Hey guys it's AuthorSkills bringing you a new story
I'm a little new to the writing world so excuse me for any errors so anyways onto the story.
Introduction
Jack was in the Barracks loading up and getting ready to go on a night op to an enemy base to take out one of their main Generals. He first made sure that his sidearm was ready a M1911 handed down to him by his Grandfather. Next he checked his primary which was a M416 assault rifle that most of the men had. He laced up his boots and strapped on his plate carrier and put on his Tactical Vest over the Plate Carrier. He made sure that he had plenty of ammunition and had a duffle bag at his side full of ammunition so that he would not have to worry about running out in the middle of his mission. After that he checked that his Tac Bag had clothing and all the things that he may possibly need. He then slung the Duffle bag over his Shoulder and opened his door, not two seconds later an explosion went off and alarms started to sound. Jack ran outside to see what was going on, turned out the enemy was assaulting them with what they had. There was explosions and gunfire everywhere. Out of nowhere jack saw a stray RPG round heading straight towards him all he managed to get out where the words, "Well Shit."
Chapter 1
"Whoa where am I?" Jack said all that was around him was blinding white light. "You are in a place that no harm can come to you but you are not dead." Said a mysterious voice. Jack turned around slowly to see a mysterious figure behind him. "Then why am I here?" Jack asked. "You are here because it is time for you to take part in your true destiny." Said the mysterious figure. "What is that destiny?" Jack asked. "You will soon find out yourself." The mysterious figure said while disappearing. Jack stood there confused then suddenly everything went black.
Jack slowly opened his eyes to reveal that he was in the middle of a clearing in the forest. He quickly jumped up and checked what supplies he had still on his hip was his 1911 and on the sling was his M416. He still had on everything else just that half of the ammo was gone out of the duffle bag leaving him with at least 500 spare rounds for each weapon. Jack searched around the clearing or a while until he found what looked to be like a dirt road having nothing better to do he started to walk down the road. After around 2 hours of walking he saw smoke in the sky, using better judgment he guessed that it was a campfire and whoever's it was would know where he was at. He started to walk towards the smoke and the he thought better of himself remembering his training. He flanked around the smoke to a large bush that he slowly walked up behind. He peeked up over the bush to see what was going on. What he saw he instantly hated he saw strange humanoid creatures that looked like animals. He saw Wolves, Dogs, Foxes, but only one Tiger. Something I his mind told him to keep that tiger with him and set the others go he trusted his mind. He heard the, who now called slaver, talk to the other slaver, "These stupid Keidran I see why we keep them as slaves, hah they don't deserve to be treated fairly, hah." This angered Jack to the extreme and Jack reached in his bag and pulled out a suppressor for his M416 that he had in his bag in case it was needed. Jack slowly screwed it on not wanting the Slavers to notice him sitting over in the bushes until he wanted them to. He then got down into prone position where he then crawled underneath the bush so that he could have a clear line of sight on the Slavers but they could not see him. He got into position and then called out, "Hey you two by the fire, I am giving you three seconds to put down everything that you have and start running from this area now!" He saw the Slavers draw there swards and they yelled back, "Why would we do that I bet you are just trying to scare us!" Jack then yelled, "THREE…TWO…ONE!" The slavers didn't move a muscle and on the end of one Jack took two precise shots at the two slavers. Both ended up with holes in there heads and they fell over. Jack looked at the what he now learned were called Keidran and saw that they had shock on their faces and were wandering what had just happened to the two slave traders. As they were now dead on the ground with a hole in their heads and all that was heard was a barely audible bang. Than Jack stood up from the bush he was in and slowly walked up to the slaves. He then said, "Who here knows were their home is?" All of the Keidran nodded except for the Tiger who Jack had just deduced was a girl. Jack was confused apparently this girl did not know where her home was so his mind was correct in saying take her with you. Jack then walked over to the two bodies and looked for keys he found a set and walked over to the first Keidran in line and started working down the row. As Jack let them go they started running off presumedly to where they lived at. Once Jack had reached the tiger he said to her, "I saw that you had not nodded your head when I asked if you knew where your home was." The tiger looked up at him and then her eyes went to ones of surprised as she said, "Look Out!" Jack quickly spun around drawing his pistol and saw what looked like another slaver rushing at him with a sword. Jack shot him in the face before he could get to close to him with the sword that he was carrying. Jack then turned towards the tiger she was holding her ears and Jack remembered that his M1911 did not have a suppressor on it and that she probably had really sensitive hearing with her big ears. He then told her, "Sorry about that, now you're coming with me but I need to keep your chains on you because I'm taking you to one of the town and I don't think they would like seeing you without chains. I will take them off as soon as we get to an inn." The tiger just nodded ears probably still ringing from the gunshot. Jack searched around the camp site for a little longer finding himself a tent, some dried meat, and a large bag full of silver and gold coins. Jack guessed that this was the currency in this place so he kept it grabbed the key to the tiger chains and then walked back over to her. The two started moving towards the nearest town after about an hour of walking the two finally reached the town and Jack went on the search for an inn immediately. He eventually found one and got a room set up for him just for one night that was all that he felt like staying. He then walked into his room tiger in tow and shut and locked the door behind him. He then walked up to the tiger and pulled out the key to her chains. The tiger held out her paws and Jack unlocked the chain around her arms and then the chains around her neck. Jack then said, "Were I come from slavery is illegal and no one is allowed to be kept as a slave, and in my opinion no one anywhere deserves to be kept as a slave at all.
Hey guys its AuthorSkills and I have just spent another hour or so rewriting Chapter 1 I will start rewriting Chapter 2 tomorrow because now I am going to sleep. I completely erased everything and restarted with my own ideas.
So thanks for helping out I will fix two and three soon see you then
-AuthorSkills