Bed of Roses

by ChocolatePhantom93

this is my first post, and it's an old poem I wrote about someone who passed on and decided to post it, I wrote this YEARS AGO so it's prob. not that good, sorry for shitty summery

This is a poem I wrote when some very important people (to me) passed away and... yeah no flame please this is my first post here! Review I don't mind criticism and I know it's short and at the time I was like 8 or 9 so it's probably not THAT good, anyway... ON WITH THE POEM

~Bed of Roses~

The life of roses fades roses fades to black

As the petals crunch and crack

And when the petals touch the ground Life itself turns around

Pain and panic fills your eye As your loved ones start to cry

They lay you down on a comfy bed

And throw roses over your head

And when the angels start to sing

Their songs are soft like butterfly wings

The light appears and that's the end Of pain and suffer

What we dread

~SO THAT'S IT PLEASE NO FLAMES I WON'T BE DOING ALOT OF SAD THINGS LIKE THIS AND THEY WILL MOSTLY BE ANIME RELATED BUT IN EARLY TO MID FEB. AND LATE DECEMBER I MAY DO A LITTLE 'IN MEMORIUM THING ALSO ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE SO I HAD TO USE WHAT I LEARNED TO TRANSLTE SORRY IF I DOESN'T MAKE SENSE IN SOME PARTS~

ChocolatePhantom OUT! ^ - ^