Ok I'm new at this so give me a break I kind of suck at starting stories
I also do not own DBZ I wish I did but sadly I don't but I do own Eclipse a character I made up
By the way to clear up any confusion Eclipse is Vegeta's oldest daughter and is also Bra's twin she has black hair and black eye's and over all looks a lot like Vegeta
And by the way this {} represent thoughts or a telepathic conversation
And this [] represents thoughts
Oh and this( ) those are my notes
Oh and another thing I have no idea what Bra or Pan's personality is like since I haven't seen GT and stuff so I'm making them have the personality I want so don't flame me if their personality is off
Ages
Eclipse and Bra=7
Trunks=10
Goten=9
Pan=6
Bulma=33
Vegeta=34
This story takes place 2 years after the Buu saga and I know I changed the ages of Bulma and Vegeta and stuff but I want them to be in there 30's and Trunks to be 3 years older then his twin sisters so read and enjoy
Enslaved
~~~~~~~~ It was another average day at the Briefs house~~~~~~~~~~
Bulma was busy cooking breakfast with the help of her robots after she put the food on the table.
"Vegeta, Trunks Eclipse and Bra get down here" she yelled up the stairs but heard no reply. "GRRRRRRRRRRRRR I KNOW YOU CAN HEAR ME NOW GET DOWN HERE" yelled Bulma at the top of her lungs but still heard now answer. "OK THAT"S IT IF YOUR NOT DOWN HERE IN 10 SECONDS NONE OF YOU WILL GET ANY FOOD" she screamed.
Within an instant Vegeta, Trunks, Eclipse and Bra appeared at the table and started chomping down on the food with out even saying a Hi or Good Morning to Bulma. Who was still standing there rather fazed by how the just seemed to appear out of thin air.
In a matter of seconds all the food had been devoured seeing that there was no more food left they turned to leave.
"Where do you think your all going" asked Bulma in a dangerous tone. "I SPEND ALL MORNING MAKING BREAKFAST AND YOU DON"T EVEN THANK ME" she screamed at the four Sayains who were now covering their Ears because of Bulma's yelling.
"Gee Mom you didn't have to yell we were standing right next to you" said Trunks who was rubbing his sensitive ears.
With that Bulma pulled out a frying pan and hit Trunks over the head with it. Trunks grabbed his head in pain as a large bump appeared on it. Both Vegeta and Eclipse snickered at Trunks while Bra grimaced at the large bump on Trunks head.
"That hurt what did you do that for" asked Trunks who was still holding his head.
"I hit you because of the smart remark you made" answered Bulma who was still holding the frying pan in her right hand daring Trunks to make another remark.
"Well still you didn't have to hit me I don't see why you're so upset" said Trunks.
"UPSET YOU WANT TO KNOW WHY I'M UPSET I'LL TELL YOU WHY I'M UPSET I SPEND ALL MORNING SLAVING OVER A HOT STOVE, AND FOR WHAT! DO I GET ANY APPERSION NO ALL I ASK FOR IS A LITTLE RESPECT I WOULD BE HAPPY WITH A THANK YOU OR A GOOD MORNING BUT NONE OF YOU SEEM TO CARE!" Screamed Bulma
"Oh you're done um…. can I go to Goten's house" asked Trunks.
"GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR TRUNKS" screamed Bulma as she ran after Trunks with her frying pan. Trunks ran out the door and flew off towards Goten's house trying to escape his mother's wrath, and Eclipse and Bra did the same not wanting to be left with there enraged mother and Vegeta watched his mate scream at Trunks.
"TRUNKS YOU GET BACK HERE RIGHT NOW" screamed Bulma who was still hold her frying pan
[How could I ever have doubted why I chose her] thought Vegeta with a smirk on his face.
Then Bulma walked up to Vegeta "he gets that attitude of his from your side of the family" said Bulma.
