Well, this is the first rewritten chapter. I've added more detail to them. And unlike some authors I'm not rewriting this for more reviews. I'm rewriting it because it sucks and has absolutely no direction in it. =-) So yeah, all of it will be rewritten. Fairly quickly as I am now experiencing the joys of summer holidays. And as you know I update fairly quickly when I have a lot of time on my hands…like in the beginning. So yes! Finals are over! WOOHOO!!!!!!! Now I can receive my failing marks. Hahaha.

Disclaimer for ENTIRE story: I don't own it. Except for the plot. That is mine. But I don't own any characters…yet. Bwahahahaha…-cough-

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'Oh mah god, Ah'm not gonna get away!' Rogue thought as she ran through the forest near the X-Mansion, trying to save herself from the Sentinels. She was dragging Kitty with her.

"Oh my god! We're not going to, like, make it!" Kitty screamed. A sentinel shot the ground about 3 feet from them and as they flew Kitty fazed them through a tree. After rolling back onto their feet they continued to run, right to the cliff overlooking the lake.

"Kitty, you can swim righ'?" Rogue asked.

"DUH! Do you think I'm a mor-" Kitty began as Rogue pushed her over the edge. Rogue dove after, right before a Sentinel blasted the cliff. Rogue felt the cold sting of the water as she hit it. The Sentinel flew over the water and fire random plasma beams into the lake, trying to desperately capture one of the mutants. Rogue dodged one that came particularly close to hitting her and swam deeper and a little more straight, owning to the fact she veered off course. Rogue stayed under until she saw the shadow of the Sentinel fly back towards the Mansion. As she swam to the surface Rogue felt a passing wave of nausea as she had been holding her breath for so long. As she broke the water's surface she gasped for breath and peered around only to see Kitty pulling herself out of the water. As Rogue climbed onto the bank Kitty fell to her knees in despair and looked on towards the mansion with a look of horror on her face. Rogue stood and turned to view the sight that made Kitty look like that. And she couldn't believe her eyes.

"It's really gone, it's really gone…" Kitty whispered as she saw the Mansion go down in flames. Rogue stood still as stray tears made their way down her face.

"C'mon, we can' stay here…" Rogue whispered, tugging on Kitty's arm. Kitty reluctantly got up and started walking deeper into the forest with Rogue. After walking next to Rogue for a few minutes Kitty decided to speak.

" Rogue?" Kitty whispered

"Ya?" Rogue said.

"Where do you think the others are?" Kitty asked.

"Ah don' know, Kit. I jus' hope tha' they are somewhere safe." Rogue whispered.

"I miss Kurt." Kitty said. Rogue nodded, to emotional to say anything. "I really hope he's like, ok." Right after her words a tree fell down. Then another. Rogue slowly turned around to see 4 Sentinels peering down at them.

"Shit." Rogue said breathlessly. She grabbed Kitty and ran.

"Oh my god, oh my god!" Kitty screamed. They ran right into the foot of another Sentinel. The Sentinel shot them with a plasma beam and as she fell Rogue could distinctly see the read metal hand reaching for her body.

-half an hour later-

"Put her in the cell over there with Danvers…" A man said, "And put the other one in there, with LeBeau. Make sure the collars are intact...don't want them to escape." He finished with a chuckle. Rogue was thrown, literally, thrown into the cell with the dude, while Kitty was thrown into one with a chick. Rogue looked groggily up at the ceiling to see the concerned face of a guy, right before she passed out.

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Rogue screamed. It was the third time they experimented on her. The third time they tried to figure out how to control her powers. She had so much wires coming out of her that she could have passed as the Terminator. She was being electrified.

"This is no good!" Trask screamed. "I want results NOW!"

"Mr. Trask...W-w-w-e are trying." One of the scientists stuttered.

"Obviously not hard enough! Bring in Danvers…the tests aren't working, so we'll try to see if she can learn fast enough to control them before she sucks the life out of her." Trask said evilly. Trask had three of his men lock Rogue down on a table, while a screaming Danvers was locked down on the other. Rogue struggled to get loose but she couldn't.

"No!" Rogue screamed, as Trask placed her hand on Carol's. Carol began to scream as Rogue tried to break free. Eventually Rogue gave up, giving in to the screams of the poor girl. Rogue closed her eyes tight and screamed as loud as she could as she felt the last ounces of life drain from Carol's body.

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So…the rewrite is done. I fixed how I spelt Gambit's last name. LeBleau? How come no one pointed that out to me?! Woah. Lol. Review! Seeing as how I'm on a diet I don't have cookies…but I have…-looks around-…popsicles. Nice, fruity, popsicles. Mmm…-sad look-