Aoi Maboroshii, had just moved to Japan from America because she was amazingly intelligent and the schools in America where not good enough for her. She was also amazingly beautiful with deep green eyes and silky blonde hair. One day, she decided o stop at a cut pink café entitled "Café Mew Mew" when she walked up to it there was an earth quake and she was hit with a blinding white light. She then found herself in a stranage white place full of bubbles. One of the bubbles popped and a white fox came out and walked up to her. Aoi picked it up and it jumped inside of her. Then all the bubbles and light dissappeared. Aoi looked around too see she was back infront of the Café but she decided eating cakes and pasteries would be bad for her figure. So she went for a walk around the park.
Theh she saw a group of girls with animal parts fighting a monster. They were being beaten badly by it. Aoi instantly knew she had to help them so she ran up to the monster.
"Stop it!" she shouted and took an attack that was meant for the pink one. While she lay on the ground a pink robot came flying up to her and dropped a pendant. Aoi grabbed it and kissed it "Mew Mew Aoi! METAMORPHO-SIS!" she glowed white and ribbons wrapped around her body then came off leaving a white dress similar to ichigo's but was cut of right under her chest so it showed more than Zakuro's out fit. Then the ribgons wrapped around her legs and left boots like zakuro's in white and a garter oon her right leg like ichigo that were white with blue lining. Then arm bands popped up that were white with blue lining. And Blue lace popped out of the top of her dress. Thenthe ribbons came back and touched her head leaving white ears and a tail popped out. Then she opened her eyes and smiled beautifully then jumped back and did a ack flip and striked a pose like Ichigos only cuter.
"Blue Wand!" she summoned a white wand with a blue crystal on top.
"Ribbon Aoi Freeze!" the attack hit the monster and it it was detroyed instantly.
"Aw geez!" Ichigo cried getting up.
"What is with all these Mary Sues!?"
"What are you talking about I just saved you?" Aoi asked nicely.
"What she's talking about is we're sick of all the fans writing such horrible stories. We're all out of character and look! That grammer, spelling and puncuation is terrible!" Minto explained.
"It would be best that you go before we force you to go" Zakuro said.
"But I just saved you aren't you going to thank me and marvel at my power!?"
"No… sorry I'm really sorry!" Lettuce begged.
"Fine then! I'll go defeat the aliens myself!"
With Aoi's power and beauty, she defeated Deep Blue and won Kisshu's heart nd made him forget all about Ichigo.
"No! Get away! I want Koneko-Chan!"
The End
Mean. It cut of the end. So i redid it. Well Ja Ne!