Hello yeah this is me Tamara the Hybridian now I'm writing this for two reasons;

I have a really bad case of Writer's Block and

I want to see what I could do with someone else's work.

I don't own any of the characters or ideas in this I only own my version of how it would play out. The real story belongs to Girlwithapencil thank you


I am a pokémon, a shinx for those who don't know. I suppose you could describe me as a lion cup with blue fur black hindquarters and black front paws I also have a yellow star on the end of my tail. I am a female shinx and I'm very lonely. Lonely for what I am not sure.

Once again I'm laying in the grass feeling it rustling against my fur. I long for someone to be beside me though and I don't like been alone. I stumble clumsily to my feet and look around here comes my older brother a luxio. He is grinning and runs right past me, the dust left in his wake causes me to cough and I growl after him.

"Please don't worry little one he is just playing" an older voice states and I look up. It's Raichu, he grins down at me. "I know what you're lonely for and so does your brother just you wait I'm sure he has something up his sleeve" Raichu states and I groan.

"You've been hanging around with humans too much again" I plainly point out. He ignores me and walks away.

Then my brother comes back with him are some other pokémon, I groan they aren't my age their species vary though and I might as well tell you; There is a spicy Servine who instantly tries to flirt with me but one thunder fang quickly took care of that. A shy Pignite whom I ignore. A Wartortle who sees me and runs. A Persian who is too stuck up to care. A Grotle who looks apologetically at me then makes an excuse to leave. A Croconaw who is way too much of a show off. The last pokémon is a Marshtomp who glares at my brother madly.

I sigh and quickly walk away shaking my head. Sure they are all nice but I'd much rather have someone closer to my age. I stop suddenly that's not what I want. Yet it is. I barely notice Raichu coming up to me until he speaks.

"I may have found the solution to your problem Shinx" I look up and from behind Raichu steps…


Now I know that Girlwithapencil's story never had a cliff hanger here but this is my adaption of that idea so, any and all C&C is welcome as long as it's not a flame. Flames will kindly be donated to the fire.