"Are you sure about that woman" asked Vegeta before walking away towards the Gravity Room.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~MOUNTAINS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Two young Sayains stood on a large rock in the mountains
"Where is Pan we have been waiting here for 7 mins she only lives 12 miles away what's taking so long" said Eclipse who was growing more inpatient by the second
"Calm down Eclipse I'm sure she has a good excuse" said Bra
"She better" muttered Eclipse under her breath earning a glare from Bra
Then a small spot was seen in the sky as it came closer it could be identified as Pan
"Hey Eclipse there's Pan" said Bra while pointing to the incoming figure
"Well it's about time" said Eclipse with her usual scowl on her face
"Hey Guys sorry it took so long" said Pan
"Its ok" said Bra with a smile
"Speak for your self what took you so long" asked Eclipse
"Well there was this cute little" said Pan before she was cut off
"Forget I asked" said Eclipse.
Her only response was being elbowed in the gut by Bra.
"Hey what did you do that for" demanded Eclipse
"For being so rude to Pan" responded Bra
"It's hard to believe that you two are twins" said Pan
"You're telling me" responded the two together in unison
"And yet sometimes it seems so obvious" said Pan
"What don't compare me to Bra I'm nothing like her thankfully" said Eclipse
"WHAT DID YOU SAY!" screamed Bra?
"You Heard Me" said Eclipse who now had a smirk plastered on her face
"Why YOU Little" said Bra who was shaking with anger
"You seem to be at a loss of words what's your problem" mocked Eclipse
"My only Problem is that I'm related to you why don't I fix that" said Bra while putting her fist in Eclipse's face
"Like you could hurt me" said Eclipse
"I know I can" said Bra
"Then why don't you prove it" said Eclipse
"Ok I will" said Bra
"Ok then I challenge you to a spar" Said Eclipse
"Fine" replied Bra
"Then why don't we even the odds I'll let Pan be on your side so it will be two against one" said Eclipse with the utmost confidence
"Fine with me" said Bra
"Hey Don't I get a say in this" asked Pan
Pan's only response was a death glare from both Bra and Eclipse
"Apparently not" said Pan
All three of them got into a fighting stance
"Oh I have an Idea why don't we raise the stakes" said Eclipse with a mischievous glint in her eye
"What do you have in mind" asked Bra
"Whoever loses has to be the winners personal slave for the rest of the day or in other words till sunset" said Eclipse a large smirk now placed on her face
"Fine it's a deal I had no idea you wanted to be humiliated so badly not only will you have to live with the shame of defeat but you also get to do my bidding how lucky for me" replied Bra
"Who said I would be the one losing" said Eclipse
"It's obvious with me and Pan fighting you. You won't even stand a chance" said Bra
"That's what you think" said Eclipse her smirk only growing bigger
"Hey are we going to fight or what" asked Pan bring them all back to reality
"Yeah we just had to come to an agreement" said Eclipse
"Well come on lets get stared" said Pan.
