A/N. I wrote this quickly, in a hurry, and I ended up liking it a lot , so I posted it .
It's a Monday. She's sitting at the beach, glancing towards him. He looks up from his phone, and a lock of his dirty hair drops into his. It's not a sunny day. He wonders why she's there on such an ugly day. She couldn't be there to surf or swim, she didn't have a suit on. Then he saw the clear liquid seep out of her eyes. She looked back down at the sand. He smiled.
{That was the day they met}
It's been four months and he knows little about her, but he's already fallen in love. Her eyes are his favorite. They're blue like the ocean and he loves the ocean. He teaches her how to surf. She falls of a lot at first. Most of the time she just can't catch the waves. She catches one and she falls off about ten seconds after getting up. A millisecond before she hits the water he sees a bright smile on her face.
{That was the day they first did it}
It's been a year and he knows she's 18, beautiful and careless. He smiles one morning when she says "I wish my parents would've named me Oceana. It's such a pretty name." and he just stares and thinks about how her eyes look like the salt water he loves so much. After a morning surf session, she throws up, right on the beach. She says she's fine and he believes her.
{That was the day they learned she had a life inside her}
She's nine months pregnant and she's as beautiful as ever. He knows they were meant to be together. He remembers one morning she had a craving for fish so he went to the store and bought her fish. He remembers the day she cut her hair. She was eight months pregnant and particularly bored, so she cut off all her hair. It was much shorter than his, by the thought she looked amazing.
{That was the day he proposed}
She goes into labor on a Sunday. Her water breaks that gloomy day while they're walking on the beach. It looked as though she had just pissed her pants. He fought the urge to laugh before he comprehended what was going on. She screams and screams and he wonders if they've given her the drugs yet. Then something goes wrong and he's being ushered out of the hospital room. He gets one last look at her ocean eyes.
{That was the day she ceased living}
He names her Oceana because she loved that name and he loves oceans. Dune loses Claire on a Monday, the same day he got her.
A/N. Okay , I have to say I am pretty freaking proud of this . So , I like consturtive criticism and reviews . K thanks . Bye (:
~Michele