Naruto—Sharingan warrior
On the night of Naruto's 6th birthday an unusual ally helps him…
I don't own naruto, wish I did though.
'thoughts' "speech" "demon/summon speech" 'demon/summon thoughts'
He ran through the village 'there has to be a way out, there always is' he thought to himself. Now the boy was not as smart as some people in his class, but he knew the reason they were chasing him. On the night of his birthday (October 10) the kyubbi no kitsune attacked konohagakure and while the shinobi were strong, they weren't strong enough to defeat this monstrous beast, he knew that the hokage couldn't kill a demon, he knew that he would have to seal it away. He knew what the seal on his stomach was, he knew why the villagers called him a demon, yet he still didn't believe it. "come back here you demon!" one of his attackers shouted. Spotting a hole in the wall he tried to make a dash for it, unfortunately for him there were several shinobi in the mob. They caught him just as he was about to sprint away. "I will finish what the forth started!" a chunin in the mob screamed and chucked a kunai at the boy's head. The boy had reflexes to match though (due to the many years of torture from many like this man) and dodged out of the way. When the mob started to advance however he realised he was trapped. Walls on either side of him he started to back away 'if only I could do the walk on walls thing that the ANBU could' the young boy thought to himself.
And then the beating started. Strong men, weak men and shinobi all attacked at once, leaving the boy swollen and bleeding. When the pain became too much he retreated into the calm embrace of unconsciousness. Straight away however he woke up - much to his disappointment. He walked around to regain his senses and found he was in a sewer, although his clothes didn't seem to be wet. Out of the blue he heard a voice coming from further up the sewer. His curiosity got the better of him as he walked towards the sound. When he reached a metal gate he was surprised to see two big red eyes staring at him.
"boy, I am the kyubbi no kitsune. I was the one who destroyed your towns population of shinobi. It was I who eradicated the forth hokage. It was I… ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING!!??"
the boy shook himself out of his shock and looked up at the beast. "why… why me? Why do I have to be the one that takes YOUR curse, why couldn't it have been some other kid? Why?"
The kyubbi looked at the child and sighed. 'sometimes children are soo kami damn hard to work with' "okay boy. I will help you with what you wish to do. Be hokage right? I will grant you the same power I granted another, years upon years ago. I will grant you the sharingan. But I will make yours the strongest their ever has been."
The boy looked up with surprise in his face. "why would you help me?"
"the only reason I am even doing this is because I don't want a weak vessel. I want the strongest their ever has been... and I want a favour. I want to be able to see things through your eyes, hear through your ears, smeall through your nose. I'm not so sure about taste though with all that ramen you eat..."
"what are you talking about, RAMEN IS A GIFT FROM THE GODS THEMSELVES!!!"
"yeah, yeah I get it. But come closer so I can grant both our wishes."
With that the tailed beast looked into the eyes of the boy and his eyes began to spin, showing one, then two and then three tomoes. It then looked as though the three points were joining with his pupil (A/N think kakashi's mangekyou) when the boy re-opened his eyes it was still there. "I have created it to be stronger than the normal mangekyou sharingan, and turned it into the eternal mangekyou. I hope you keep the secret to yourself, so I will show you an illusion that cannot be broken unless by others that know of it." The boy was surprised by the helpfulness of the great fox and was weary. "do not worry boy, for I have already taken care of your end of the bargain.. To reactivate your new eyes just consentrate your chakra and it will happen. To activate mangekyou just think of it. I will then teach you how to utilise the new powers that you will get. Now go back to the real world." Then the beast roared, sending massive amounts of chakra at the boy. As he was disappearing muttered "do not disappoint me… Uzamaki Naruto"
I could have written more… but I thought that it would be a good place to end it for now. Don't pester me about how long between updates coz I'm gonna be a tad bit slack with them. Okay, I'm not making naruto super strong, coz he's only lucky he won his fights before. He will be around cannon naruto's level after he gets jiraiya to train him on the way to tsunadai. I think that's a fair compromise. I don't like making people super strong just coz I can, then there is no point to writing it in my opinion.
(Edit- I fixed up the spacing problems and edited little bits that were wrong)
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