spun in circles thinking, wishing, and hoping his assumption wasn't right. Soul doesn't want Maka to leave he hasn't even told what he's feeling towards Maka yet.
Maka opens the door to their apartment. They both step in and slowly look at each other.
Maka: Soul I was meaning to tell you this morning but I didn't want you to worry or anything
Soul: no it's fine Maka…
Maka: I'll be leaving in a week…
Soul's heart starts to tighten with strings of hopelessness. How is Soul going to tell her in a week?
Maka: Soul what's wrong? Your face looks flush and you look frighten
Soul: Maka…
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