With those words an all out war was waged between the threesome as they moved faster then the eye can see (I'm to darn lazy to write a battle so just imagine it ok)
Many punches and kicks were thorough till it seemed Bra and Pan had gained the upper hand
"You ready to surrender yet" asked Bra
"You wish" replied Eclipse
"Oh come on Eclipse face the facts you are losing and there is no way you can win" said Bra
"That's what you think" said Eclipse
"And what exactly is that supposed to mean" asked Bra
"It means you have no idea what real power is and that I have only be toying with you" replied Eclipse
"Yea right prove it" said Pan
"Ok fine but now any chance you may once had of wining is about to disappear" said Eclipse as she started powering up
The ground around Eclipse started to shake and fall apart as she powered up more and more
[Did Eclipse's hair just flash gold or was in my imagination] thought Pan
Eclipse's eyes were now a teal Green and her hair was staring to stand up and turn a gold color
"What the Heck it can't be is Eclipse a super Sayain" said Pan out load
Eclipse gave a load yell and a blinding light was emitted from her body when the dust cleared what Pan and Bra say all most but them in shock there before them stood a completely transformed Eclipse her once onyx eyes were now a teal green and her Jet black hair was now Gold and stood straight up in the shape of a flame much like her father the only difference were the bangs hanging down on her face she gave a large smirk at the looks on their faces
"What never seen a Super Sayain before" asked Eclipse
They still gave no reply just stood there and stared at her
"Are you going to stand there gawking at me all day or are you going fight" asked Eclipse
Bra shook her head and brought her self back to reality "of course were going to fight we were just waiting for you to power up isn't that right Pan" said Bra while elbowing Pan in the side to make her answer
"ah yeah that's right" answered Pan
"Well that's good to hear" said Eclipse
"Well I'm feeling generous this morning so I'll give you a free shot" said Eclipse
"Ok if you say so but don't say I didn't warn you" said Bra
As she and Pan started to power up for their KI attack the two were surrounded by a strange colored aurora then all of a sudden they released there attacks
Bra- BLUE BLAZE!!!!!!!!!!!! Screamed Bra
Pan-SUN BEAM!!!!!!!! Yelled Pan
With that 2 fairly large KI beams came rushing towards Eclipse yet Eclipse still stood perfectly still with her arms crossed till the KI beams were a mere second from impacting that's when Eclipse finally made her move as the KI blasts were closing in on there intended target all Eclipse did was shake her head in disapproval and put her hands out in front of her body
Pan and Bra watched the whole thing from above and thought for sure that Eclipse had been over powered by their Blasts just as they were about to celebrate their victory the smoke cleared to reveal Eclipse standing there unharmed from the blasts. Both Bra and Pan's mouth fell open in disbelief.
"What happened to our KI blasts they couldn't have just disappeared" said Bra in a some what panicked voice
"Oh are you looking fro these" said Eclipse as she pulled her hands out from behind her back to reveal the two KI blasts that were being held in her hands
"WHAT THERES NO WAY how could she just have caught the blasts like that" said Pan who was more then surprised by the resent events
"Actually it was simple your KI blasts were so weak so I just caught them" said Eclipse
"But if you want them that bad I'll give them back" said Eclipse as she combined the two blasts together
"oh and just to make things more interesting I'll add a little something of my own" said Eclipse as she gathered some KI in her left hand and added it to the blast causing it to double in size Eclipse merely smirked at her handy work before she threw the blast back at Bra and Pan. The two Sayains shielded there faces from the blast as it blew up upon in packet a large mushroom cloud stood where they used to be floating when the smoke cleared the two Sayains pulled them selves out of the crater coughing
"That's the last time I listen to you" said Pan
"Oh just shut up" said Bra in a annoyed voice
"So you had enough" asked Eclipse
"Ya" answered Pan
"Whatever" said Bra
"Well I'll take that as a yes" said Eclipse
Eclipse was then surrounded by a light blue aurora she lifted her hands into the air and
"LUNAR LIGHT!!!" yelled Eclipse
The blast split into two and hit Pam and Bra when the blinding effects of the blast faded the two noticed that there wounds had been healed they looked at each other in confusion
"That was a Lunar Light attack a little something I've been working on anyone injured who has Sayain blood in them will be healed when hit with it" said Eclipse
"But how does it work?" asked Pan
Eclipse-It uses some of my energy and increases it tenfold because of the moon it matters how full the moon is though
"Oh I get it" said Pan
"Well I'm not sure about you two but I'm really hungrey do you want to go to my house to get something to eat" asked Eclipse
"yes I thought you would never ask" said Pan
"Hey how about you Bra do you want to get something to eat to" asked Pan
"Sure I could go for some food right about now" said Bra
"Well it's setteled then we'll all go to C.C for some food" said Pan
And with that said the three blasted off towards C.C
Please please review I just want to know what you think or what I need to work on and any suggestions you have for future chapters I will take into account and I will most likely use them in my story and if you have any questions feel free to ask and I will try to awnser them oh and one more thing could you tell me what you think of my charcter Eclipse thank you for reading